SwaLak FF By SwaLak AT Members.. DT Note pg5

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Posted: 10 years ago
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swalak imagination scenes( i want dis type of scene)

so after nagya marriage der is a reception in maheswari house..
so everyone are congratulating nagya ( nagini is very happy and laksh is very sad)
den the gadodias and the bose enters in the reception
and den swara enters tooo

nagini is shocked to see swara alive
and laksh is just staring at her..he just want to go near to swara and want to ask her y did she did dis al with him but he cant

swara comes to congratulate nagya
swara: congratulation ragini ( she hugs her and whispers in her hear ...kya hua kush nhi ho mujhe zinda dekh kar😆)
den swara stares at laksh seeing dis nagini is jealous 😆(Swalak eyes locks☺️)
omi to comes and congratulate dem
omi : hie swara kaisse ho?and u are looking very beautiful
swara : thankyou ..mein acche hu and tum...

den suddenly der is a announcement to come on the dance floor and dance
omi : swara will u dance with me😛
swara : she hesitates but den omi request her some many times so she says yes😛

so both go on the dance floor and guess wat which dance dey are doing ( couple dance😆😆 yeh dekh kar laksh jale ga nhi toh kya hoga 😆😆)

seeing dis laksh gets anger and he takes nagini with her on the dance floor..( nagini is very happy) )
but seeing swara dancing with someone dat too so close he leave nagini and go to swara( everyone is shocked😆)

laksh : may i
omi says offcourse

swara den tries to leave from der but laksh pulls her ( laksh mom and nagini ka expression dekhne layak tha🤣)

so dey both start dancing very passionately and dey get very cozy cozy ( nagini expression😭)
😭

it seems like swalak are lost in each other ..☺️

BG music is

Main toh bas teri chahat mein
Chahoon rehna sada
Main toh bas teri qurbat mein
Chahoon rehna sada
Saya bhi tera mein
Hone na doon juda..
Maine theh kar liya

Tere ishq pe..
Tere waqt pe..
Bas haq hai ik mera
Teri rooh pe tere jism pe
Bas haq hai ik mera
Bas haq hai ik mera
Bas haq hai ik mera


so now someone else continue 😆😆


-Bushra
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb Bushra 👏

Thn ...
Music stops.. SwaLak were damn close.. their eyelock..
Swara came back to senses she pushed Lucky..

Swara in tears .. leave from their..

Lucky following her.. aaj mujhe mere sawalo ka jawab chahiye..

Nagini - Lakshya suniye..
but guests surrounded Nagini.. she got stuck there.. 🤣

Swara out of hall.. walking on road thinking about what just happened.. she was remembering their dance..

Lucky - Swara ruko.. he came from behind and held Swara's hand.. he turned her.. now she faced him..

Swara - Lakshya choro mujhe ..
Lakshya - Kab ka toh chor hi diya.. ( remembers Swara's video and his forced marriage with nagini )

Swara - vo sab kya tha Lakshya?

Lucky- Voi toh main puchna chahata hoon Swara.. if you don't love me thn why your heart was beating fast when I came close to you.m when we were dancing..

He pulled her towards him and they are too close now..

Lucky - aur abhi bhi tumhare Dil k dhadkane itni tez kyun hai ? jab tumhe koi fark hi nai parta?

Their intense eyelock --

music in background - Paas aaye..
Dooriyaan phir bhi kam naa hui
Ek adhuri si hamari kahani rahi
Aasmaan ko zameen, ye zaroori nahi
Jaa mile.. jaa mile..
Ishq saccha wahi
Jisko milti nahi manzilein.. manzilein..

Swara breaks the eye contact with him..

Swara - Kaisa pyaar Lakshya? tumne toh mujh pe trust hi nai kiya

Lakshya - No Swara I alwaysv trusted you but it was you who broke my trust my heart damnit by sending that video..

Swara - maine koi video nai send ki.. she cries..
you know what Lakshya U & ME its over..

Lakshya - Socha toh Maine bhi kuch aisa hi tha but tumhari aankho mein dikhta hai YOU LOVE ME .. YOU STILL LOVE ME

Swara in tears no .. I don't love you.. and leave me.. she pushes him and turns to go..

Lakshya - You love me Swara .. You still love me..
Truck was coming from other root.. it was about to hit Lakshya..

