SwaLak FF By SwaLak AT Members.. DT Note pg5 - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
DIALOGUE WRITING:
sequence: both dash against each in a hurry while going in a corridor and hurt their head
and swara's books fall down
swara: cant u see and walk properly??😡 ouch my head!!
laksh: ooh! u could have also done that!
swara: it was u who came the wrong way!! and swoops down to pick her books up
laksh: no it wasnt me
and tries to help her
swara: no thanks. i can do it myself.
and snatches the book from his hand.
laksh gets irritated.
("nautanki raani jaise lagti hai) inside his mind and pouts.
laksh: hmmm fine. do it urself.
swara: loser!! and takes her books from der and walks swiftly from there and which leaves laksh angry cauz her comment



laksh- yeh nautanki samajthi kya hein apne aap ko...

omi- kya hua bhai tu kab se khud se baath karne lag gaya😆
hua kya?????
laksh- yaar yeh swara ne toh dimag kharab kar rakha hein mera...patha nahi kya samajthi hein apne aapko...kuch bhi bolo toh attitude dikhane lag jaathi hein...nautanki rani...

omi- hmmm...lagta hein kisi ke man mein kuch kuch hone lag gaya hein...
laksh- pagal hein tu????? tujhe lagta hein ki mere man mein is nautanki ke liye feelings ayegi...

omi- bhai dekh tune kitne saari ladkiyo dekha hein...lekin kabhi bhi tu un sab ke bare mein itna baath nahi kartha...lekin swara ke baare mein tu mujse har do min mein baath kartha hein...bhai tere man mein uske liye feelings aane lag gayi hein.tu maane ya na maane...

laksh- bakwass band kar apna...haan u r ri8 feelings hein uske ke liye patha hein kya????hatred
khush...ab chale...

swara(Monologue) : yeh laksh bhi na!! stupid dumbo!!
why does he always appear before me!!?"
shayad i hate him so much that i dont even want to see his face! hope i dont see him around so soon!! kuch ajeeb sa lag raha hai!!" and thinks abt the dashed wala incident!


laksh(monologue): "iss omi ka muh mein thala lagana hai!! bakwas toh bolti rehta hai! mein uss drama queen se... uff! just too impossible, illogical, irrational and idiotical!!" its better if i dont think abt her!! even thinking abt her makes me irritated! her thoughts are corrupting my brain!"

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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
At the lecture hall- lakshya is late as usual 😆
Professor- Mr. Lakshya kahan they aap?
L-voh professor...
P-baas go and sit.
Lakshya winked and went near omi when-
P-stop lakshya,go sit next to her.
to lakshyas surprise it was swara.
SandL together- but sir...
P-no buts go and sit!
Lakshya grudgingly sits next to her.
L-Tum bench ke corner se chipak kyun rahi Ho chipkali? I don't bite 😉
S-you bark don't bite great! Concentrate ahead
Par ab kya rahe swara baju Mai hi toh how can he concentrate on the board 😉

-SANS
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
where r u all gone swalak fans ?? so strange
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
Superb👏
Just loved each story😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
The makers of this fanfic are requested to edit the chapters to delete the negative name calling references from all the updates

if this is not done so in the next 24 hours this fanfic will be closed

Artemisia
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome story. .
Loved reading it. .
Beautiful. ..

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