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Posted: 9 years ago
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DP ask watz happening here 😡 laksh says plz dont ask today anything...

laksh ask swara i know swara u wer never wrong..i know there must be a reason behind not reaching on wedding day ..i know i did a big mistake but not trusting u...btu plz plz plz swara tell me wat happened on dat dat...

swara looks at laksh shockingly..

swara says i said na before also ..laksh say i know dis all a lie..


plz plz plz swara i beg u plz say wat happen he goes on his knees and beg swara dat plz tell kya hua tha?swara start crying seeing laksh like dis...


laksh say tumhe hamre pyaar ka wasta batao kya hua tha...

swara says i went mamdir on dat day with ragini and den swara tells everyone how ragini pushes her and all and how she made dat video and how all she gave her drugs...

laksh looks at ragini 😡

ragini laksh ji yeh sab jhuth hai mein aissa nih kiya she catches laskh hand and say swara mujhe fasa rahe hai and all..laksh getys more angry and pushes ragini so badly dat she falls on the floor


lakssh say how dare u ? u tried to kill my love...u ruined everything between us...and dont tell swar is lying ...i saw dat day wen u was adding salt in swara's food i knew kuch toh gadh badh hai but i didnt knew tum itne gandhe harkat kar sakhti ho 🤢

i am sorry swara i dindnt tried to listen to u ..isse hath se meine is ragini ko sindhor and magalsutra pehnaya tha ..issse hath se meine apne shona ko dhake mara tha...dis hand need punishment ..he goes in the kitchen ..on the gas..and den he tries to burn his hand 😭😭

everyone say stop laksh dont do dis..swara says plz laksh dont do dis laksh says nhi i will never forgive my self ...i hate my self ...swara says tumhe meri kasam and den swara pulls his hand ..she ask parineeta to bring medical box ...


ragiin says to Ap dat swar is lying usne laksh par kala jadu kar diya hai amd all

ragini says agaar aissa hu toh sabut dekhao swara...


and here comes sanskaaar


sanskaar: sabut mere bas hai raginii..everyone turns behind...


sanskaar: tell everyone dat how did sangin made plan and all


sanskaar says see dis video: yeh video woh wala hai jaha ragini swara ko marne ke khoshis karti hai ..



everyone are shocked

sanskaar say ragini puchogi nih kaha se aaya yeh video


he says upar wale ke ghar mein dair hai but andher nih

he says dat one small boy have removed dis video..he was so sacred seeing ur harkat dat he ran away but dekho kaisse umar wale ne woh video mere tak pahucha diya



-BUSHRA
Edited by Shanaia - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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When Laksh says this,the door of MM opens and Gadodias and Boses come there...
Everyone sees the video and Shekhar in anger slaps ragini hard...

Swara tries to stop him but he says "Nhi Swara aaj tum hume nhi roko gi ku k hum ne ghlt beti pr bharosa kia to aj sza bhi usay main hi doon ga"He slaps ragini again..

Then DP says" Hum soch bhi nhi saktay thy Shekhar sahab k aap ki yeh SANSKARI beti itni ghatiya aur neech harkat kr skti hai.Hum ne toh apne betay Sanskaar ko us cheez k liye maaf nhi kia jo us ne ki hi nhi.to hum ap ki is giri hui ldki ko kesay maaf kr skty hain js ne hmaray betay ki zndagi barbaad krne ki koshish ki or hmari honay wali bahu k saath itna ghinona kaam kia"

Dadi begs DP to forgive ragini but he shuts her up "Bohot bol chukay aap log.Anupurna..tum ne dekha...jis ladki ko tum Sanskari maanti thi vo ktni neech nikli...or jis ladki ko tum bura kehti thi,vo ktni saaf dil or achi nikli"

He goes towards Swara and blesses her and says "Hum janty hain tum or Sanskaar sirf doston ki trah ho.Is liye hum aaj ye ailaan krty hain k Swara Bose hi hmaray ghar ki bahu bnay gi.Swara hi SWARA LAKSHYA MAHESHWARI bnay gi"😳😳

Lakshya goes to Shomi and Dida and ask for forgiveness.They smile at him and blesses him.

