SWASAN FF : DAASTAAN(Part 7 updated on page no 26) - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is so amazing 😳 Continue soon Sona 😳 And thanks for the pm 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow amazing update 👏 👏
the story is so interesting 👏
Loved it 😳
You're a superb writer 👏
Update soon, can't wait for Swasan first meeting 😳
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Awesome update Sonal 👏
The story is getting so interesting and exciting
So Priya and Raghu are born again for each other
I love it 😊 and I hope Swasan fall in love soon 😳
Thanks for the PM meri jan
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omg i like yr concept frsh n new
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Beautiful FF loved it
Update next chapter soon
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Good start sonu.Waiting for the next part.😃
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Wow amazing update
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hi girl plz cont soon i cant wait plzzz update soon
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DAASTAAN

Part 2

Scene 1

(at delhi Airport)

(swara was in hurry so she was running...while running suddenly she bumped into someone n they both falls on the ground)

Swara-what the hell...my phone

Sanskaar-ur fault

Swara-like really tum girey

Sanskaar-bhaag tum rahi thi

Swara-u know what u r blind

Saskaar-yeah right...i guess u r the one who is wearing glares n that too inside the airport...toh andha kon hua

Swara-don't act smart okk

Saskaar-look who's talking...jhagda tumne shuru kiya

Swara-mujhe na tumharey muh hi nhi lagna...n u know what mainey suna tha Indians guest ki respect kartey hain...whats that...atithi dev something like that right

Sanskaar-its atithi devo bhava n it means in India guest is equivalent to god

Swara-really...actually i can see that...kitni respect hai na guest ki

Sanskaar-tum guest kam pest jada lag rhi ho

Swara-tumne mujhe pest kaha...u u u r mammal

Sanskaar-thanks...better than cockroach...i mean pest

Swara-tumne mujhe cockroach kaha...tum tum hippopotamus

Sanskaar-still...better than cockroach(with a smirk)

Swara-u don't have etiquettes

Sanskaar-wo wo wo wo etiquettes haan...com'on lady do u know the meaning of etiquettes...n as u said ki tum hamari pest sorry guest ho...wanna ask something

Swara-what

Sanskaar-wapas kab ja rhi ho

Swara-go to hell

Sanskaar-thanks...because hell is better than ur company

Swara(with an irritated look)-whatever

(n she went from there...she hired a taxi n goes to a hotel)

Scene 2

(at Bose Mansion)

Shekhar-what...India

Laksh-ji uncle

AP-laksh r u mad

DP-woh kabhi India nhi gayi hai

Shomi-laksh...do u have any idea ki tumne kya kiya hai...u have done a huge blunder

Dida-laksh shona ko kuch nhi pta hai...u know na woh kitna problem main fansta hai kon sambhalega ussey

Laksh-plzzz shekhar uncle...try to understand agar w o hi jati na toh wo hamesha adhoori si rehti...n she is not a kid

Shomi-pta nhi laksh...but anyways call kiya usne

Laksh-not now

AP-karey toh batana haemin

Laksh-sure mom

Scene 3

(outside the hotel)

Swara-yaar...nice hotel...but my phone...laksh pareshaan ho rha hoga(suddenly she bumped into someone)what the...u hippopotamus

Sanskaar-not again...u cockroach

Swara-don't u dare

Sanskaar-what

Swara-stop calling me that

Sanskaar-what r u doing here

Swara-woh toh mujhe tumse puchna chahiye...tum aur itney bade hotel ke bahaar...lemme guess watchman ho na

Sanskaar-watchman hoga tumhare papa ka damaad

Swara-papa par mat jao

Sanskaar-ur IQ level is so high yaar

Swara-i know(suddenly she rememberd his words)wait laksh is not watchman ok

Sanskaar-laksh haan...waisey tell me something uski lige ka koi aur laksh nhi tha jo usne tumhe chuna(with a ROFL look)

Swara-u know what just let it be...bye

(she went from the... inside the hotel)

Receptionist-how can i help u man

Swara-i want a room n can u plzz tell me is there any flight to jaigarh

Receptionist-flight to jaigarh

Swara-yeah...if u have any idea

(ragini entered)

Ragini-sorry but domestic flights band hai...n that too for 3 days

Swara-no

Ragini-yes...urgent hai kya

Swara-yeah...matlab mujhe jana hai

Ragini-thik hai hum aapke liye taxi arrange kara dengey...u can go by road

Swara-thanks...thank u so much...ohh hii m swara

Ragini-hii m ragini

Swara-aapka hotel hai

Ragini-nahi mere frd ka

Swara-mujhe ek international call karni thi...n my phone...all because of that hippo

Ragini-hippo

Swara-no like...nothing

Ragini-u can use my phone

Swara-r u sure

Ragini-yeah

Swara(took ragini's phone n she dialled laksh's no)

Laksh-hello

Swara-lucky

Laksh-shona...where r u yaar...kabse phone try kar rha hoon...n wait yeh kiska no hai

Swara-meri frd ka

Laksh-ur frd...india mein

Swara-leave it na ghar mein sab kaisa hai...is everything alright

Laksh-yeah everything is fine...shona u r fine na...dekh tune promise kiya hai tu 20 - 25 din mein laut ayegi

Swara-arey haan baba pakka...chal ab bye

Laksh-accha bye...but call me okk

Swara-yeah

Receptionist-mam ur keys

Swara-ur phone...thanks

Ragini-ur welcome...aap apne phone de dijiye hum thik kara dengey

Swara-thanks a tonn yaar...here is my phone

Ragini-sarwat mam ko unkey room mein le jao n robin ko bolo yeh phone thik karwayega

Sarwat-sure mam...mam this way

Scene 4

(at Bose mansion)

Shomi-laksh r u sure na she is fine

Laksh-yeah aunty...uski frd ka no tha...maine save bhi kiya hai

Shomi-uski frd ko call kar lena

Laksh-sure aunty

Scene 5

(someone knocked swara's room)

Swara-come in

Robin-mam ur phone...n yeah mam taxi aney wali hai...aap taiyaar ho jaiyey

Swara-thanks

(ragini entered)

Ragini-all set

Swara-thanks yaar

Ragini-its ok...athithi devo bhava

(swara remembered sanskaar)

Swara(monologue)-what the hell...why m thinking about that hippo

Ragini-chalein

Swara-yeah

(outside the hotel)

Ragini-woh rahi taxi...ek second call hai

Swara-sure(she goes towards the taxi)

(Sanskaar entered)

Sanskaar(to taxiwala)-chalein

Swara-tum

Sanskaar-tum

(precap-trip to jaigarh

Edited by SONAL30 - 9 years ago

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