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Nabila

@NabilaIslam

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

They are heading towards their room ( Laksh filled Swaras maang ).when they reach their they see Nagini .

Laksh : tum yaha kya jar rahi ho !?

Ragini : Laksh ji ,yeh hamara kamra ha

Laksh : Nahi yeh mera air Swara ka kamra ha

Ragini : Par apne humse shadi ki ha

Laksh : ha ki ha ,majhbhori me ki ha . yeh lo sign karo aur dafa ho jao

Ragini : yeh kya ha ? gets *shocked * and cries

Ap hame divorce de rahe ha

Swara : law doesn't know about this marriage so its not legal but for your confirmation we made this papers .

Laksh : exactly , sign it ,if you really love me do this

Ragini : thik ha

Laksh : ab dafa ho jau

Ragini leaves with the nag that the lamp giene gave her( it's the nag that the giene gave her from the ff part of sans )

background :

Main naag tu nagin

Nahi jeena tere been

Saath raat din ka

Saathi chhute na

Tu naag main nagin

Nahi jeena tere been

Saath raat din ka

Saathi chhute na

Tu hai meri dilruba

Main hu tera deewana

-Nabila

Edited by NabilaIslam - 10 years ago

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bushra2222

@bushra2222

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

new ff😭😭

😭😭scene: swara goes to talk to laksh but he push her and says dat i hate u swara i hate u..both swara and laksh have tears in deir eyes😭😭😭

laksh and swara waliking on the road and its raining both are heart broken and remembering their moments😭😭

laksh is trying to forget all the cute nokh johk moments but he is not able to do...he sits down and cry very bitterly ...

bg music

Teri yaadon mein likhe jo lafz dete hai sunayi

Beetay lamhe poochte hai kyun hue aise judaa
Khuda, khuda mila jo yeh faasla hai
Khuda tera hi yeh faisla hai
Khuda hona tha woh ho gaya
Jo tune tha likha

Tujhe bhula diya oh
Tujhe bhula diya oh
Tujhe bhula diya oh
Phir kyun teri yaadon ne
Mujhe rula diya oh
Mujhe rula diya

on the other hand swara reaches badi and goes in her room and lock the door and sees laksh pic and says ...laksh i love u..mein ne kuch galat nhi kiya..i am sorry dat i didnt reach on time ..i am sorry for hurting u...

Bg music

Ve changa nahion keeta beeba
Ve changa nahion keeta beeba
Dil mera tod ke
Ve bada pachhtaiyaan akhaan
Ve bada pachhtaiyaan akhaan
Naal tere jod ke

Main tenu samjhawan ki
Na tere bina lagda jee

😭😭

i will never forgive naigni for dis ..she ruined my swalak life...she shld die 😡😡

-Bushra

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Sudharsan

@-Sud-

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Loved all the Ffs written above

Even I want to write...

How to do it ? I should send u bushra ?

And it's like continuing the story wriiten by others ?

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bushra2222

@bushra2222

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: -Sud-
Loved all the Ffs written above
Even I want to write...
How to do it ? I should send u bushra ?

And it's like continuing the story wriiten by others ?

yup u can continue here and post it...no need to send me...

if u want u can continue or u want to write a new one den u can do dat aslo😊

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Shona

@Shanaia

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

New FF coming up...written by Bushras and mines combo efforts😳😳

And with Shruti's twist ka tadka in it😛

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pushpakala

@jhanvibella

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Shanaia
New FF coming up...written by Bushras and mines combo efforts😳😳
And with Shruti's twist ka tadka in it😛

wow waiting for it!! jaldi karo na shona 😉😛😆 wanna reread it again 😳

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Shona

@Shanaia

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

laksh shld grab swara and shld ask her y did she married sanskaar...didnt she loved him..y she left him on the wedding day...y swara y did u dis ?

jahake bhi mein tumhse nafrat nhi kar para hu...

swara plz mere sawalo ka jawab do

do u know how much it hurts to see u with sanskaar 😭

-BUSHRA

And Swara would breaks down in tears seeing lakshya like that so she would hug him

and Lakshya would be so surprised but he would hug Swara back...but then Swara will realise what she is doing and she would run from there weeping and Lakshya would hold the earring that fell from Swara's ear and will smile and say.

