Lakshmila OS : Biggest Dilemma of my Life : Updated Final chapter Pg19 - Page 8

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Posted: 8 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: KrishnaPriyaa

Unres with chota review:
This was amazing 👏👏 Lakshman 😭😭 Urmi 😭😭
Update fast.
Tomorrow, you will get full review from me. Bhama promise 🤗

Thanku Bhama didi !!!!!! 🤗 ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: KanhaKiChutki

Chapter 2 was beautiful, the way you went from past to present

Urmil'a's anger, her emotions. And Lakshman's emotions. Beautiful, Sumi ❤️

Thanks a lot chutki !!!!!!! 😃😳 It is my usual habit of mine to add flashbacks in my OS !!!! 😆😆 😛 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: nathand48

This was an amazing chapter. You left us with a cliffhanger. I want (no need) to know what happens next. Please update soon.

Sorry for leaving u in a cliff hanger !!!! 😆😆
thanks dear !!!! 😃😳
WIll update ASAP !!!!!😉😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: Cluny123

Pls update soon
Greedy me, great update sumi his dilemma and her anger. Ram as broken husband and upright King. Siya cheerful not knowing what awaits her as an eventuality.
Everything was just beautiful dear..

Thanks a lot Sanjana dear !!!!! 😃😳
Ram , Lakshman , Sita gone through so much pain and difficulties that even thinking about them sends shivers through my Spine !!! 😭😭
Yeah , will be updating ASAP !!!! 😉😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: zarakhans

awesome...keep writing

Thanks a lot Zara di !!!! 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#76
Thank u pro dear !!!! 😳😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: Shivam...


You are making it a habit😆

Sru will never change , bhaiya !!!!!! 😆😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: Shivam...

Very good update , loved it as always

The scene narration was fantastic , and the use of Graphics added to the beauty of writing👏

Thanks a lot Bhaiya !!!!! 🤗 This means a lot to me !!!!! ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: LakshmanMila..1

Sru will never change , bhaiya !!!!!! 😆😉

Never 😆😆😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: ..RamKiJanaki..

What an amazing chapter, Sumi!👏

Although I do not like to think of Lakshman and Urmila have a disagreement, you have written it so well without making them OOC. They are in sync with themselves and the dialogues are written perfectly.

You have left us all with a cliffhanger, write soon! 😎


Thanks a lot Janu di !!!!!! 😳 🤗

I was doubtful that whether u will like this chapter or not because Urmila will be shown as a caring Sister of Sita and not a wife of lakshman !! 😳

But m so happy that u like the chapter !!!!!! 🤪 😆😆

yes , will be updating very fast !!!!! 😃😛😉

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