Swara senses something wrong..
she turns and pulls Lucky towards her .. both fell down .. they roll roll roll.. and stops Lakshya on top of her.. their eyelock.. both in tears..

both lost in each other remembering their first meet .. their close moments


music in background -
Rang thhe, noor tha
Jab kareeb tu tha
Ek jannat sa tha, yeh jahaan
Waqt ki ret pe kuch mere naam sa
Likh ke chhod gaya tu kahaan


Lucky frees her.. ..
Swara - Tum theek ho? are you mad? abhi accident ho jata toh?

Lucky- smiles and says YOU LOVE ME.. YOU STILL LOVE ME SHONA..

Swara in tears..
Hamari adhuri kahani..
Hamari adhuri kahani..


now someone plz continue 😆


-Vishi
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Then all of sudden it start raining
Laksh holds swara hand and run away sum safe place ...both are standing holds each other hands and swara starts crying and said ..
Tumne mera intezaar kyu nahin kiya
Bas itna Hi pyaar karte the

Laksh hold her tighly and said ...
Swara us video ko dekhkar ani freeze ho gaya tha aur samaz Hi nahin paaya ki mere saath kya ho raha hai

Ab koi faida nahin in baato ka hum Ab ek nahin ho sakte ,swara pushed him and ran away

Laksh follows her and stop her and say
Mai abhi bi sirf tumse pyaar karta hu ,aur Mujhe malum hai tum bi
Swara:Nahin karti mai
Laksh:Meri aakhon mai kahkar dekho
Swara :leave me laksh just leave me
Laksh :Pahle mere sawal ka jawab do
Agar tum mujse pyaar nahin karti to tumhare aankho mai yeh aansu kyu ha
Swara :Tum bahut bure ho ,tumne mera dil toda hai
She pushed him again n again and then hug him tightly and said yes I love u ,can't stop myself to loving U
They had their first lip kiss

BG

Mohabbat barsa dena aaj
Saawan aaya hai
Tere aur mere milne ka
Mausam aaya hai


-Sonia
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Posted: 10 years ago
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The scene was lovely.
Two pieces of a broken heart united at last.
Swara-lakshya slowly realised what they were doing a broke off.
Lakshya said swara tears rolling down her eyes 😭
Shona said lakshya holding her hands...
We are meant to be...nobody can take that away from us.
Par Ragini started swara.
Lakshya shushed her and said nagin ka naam mat lo 🤣

-Sans
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Originally posted by: bushra2222

The scene was lovely.
Two pieces of a broken heart united at last.
Swara-lakshya slowly realised what they were doing a broke off.
Lakshya said swara tears rolling down her eyes 😭
Shona said lakshya holding her hands...
We are meant to be...nobody can take that away from us.
Par Ragini started swara.
Lakshya shushed her and said nagin ka naam mat lo 🤣

-Sans



jst luv it😳😳😳
nagin ka mat lo🤣
superb everyone gr8 job...👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Laksh: "don't swara, don't even mention that! The thought is killing me. She can only become the namesake wife of mine but my body and soul will always be urs, FOREVER AND EVER" and wipes away her tears,

And kisses her in the forehead.

Swara lost in his eyes.

Bg: jo tumera hamdard hai, jo tumera hamdard hai

Teri dhakhano hai zindagi meri

Quahishen abi teri duayeen meri

Kitna anokha bandhan hai yeh

Teri meri jaan toh ek hui

loutungi yaah bas tera yahaan vadah hai mera marbhi jaoon kahi

laksh: "I will not allow u to waste ur precious tears anymore. I will put an end to our agony. I will make everyone pay whoever tried to hurt you and this is my promise to u shona. Ab hamein koi alag nahi kar sakhtha" and hugs her.


-janvi

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Then they return to MM
Nagini comes and says : Laksh ji ...
Laksh interrupts her and says : mein Laksh Maheshwari yeh announce karta hun ki Swara Gadodia meri biwi banegi

Swara gets shocked
Ragini cries ( she deserves it )and runs upstairs .
AP : Laksh yeh kya mazak ha !?! Is na jhaeise ne tujhe dhoka dya or tu ...
Laksh : ma ! Ap meri hone wali biwi ke bare me ase baat nahi kar sakte

Swara : Laksh ...
Laksh goes to mandir and brings sindoor and fills her maang .

To be continued ...

(Sorry I'm not really good at writing Hindi so sorry if I misspelled words )

-Nabila
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Gadodias and maheswaris are speechless with laksh's act, but happy that laksh and swara are happy so accepted them except for AP.

Ap: "laksh tumne ragini ke sath shadi ki hai, unki sath hi phere bhi li hai, kya tumne woh sab bhool gayi? Log kya kahenge ab??"