Lakshya looks at Swara who is looking at ragini and weeping.He calls her lightly "Shona"
She looks at him and he opens her arms.
She runs towards him and hugs him tightly.He envelops her in his arms and says, I'll always be there for you Shona because I love you"

Swara smiles with tears and says "I love you more"

Lakshya laughs and hugs her tightly and says"I love you the most"❤️

Everyone smile seeing them like this and Swara and Lakshya remain in each other arms feeling safe and content

THE END😳😳

-SHANAIA
Edited by Shanaia - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
Phir Swara preshani se Lakshya ko dekhti hai cause Lakshya itna salty or kadwa khana kha rha hota hai...Swara samajh jati hai k Lakshya us ka bharam rkh rha hai to us ki ankhon main aansu aa jaty hain
Vo Lakshya ki chair ki taraf bhagti hai or us k kareeb apni knees pr beth jati hai or usy pani deti hai...Lakshya usy dekh kr muskurata hai or ek or bite leta hai.toh Swara apna sr nhi main hilati hai...vo Lakshya ko ishara krti hai k mt khao bt Lakshya puri plate finish krta hai or Swara k diya huay glass se pani peeta hai.Itna kadwa khana kha kr us ki ankhon se bhi aansu a rhy hoty hain

Or DP Swara ko Lakshya k pas zameen pr yun bethy dekh or un dono ko rotay dekh kr😳heraan ho jatay hain😲


AFTER this part SHRUTI added her TWIST KA TADKA😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24


Swara bhaag jaathi hein vahan se...😭
sanskaar is very much happy with the happenings...he instructs lucky with his eyes to go to swara...😳
he runs to her room...swara is looking at her phone n crying...laksh goes near her...she senses somethin n turns back...she lowers her gaze n tries to go...

laksh- toh tum bed pein sothi ho kya
swara- phir kya balcony mein soungi...😡(swara is angry kyunki jab lucky usske peeche aaraha hotha hein toh ragini too runs behind them n jaan buj kar slip ho jathi hein aur laksh usse pakdta hein aur pyaar se puchtha hein- tum theek ho...to make swara jealous...ragini starts blushing🤢...laksh asks her to go downstairs...)


laksh- tumhe patha hein ksal rath ko kya hua?????


swara- kal rath ko kya???😲😲
he goes near her...kal rath ko...tumhe jaanna hein kya hua...
L - voh room mein...

mujhe nahi janna...jayo tum yahaan se...(she turns her face in anger)

bhabhi aap gussa kyu ho rahi ho??😆😆😆

bas laksh bhabhi mat bulayo mujhe...😔😡(with this she storms out of the room but lucky pulls her...he pins her to the wall)shona😳 ARRE YEH KYA BAATH HUI...
SUNKE TOH JAO KAL KYA HUA THA...
S- BAKWAS BAND KARO AUR JAO APNI US PATNI KKE SAATH ROMANCE KARO...
L- 😆😆tum jab gusse mein hothi ho tumhara shakal bandar jese ho jatha hein...😆😆
swara gives him kick...laksh beth jaatha hein neeche...
L - shona aese mat karo yaar tumhe patha bhi hein iske karan humhare family planning mein problem aa saktha hein😆🤣
S - kya 😲 jao yaha se...idiot...VAISE KAL RATH KO HUA KYA(ANGRY MODE)

L -mujhe patha hein tumhara fake marriage hein...kal rath ko yehi hua ki mujhe yeh baath pata chala aur kya...😆😆
tumne kya socha khayali pulao😉

L- bolo chup kyu ho...shona mujhe sab patha chal gaya aur us nagin ka bhi sach patha chal gaya mujhe...am sry shona mujhe maaf kar do...pls...meine tumhe bohut hurt kiya hein...tumhe itna bhara bhula kaha...hein...am sry am really sry...😭

S- bas laksh chup ho jao...(she hugs him tightly) both of them wer standing like this...jst then sanskaar cms their...

