Lakshmila OS : Biggest Dilemma of my Life : Updated Final chapter Pg19

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello everyone !! 😳

This is Sumi !! 😳

I am back with new

Lakshmila OS : Biggest Dilemma of my Life !!

This OS will be posted in five chapters and next chapters will strictly based on Unres !! šŸ˜›

Chapter 1 : scroll below !! 😳



Updated chapter 2 of my Lakshmila OS . Please do read and review !!!!

Chapter 3 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/siya-ke-ram/4717516/lakshmila-os-biggest-dilemma-of-my-life-updated-final-chapter-pg19?pn=14


Updated chapter 3 of my Lakshmila OS . Please do read and review !!! 😳

Chapter 4 : Page 16
Updated chapter 4 of my Lakshmila OS . Please do read and review !!!! 😃

Chapter 5 Final- Page 19.

Updated Final chapter 5 of my Lakshmila OS. Please do read and review. 😳



Thanks !!!

Please bear my weird imaginations !!! šŸ˜†

Note : This OS is totally fictious and it is no way intended to hurt religious sentiments! 😳
Edited by LakshmanMila..1 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lakshmila OS : Biggest Dilemma of My Life !!

Sadness have yet again returned in Ram 's family once again and now the storm of sadness was much more greater than before !!

Heartbroken Lakshman after returning from forest walked aimlessly through the corridors of the palace of Ayodhya .


He did the most unexpected task ordered to him by his Ram bhaiya. The task that he never thought of even in his bad nightmares too.


He slowly moved towards his chamber where Urmila was waiting for him eagerly sitting on bed .



Before entering the room , he wiped his tears so that Urmila doesn't get to know about this.


He entered his chamber and Urmila smiled bright seeing him back and rushed to him , lakshman tried his best to hide his sadness.


Urmila [sadly]: Where were u from morning ?? I was searching for u in the whole palace .


Lakshman gave a fake smile on his face and hold her by shoulders .


Lakshman : Mila , I have gone for some important work .



Urmila makes a innocent face : U never go anywhere without informing me . Did u have any idea that how much worried I was for u ?! I mean atleast u should have informed me .



Lakshman [ smiled ] : Sorry , Mila , the work was very important and in morning u was sleeping , so , I thought not to disturb u .


Urmila [smiled] : U really thought that I will get disturb , I would have never got disturbed .



By the way , what was the important work ?


Lakshman tried to control his sadness and said : Ram bhaiya had appointed me for the very difficult task for Ayodhya's welfare.



Urmila [smiled] : Oh , OK !!!


Urmila goes to take water from jug in a glass and gave it to him. Lakshman took it.


Urmila [worriedly]: Swami , I have not seen Sita didi too from morning , Me , mandavi didi and Shruthkirti searched for her but we failed . Did u know where is my Sita didi ?


Hearing the name of his bhabhi Sita pierced his heart , Lakshman couldn't control himself and tears rolled from his eyes and glass full of water falls from his hands .



Urmila got shocked seeing him .


Urmila [worried] : What happened Swami , why r u crying and where is Sita didi ?


Lakshman knew that now he can't hide anything from his Mila , he have to tell the bitter truth to Urmila .


Lakshman [his voice breaks] : In forest !!


Urmila got shocked : What !!


Lakshman [tears continuously flowing from his eyes] : Yes , Mila , forest !!!


Urmila [tensed] : What Sita didi is doing in forest ?


Lakshman [hesitating and with a heavy voice] : Now , your Sita didi will stay forever in forest .


Urmila , her voice got louder in worry : But , Why ???


Lakshman closed his eyes : Will u be able to hear it ?


Urmila [worried] : Yes , tell me , please !!


Lakshman sighed. 😭



Hope u all like it !! 😳


Next part will be strictly based on UNRES !!! šŸ˜› šŸ˜† šŸ˜‰

Please hit like button if if u like it and kindly please post your reviews !!
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Edited by Sumi-19 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Story will be updated by 24 or 25 September dear , working on plot !!! 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Update soon dear... This pic only says a lot!
Heart pains to think of their situation...
Even with all the brothers n sisters in idealistic places, sorrows dont leave them :( :( :(
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Please update soon
just looking at the picture I am eager to read the OS
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@nathand and Dharma dasi , i will update on Saturday or Sunday as currently my 2 exams r left and after that iam totally free !!!! šŸ˜‰šŸ˜›

Btw , what is your name ??? 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful OS, Sumi! šŸ‘ Loved every bit of it.

I love the build up to the confession. Update soon!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome Sumi!!!
Loved the pictures use in between and the dialogue..
Ab bas exam kahatam hone ki deri!!

Will be waiting dear, excited to see the different shades of Urmila and Lakshman.

:)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful os šŸ‘ā­ļø
Eagerly waiting for the next part😳

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