Laksh: "maa mujhe is society se koi lena dena nahi hai. Mujhe sirf itna pata hai ki, swara mera sath hogi. Aur uss shadi ko mein, shaadi hi nahi maanti. Woh sirf ek samjotha hai. Bas aur kuch nahi"

Ap: "tumara yeh maan na ya nahi maan na se kuch nahi badlega laksh"

Laksh: " sab badal saktha hai maa. Yeh rishta sirf aur sirf aapki aur uss nautanki rani ki drama ki wajah se hui hai. Mein swara ko mera dil se patni maanta hoon. Its enough for me. Haan waise bhi, ab tak humne yeh marriage register bhi nahi ki hai. So kanoon ke aankhon mein bhi who chudail meri patni nahi hai."

AP is just shocked at laksh's words and is not even able to reply to his retort.

Dp: "everything is fine now Annapurna. Like laksh says, we have not yet registered the marriage. so first thing in the morning we will go to the register office and register swara and laksh's marriage."

Everyone are happy and again go into dance mode. AP is not just able to accept that.

Even though everyone are nearby swara and laksh, they just have eyes for each other.

Parineetha: " devar ji, waise abhi aapki pasand ki jaise shaadi bhi ho gayi. So what are u waiting for?? Apne dulhan ko lekar aapki kamrae chaliyae. Nahi nahi, wait kijiyae, hum swara ko thaiyar karke le aayenge"

Both swara and laksh are blushing at her comment.

Laksh: "no no, my shone looks always beautiful, sajne sawarne ki koi zaroot nahi."

And lifts his shona, the precious gift of his life in his hands, and goes towards the step and towards his room.

Bg: Chahoon bhi toh main kaise kahoon
Saari jo baatein dil kehta hai
Lehar sapno ki kaise ginu
Dariya behta hi rehta hai


-Jhanvi

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laksh- swara mujhe sab kuch sach sach batao abhi aur isi vaqt.
aur us video ke baare mein bhi batao jo tumne mujhe bejha tha.

swara- laksh meine koi video nahi bejha mera phone toh mere paas hein bhi nahi.mandir jaathe vaqt raagini mujhse phone le liya tha.

laksh- kya?😲 lekin usne toh kaha tha ki voh tumhare sath nahi thi.

swara- voh sab jhoot tha laksh tumhe sach patha hi kaha hein.

laksh - swara mujh batao ki kya hua.

swara- laksh meine toh sapne mein bhi nahi socha tha ki meri apni behen mere saath aesa karegi.
jab usne mujhse sab kuch kaha toh mujhe apne zindagi ka sabse bada shock laga. laksh usi ne hume alag karni ki koshish ki thi pichle ek mahine se. voh sochti hein ki meine uski saari khushi cheen li aur phir usne mujhe push kiya dam ke upar se aur mein gir gayi. voh keh rahi thi ki voh tumse bohut pyaar karthi hein. agar mujhse kaha hotha tho mein khud.(laksh puts his finger on her lips to stop her frm saying that)

laksh- khabardar swara tumne aesa kaha toh.
voh chudail mujhse pyaar nahi karthi😡 she's an obsessed soul😡
uski himmat kese hui tumhare saath aese karne ki😡mein use chodunga nahi swara.
use mein uski asli jagah dikha kar hi rahunga😡😡😡

swara- lekin laksh voh tumhari patni hein

laksh- patni my foot😡😡
swara mein humesha se tumse pyaar kartha tha aur humesha kartha rahunga.😳😳
tum se meri saanse judi hein swara.
hum dono ek dusre ko complete karthe hein swara😳😳
tumhare bina mein jee nahi paunga swara.
tum meri sab kuch ho swara.
mujhe chodke mat jaana swara.
(swara coudn't take it any more and hugged him tightly like it was the end)

swara- lucky mein tumse se door nahi reh sakthi.
I LOVE U

laksh- I LOVE TOO MY SHONA.

THEY STAYED THEIR LIKE THAT EVEN THE STARS AND THE MOON WERE SHINING SO BRIGHTLY AS IF THEY WERE SHOWERING THEIR BLESSINGS ON THIS BEAUTIFUL COUPLE.
AS THE SAYING GOES IF U WISH SOMETHING FRM UR HEART THEN THE WHOLE UNIVERSE CONSPIRES TO HELP U ACHIEVE IT.
HERE BOTH SWARA AND LAKSH WISHED FOR THEIR UNION. LETS SEE WAT AWAITS THEM...😊


-abshcool(shruti)

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