SA-ahem ahem
is sab ke liye time hein😉...abhi plan par concentrate kare...
L- bhai aap bhi na galat vaqt pe agaya...😔

SA- abe o mein thodi na ise utha ke leke jaunga...teri shona hein...😆

ALL THREE OF THEM PLANS TO EXPOSE RAGINI ON DP N AP'S WEDDING ANNIVERSARY...

-SHRUTI
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Phir Lucky raat ko bed ki dusri side p pani gira deta hai or ragini se kehta hai "Sorry nag...mera matlab hai ragini tumhari side ka bed to gila ho gya...ab to tumhe bahar balcony main sona paday ga"😈

R "Lakshya ji...thekk hai"😭😭😭

Lakshya says in heart "Tum ne meri Shona ko tadpaya tha ab main tumhe tadpao ga"😉

Raat bhar ragini ko machar kataty rehtay hain😃

Next day, stairs se utarty hua Swara ka paon fisalta hai aur Laksh usy pakad leta hai...Then they have a long eyelock😳😳

SA "Ahem...Laksh meri patni ko janay do"😆😆

Laksh "Ji bhai"😔

Ragini looks at Sanskar happily😆😆

Sanskaar gets afraid and thinks "Ab kahin ye chudail mere peeche hi na pad jaye" and runs from there🤣

AP asks Swara to make a mewadi dish.Ragini hides Swara's mobile so she can't use net.
😡
Swara is worried because Sanskar has also gone, so now who will help her?

Then she looks at Laksh and he is pointing towards different ingredients.So,like this he helps Swara in making the dish.😳

Everyone is happy to eat such delicious food from Swara's hand and praises Swara.Ragini is so jealous and tries to make Laksh eat her dish but Laksh eats Swara's dish and says "Wow ragini bohot acha khana bnaya hai"

R "Lekin Laksh ji, yeh to Swara ne bnaya tha,ap ne hmara khana to chkha hi nhi"😭😭

L "Oh Swara ne bnaya tha...mujhe lga itna mzedar khana sirf tum hi bna skti ho"😆😆

Swara looks at Laksh and smiles.Laksh winks at her and goes from there.😃

TBC...

-SHANAIA
Edited by Shanaia - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Anyone wanna continue😛😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
Superb Superb Superb ❤️❤️
mazee aa gye read karke 😳😳
Well done girls 👍🏼👍🏼
Keep writing 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Swara and Laksh newly wedded couple..

After Swara's bidaai.. in car..
Laksh - Shona kitna rogi tum?
he wipes her tears ..
Swara - Laksh vo.. main maa baba ko Bahut miss karungi..
Laksh - Ek idea hai kyun na hum maan baba ko bhi apne ghar le chale? 😉
Swara - Shut up Laksh.. main mazaak k mood mein nai hoon..
Laksh - Arey main mazaak nai kar raha.. I'm serious..
Swara looking outside window and crying.. remembering the moments she spended with her family..
Laksh - Shona Shona plz Ab aur mat Rona..agar if you continued crying toh main bhi rounga..
Swara turns and faces Laksh..
Swara sees Laksh teary eyes..
Swara - Tum kyun ro rahe ho?
Laksh - Kyunki tum ro rahi ho.. I can't see tears in your eyes..
Swara - hugs him ..
Laksh embraces her in his arms.. ab no Rona dhona..Shona.. aaj humari life ka sabse happening day hai.. Agar aaj ye dhadkane ruk bhi jaye na Toh koi gam nai..
Swara beats Laksh .. Ye kaisi stupid baate kar rahe ho..
Laksh - Arey Shona I mean Mujhe life se Jo chahiye tha Vo mil gya actually tum kya mili Mujhe jaise meri life hi mil gyi.. Di chahata Ye waqt yahi tham Jaye aur hum dono aise hi Ek dusre k ...


suddenly light flashed infront of their car..

Booom...

Car's break got failed.. driver was driving roughly and car got smashed.. blast..



After month..
Swara - Laksh lost memories.. living with different families.. and has different names now.. Swara - Sur
Laksh - Rahul..

