SWASAN FF : DAASTAAN(Part 7 updated on page no 26) - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
#81
Nice update sona😊 it seems like jab we met😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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All the three parts was so superb yaar...
Their not Johk was so cute...
Hope sanskar will around the hotel somewhere...
Waiting for next part...
Plz pm me while updating next part...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow reincarnation concept love it..pm me too plz
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woww part 3 was amazing
loved it dear
waitng for next updates
do continue soon
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Awesome amazing beautiful superb sweet kya bolo... Just speechless... Read all the three parts in just one go very-2 interesting Sachi mein ... Just loved Their nok-jhok... They r so adorable aww want to read more so plz-2 update it soon and plz-2 PM me whenever u update it ... Thanks
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thanks for the lovely replies frds🤗
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DAASTAAN

Part 4

Scene-1

(she goes to the next room n knocked...a gunda type of guy opened the door)

Swara-aap log plzz(she saw the environment of that room...bear...ciggarattes...5 drunk guys)m sorry(she just turned to go back suddenly a guy pulled her inside)chodo mujhe plzz

(swara was trying hard to escape but those goons are strong n she is loosing...she was shouting for help n crying)

Swara-leave me plzz...chodo mujhe

Goon-bewkoof samjha hai kya

(swara saw him he was about to touch her...n then his lusty eyes...they all were animals...she stopped protesting n closed her eyes...suddenly she heard a loud scream n she opened her eyes)

Swara-sanskaar

(sanskaar was so angry n he was beating those goons n they all were begging for their life)

Sanskaar-teri himmat kaisey hui usey haath lagaaney ki...main tujhe jaan se maar dunga

(within seconds they all were lying on the ground)

Sanskaar(he held swara's hand)-lets go (n they closed the door n came down)

Swara-par taxi toh kharab hai n i guess they will chase us

Sanskaar-i know yaar (he saw a jeep)wo dekho

Swara-jeep

Sanskaar-hmm...lets go(they goes towards the jeep)waah chabi bhi hai

Swara(she heard a noise)-sanskaar they r coming

(sanskaar starts the jeep)

Goon 1-abey rook(he took out his pistol n shot them)

Goon 2-sirji woh toh gyye

Goon 1-arey toh pakdo unhe warna saab ji humein nhi chodengey

(sanskaar was driving so fast)

Jugnu-yeh toh sir ji madam ji theey...arey sirji mere paisey apna samaan toh lete jao main kya karunga

Scene-2

(next morning)

(at Indiragandhi International airport)

Ragini-where is laksh yaar...mobile mein picture to dekhi thi par hai kahaan

(then he saw a guy...she goes to him)

Ragini-laksh

Laksh-ragini

Ragini-yeah

Ragini n laksh(same time)-namastey(she greeted him)hii(he forwarded his hand for a handshake)

Laksh-ohh sorry namastey...lets go to the cafe n then talk

(they settled down in the cafe...waiter came)

Waiter-ur order sir

Ragya(together)-one cold coffee with ice cream for me(then they looked at each other n smiled)

Waiter-sure for both of u

Laksh-yeah(waiter went from there)hmm...so u love cold coffee with ice cream

Ragini-hmm...just love it...u too

Laksh-me too but swara hates it she like masala tea

Ragini-just like sanskaar...he only wants masala chai

Laksh-wow...vaisey did u talk to them

Ragini-nhi yaar...main subah se try kar rhi hoon...they r not even picking up my calls

Laksh-i also tried swara's no woh bhi nhi utha rhi hai...mainey land hotey hi try kiya...yeh dono bas thik hoon

Ragini-hmm

Waiter-sir ur order

Laksh-thanks

(they had their coffee n left for the hotel)

Scene-3

(outside a dhaba)

(sanskaar stopped the jeep...swara was sleeping)

Sanskaar-oye sleeping beauty wake up

Swara-where r we

Sanskaar-taj mahal par

Swara-shut up

Sanskaar-rajasthaan border shuru honey wala hai

Swara-but those goona...woh kahaan hai

Sanskaar(with an irritated look)-arey how do i know yaar

Swara-sanskaar m hungry

Sanskaar-dhaba hai na kuch toh milega

Swara-r u serious sanskaar...dhaba i mean just look at this place...so unhygienic

Sanskaar-ohh princess Victoria...khana hai toh khao warna jaaney do

Swara(monologue)-jeep mein dekhti hoon

(she was searching the jeep when she found a box)

Swara-sanskaar...look what i got

Sanskaar-kya Kohinoor diamond

Swara-see na...look at this box

Sanskaar-shayad apple hongey

Swara-how do u know

Sanskaar-arey look at these papers na...apples ko aisey hi store kartey hain

Swara(excitedly)-wow(n she opened the box)what the(with a disappointing look)salt

Sanskaar-kyaaa

Swara-yeah...namak hai

(sanskaar saw some white packets...he felt something fishy...he torned the packet n tasts that thing)

Sanskaar(with a terrified look)-crap

Swara-what...u never tasted salt kya

Sanskaar-swara yeh salt nhi hai

Swara-ohh u mean chuhe maarney ka powder...u ate hit...spit it...spit it right now

Sanskaar(with a can u plzz shut ur mouth look)-duffer this is drugs

Swara-kyaa

Sanskaar-tabhi usney hum par goli chalayi...i guess 4 to 5 crore ka hoga

Swara-tumhe bada pta hai

Sanskaar-haan this is my part time job...supplying drugs

Swara-sado mat

Sanskaar-crap...we r in a huge trouble

Swara-sanskaar...lets go to the police station n tell them

Sanskarr-yeah lets go...wait

Swara-what happen

Sanskaar-bad idea

Swara-matlab

Sanskaar-police ko pta hai

Swara-r u sure

Sanskaar-yep I m

Swara-how

Sanskaar-last night hamari taxi kharab honey se pehley humne baliya check post cross kia ab next check post rajasthan border hai...iskey beech mein koi short cut nhi hai sirf ek raasta hai

Swara-haan toh

Sanskaar-if they have crossed baliya check post toh it means police ne unhe chod diya...drungs honey ke baad bhi...toh police unke saath hai...aur ab agar hum rajasthan border mein enter karengey toh check post par pakdey jayenge

Swara-so now

Sanskaar-hum phas gyye hain...ek taraf kua doosri taraf khai...aagey jayengey toh check post par pakdey jaayenge aur agar peechey gyye toh

Swara-woh goons humein nhi chodengey

Sanskaar-hmmm

Swara-toh ab

Sanskaar-toh ab...

(precap - romantic moments between swasan😉)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow! the update was superb! Waiting for next part! 👏 ⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Haaye thanks... 😊 this is my most favourite story of SwaSan ... Loved it from the core of my heart 😳 beautifully written... Feeling like it is happening in front of my eyes... Really you wrote every scene so well ... 👏 ... Ok now come to the update... Wow just wow ... Thank God Sanskar saved Swara from those Goons but now they r in big trouble and I really hope so that this will not harm them just praying for them... On the other side the other love story is on the Way Ragini and Laksh's love story hmm good... But my favourites are Swara and Sanskar 😳 they are sweethearts... Precape OMG romance of SwaSan ❤️ my dil goes Dhak-2 Dhak-2 😳 ... Matlab jaldi update dens next part ka coz can't wait to read it ... Thanks for PM me and thanks for the wonderful update 👏
Edited by nicky13 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thnx sanky u svd my swara waiting 4 ur romantic swasans precap

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