SWASAN FF : DAASTAAN(Part 7 updated on page no 26)

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Hii frds...happy independence day to all of u...M here to present u all a new swasan story...i know i know...i have to complete my TS na but will complete it soon

So now coming to my new story...

Death...the only reality of life but still we hate it because according to all of us life is beautiful...life is precious...so value it...kyunki zindagi toh ek baar hi milti hai...like really😲

I mean r u sure ki sirf ek baar milti hai...i don't think so...kai baar do baar bhi milti hai😉

Hey m not kidding...i m serious😈

Remember Om Shanti OM...according to SRK

Hamari life na filmon ki tarah hoti hai end mein sab thik ho hi jata hai...aur...aur agar thik na ho toh iska matlab picture abhi baaki hai mere dost😉

So now m presenting u all a story of love , sacrifice , betrayal , death n REINCARNATION

Yeah i admit that reincarnation is so unreal kind of concept but if u don't like it then plzzz STAY AWAY...but no negative comments

SO here is my new swasan FF

DAASTAAN

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Caracter Sketch

Shekhar Bose -he is an Indian but lives in UK

Sharmishtha Bose-shekhar's wife

Swara Bose-their only child

Dida-shomi's mother

Durga Parsad Singhania -shekhar's frd n his business partner

AP-DP's wife

Laksh Singhania-their only child...he n swara r getting married

Ram Prasad Maheshwari- a delhi based business man

Sujata Maheshwari-his wife

Sanskaar Maheshwari(SK)-their son

Uttara Maheshwari-their daughter

Ragini Gadodia-SK's best frd...lives with her dadi n dadaji

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DAASTAAN

PROLOGUE

Scene 1

(somewhere in London)

(A beautiful girl is sitting in front of the mirror...someone came there)

Shomi-swara tu kitni pyari lag rhi hai...aur tu kitni badi bhi ho gyi hai mera matlab aaj teri wedding hai

Swara-maa plzz aap mujhe emotional kar rahe ho...n m getting married to laksh yaar...he is my best frd n m sure he will be the best life partner

Dida-woh toh hai...chalo shomi baraat ane wali hai

(they both left from there)

Swara-ek ajeeb si bechaini ho rhi ha...pta nhi aaj kya hone wala hai

Scene 2

(Mumbai...an award function)

Host - award for the best young entrepreneur goes to Mr Sanskaar Maheshwari

(a guy in his mid 20's goes to the stage n recd the award)

SK-wow...finally...dont worry guys m not here to deliver some long n boring speech(everybody laughs) just one word thanks maa papa uttra n Ragini...have a nice night guys(n he went back to his seat)

Ragini-kuch bol nhi sakte the

SK-bola toh

Ragini(by giving him u r unbelievable look)-suna maine(monologue)iska kuch nhi ho sakta...pta nhi kon si bandi isey pasand karegi

Scene 3

(in London)

Panditji-kanya ko mandap mein laiye

Shomi-ji panditji

Laksh(in AP's ear)-maa kaisi lag rhi hai shona

AP-chup kar badmash...ley a gyi teri shona

(laksh was mesmerised by the girl who is soon going to be his wife)

(panditji starts chanting the mantras)

Laksh(in swara's ear)-maarne ka plan hai...bohot cute lag rhi ho

(swara smiles...suddenly she felt something)

Swara(monologue)-kya yeh sab pehle bhi hua hai...aisa kyun lga jaise this is not the first time(she closed her eyes n saw some flashbacks)

Panditji-ab pheron ke liye khade ho jaiye

(Swara was still sitting)

Pandit ji-beta khade ho jaiye

Swara(her eyes were still closed...n she saw a figure)-nhi plzz chod do usey

Laksh-shona what r u saying

Swara-(she was shivering n suddenly she shouted) RAGHU(n she fainted)

So guys tell me shall i continue

N if u want pm then like the prologue n send me a buddy request

Edited by SONAL30 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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OMG this is amazing
Esp when swara screams raghav. OMG please update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This seems masterpiece 😲
I feel like reading it all in one just like movie ..

Sonal m gonna disturb you alot now for quick updates.. and can even kidnap you and thn will make you update this 😆

Do PM me when you update next 😳

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow probably the best ff ever
Update fast I cant wait 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Saraa.

OMG this is amazing

Esp when swara screams raghav. OMG please update

thanks saraa😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow Sonal this is amazing yar...😃
Continue soon...😊

Very eager to know what happened and what ll happen...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vishi-

This seems masterpiece 😲
I feel like reading it all in one just like movie ..

Sonal m gonna disturb you alot now for quick updates.. and can even kidnap you and thn will make you update this 😆

Do PM me when you update next 😳

thanks vishi

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