Lakshmila OS : Biggest Dilemma of my Life : Updated Final chapter Pg19

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Sumi

@RadhaKrishna_19

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: _Meena_
nice os

Thank u Meena dear !!! 😃 😛

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Sanjana

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Interesting.
It will be great to see how u will bring out lakshamans pain
Update soon
Btw thanks for pm

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Mili

@LakshMila

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Wow Sumi

The pictures and the dialogues on a whole make it a great combination.❤️

Keep writing👍🏼

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Sumi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: LakshMila
Wow Sumi
The pictures and the dialogues on a whole make it a great combination.❤️
Keep writing👍🏼

Thanks a lot Mili and am happy that u liked it . Thanks !!!! 😳 😃 😛

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Sumi

@RadhaKrishna_19

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Cluny123
Interesting.
It will be great to see how u will bring out lakshamans pain
Update soon
Btw thanks for pm

Thanks Sanjana dear !!! 😳 Yeah , Lakshman will be shown in a deep , inescapable pain 😭 . Yeah , Will update on Saturday and it's long !! 😛 😉

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Ramya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: ramya06
Res 😛

Nice chapter sumi! Poor lakshman, its difficult to even imagine how he must have felt then. 😭 And you brought his pain and Mila's anxiety very well! 👏 Update soon!

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deejagi

@deejagi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Though sad it is promising. please update next part soon. 24th seems too far 😆

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mandy001

@mandy001

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Very nice kiddo. U set the plot really nicely. Now looking forward for their confrontation.

Plz update soon.

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Shivam...

@Shivam...

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Posted: 8 years ago

#29

very nice start

Lets see what reaction lakshman faces from his wife😉

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Anokhisharma

@Anokhisharma

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Posted: 8 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: Anokhisharma
Res😆

Unres 😆
Great work Sumi 👏
I loved it when urmi's voice went up after learning that sita has been abandoned
Loved it dear
The pics made the os even more realistic nd the pics made it easier to imagine the scene 😆
Can't wait for the next part
Update asap

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