- Vishi
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Posted: 9 years ago
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sur and rahul first meeting
its morining and sur moms comes and wakes her up and says dat sur come on get up aaj tumhare colg ka first day .hamesha ke tarah wasie late hona chahti ho

swara gets up and says noo ..she dress up and goes to colg

sur parents says jab se sur hamre zindagi mein aayi hai hamre zindagi kitne khubsurat hogayi hai...
humein ek aulad mil gayi jjis ki cha humein kitne saal se thi 😳😳

sur in colg

hamesha ke tarah again she is late ..as soon she enter the class room everyone thinks dat she is the teacher and wish her good morning maam 🤣
She feels awkward and embarrassed too she dont say anything and sits beside a guy

dat guy guy is non another den rahul (joh apne duniya mein khoya rehta hai..usko kisseki bih parwa nih hoti...and the reason y he is like dis bcoz he gets a flashback of swalak but not clearly..each day he tries to find out y he gets dis flasback but he gets no result...but he knows one thing hte girl in flashback is his life)

sur says excuse me to rahul watz ur name
rahul turns and see sur but dobt say anything
sur and rahul see each other ...deir frist eyelock
wen both see each other dey both feel connected and thinks kuch toh rhista hai ky hamara

professor enters the class😆😆

BG kismat ne inhe wapees ek dusre ke samne la diya kya inki kahani wapees lekhe jayegi..

now some one continue...


😆😆


-Bushra
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Rahul - Kya main tumhe jaanta hoon?
Sur - nahi 😕 kya main tumhe janti hoon?
Rahul - hum pehle kahi miley hai?
Rahul urf Laksh gets blur flashback of SwaLak confession / hug scene.. Rahul suddenly hugs Sur..

Other Students rooting - wohooo
some stupid boys whistles..
Sur felt weird.. she pushed Rahul and slapped him .. just thn professor entered the classroom..

Professor - Ye kya ho raha hai?
Surs in anger looking at Rahul.. Rahul was confused at his own actions.. Sur's slap made him numb.. and he again got flashes where Swara slapped him.. but scenes were blur..

Professor - Maine pucha yahaan kya ho raha hai?
Sur - Sir Ye ladka Mujhe ched raha hai..

Professor - Rahul kya ye ladki sahi bol rahi hi?

Rahul finally gains senses and recollects that a girl slapped him.. keeping aside flashes trauma .. he brings himself back to real world..
Rahul - Mujhe koi shauk nai iss chipkali ko chedne ka..
Sur - you? 😡 How dare you call me chipkali? 😡
Rahul - chipkali ko chipkali nai toh kya honey bee bolu?
Sur - Sir ye ladka Hume topic se bhatkane k koshish kar raha hai 😡 This looser hugged me..
Rahul - Hug hi Toh kiya Vo Toh main sabko karta hoon.. Rahul go and hugs professor too..
Rahul to Sur - Munna bhai MBBS nai dekhi kya?
Jaddo ki jhappi Di tumhe.. taki tumhara din accha Jaye 😉
Sur - 😲 Sir baare banana toh koi iss seekhe 😡
Professor - Bas Bahut hua tum dono drama..😡
Tum dono ki wajh se puri class suffer kar rahi hai 😡
just get out 😡

Sur - Tumhari wajh se mujhe aaj pehli baar class se nikala gya 😡
Rahul hugs Sur again..
Sur pushes him again..
Rahul - Relax Ye jaddoo ki jhappi taki tumhara gussa shant ho jaye..
Sur- Shut up .. Aur tumne Mujhe chipkali kaha tha na? But chipkane ki Adat Toh tumhari hai.. 😡
Rahul - Main kya fevicol hoon?
Sur's phone rings -
ringtone - Tu mera Tu mera Tu mera hero no. 1..
Rahul - See god ka signal main fevivol nai hero no. 1 hoon..
Swara - 😡 tumhe Toh main baad mein dekh lungi.. she walks off in other direction..
Rahul keeps looking at her and again get flashes..

-Vishi

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