"Mujhe pta tha tum aaj bhi mujh se pyaar krti ho"❤️

-SHANAIA

Laksh talking to himself : i know something is wrong...swara mujhese kuch chupa rahe hai...

mera di lhamesha se kheta hai ke swara mujhe aissse chodhk kar nhi ja sakhti ..i need to find out

itne dinno ke baad der was smile on laksh face

Swara apne room main ho gi jab usay pta chlay ga k Sanskaar ne Lakshya se ldai ki hai to vo Sanskaar p bohot gussa ho gi ku k usy Lakshya ki chot ka bhi khyaal ho ga.or vo jb ye baat sanskaar se kahay gi to Lakshya un dono ki baat sun le ga..vo samajh jaye ga k mamla kuch or hai😉

-BUSHRA

Edited by Shanaia - 10 years ago

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Shona

@Shanaia

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Then he will concentrate on everything which happend with swalak rewind flashback of drugs and dida and alll

den he willl connect everything and will say jab jab swaa wired behave karti and all jab waha par ragini zarur hoti the..kahi aisssa toh nhi ke ...ragini ne yeh sab kiya and dida sach bol rahe th e kya ..waise bhi bose family jhuth nhi bolti..kya sach mein ragini is behind all dis ..i have to find out ...

actuallly wedding day par hua kya tha...

he goes down and see swara and ragini making dinner and all..so he says swara mujhe kuch bateygi nhi de he turns to go out den he again turns back and se ragini putting salt in swara food 😆😆

laksh expression 😲

so next scene everyone is on dinning table ...swara and ragini serves food ...everyone eat ragini food and say wow and all but laksh doesnt eat ...

so it turn to eat food which swara made ..AP eats dat food and she says cheee yeh kahane mein namak dala hai zehre ..laksh is seeing ragini face dat she is happy wen everyone are taunting swara ..

laksh takes the food which swara made and eats it ...everyone looks at him even swara is hairan

-BUSHRA

Phir Swara preshani se Lakshya ko dekhti hai cause Lakshya itna salty or kadwa khana kha rha hota hai...Swara samajh jati hai k Lakshya us ka bharam rkh rha hai to us ki ankhon main aansu aa jaty hain

Vo Lakshya ki chair ki taraf bhagti hai or us k kareeb apni knees pr beth jati hai or usy pani deti hai...Lakshya usy dekh kr muskurata hai or ek or bite leta hai.toh Swara apna sr nhi main hilati hai...vo Lakshya ko ishara krti hai k mt khao bt Lakshya puri plate finish krta hai or Swara k diya huay glass se pani peeta hai.Itna kadwa khana kha kr us ki ankhon se bhi aansu a rhy hoty hain

Or DP Swara ko Lakshya k pas zameen pr yun bethy dekh or un dono ko rotay dekh kr😳 heraan ho jatay hain😲

-SHANAIA

Edited by Shanaia - 10 years ago

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Shona

@Shanaia

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Laksh :mujhe swara ka khana bhut accha laga

everyone are shocked...

laskh den goes from der...

ragini start crying de nsab jake dilasa dete hai and swara ko gusse mein dekhte hai...

everyone goes form der...

swara is crying thinking abt how laksh ate the food and all😭😭

den swara goes in kitnchen and eat the same food which had ...and she sayd itna gandha khana laksh ne srif mere liye kaha...i was wrong mein abhi laksh ko usse nagiin ke sath nih rehne dungi i will unite my parents and will get my love back..

den she sees the food and eats all the food ..even she had ters in her eyes...den she sees laksh holding water glass ...she is shocked to see him ..she try t ogoes from der put laksh holds her hand ..he make her drink water and wipes her tears and say i know swara i hav hurted u a lot ...i am really sorry but now i will never ever hurt u and kisse ko bhi nhi hurt nhi karne dunga...

swara says leave my hand and she goes from der

laksh: shona meine ek baar galti ke ha itumhara sath na dehkar but ab woh galti sudarne ka waqt aagaya hai..ragini now u will meet lucky 😎 the guy whose love u have snatched 😈

-BUSHRA

Edited by Shanaia - 10 years ago

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Shona

@Shanaia

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Next day when Swara and ragini prepares for Puja,ragini puts diya where Swara's dress is.

Swara's dupatta catches fire but she is unaware.

Swara is putting sindoor in the Puja plate when everyone comes there.As usual Lakshya first looks at Swara and he is shocked to see her dupatta on fire.He yells "Swaraaa."

and run towards her.

Lakshya reaches Swara and throws her dupatta away.As Swara is not with dupatta,so to protect her modesty he pulls her towards him...Swara is shocked at the turn of events and as Lakshya pulls her in his arms,the sindoor in her hand flies up and sprinkles on both of them😳😳

Lakshya hugs Swara tightly.Ragini starts weeping and everyone just stares at them with shock.Then Lakshya bends down still hugging Swara.As he bends Swara looks into his eyes and is lost.Lakshya grabs a nearby light-pink decoration curtain which looks like a chunri and wraps it around Swara.☺️

He then whispers in her ear "I'll never let any harm to come to you." and goes from there😳😳

-SHANAIA

Edited by Shanaia - 10 years ago