Lakshmila OS : Biggest Dilemma of my Life : Updated Final chapter Pg19

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Srutha

@SriMaatangi

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+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: LakshmanMila..1
Tha dear , u posted your res even before i hsve not edited it !! 😆 😆

It's okay 😆😆

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Sanjana

@Siya-Ram

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Posted: 8 years ago

#132

Res😳

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Pooja

@moviefan-pooja

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Posted: 8 years ago

#133

Wow sumi!!! I really loved the ending👏, I love how u portrayed lakshman and Urmila's bond with ram and also Urmila lakshman conversation...⭐️ thanks for giving us such a beautiful story to read

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Anu

@SenAnu

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#134

Beautiful update Sumi!!!

🤗👏❤️

I'm a little sad that this series ended, but I am sure that will bring more of Lakshmila to us!! 😃

I loved this part a lot!! Lakshman and Urmila, their relationship... ❤️👍🏼

Urmila telling him the various incidents that remind him of his values..!! 👏

And specially where is you added the little food making scene, so nice!! 😃

Loved this whole series Sumi! Enjoyed a lot!! 🤗

P. S. Review Kar de Mata 😆

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Anokhisharma

@Anokhisharma

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#135

sumi , sweetheart am left awestruck after reading this

u write in such a beautiful and mature manner

it takes a lot of effort to write emotional stuff

u wrote this story in such a manner that i could feel lakshman and urmila's feelings at that point of time

u need to have a mature mindset for writing this kind of a story

lakshman's dilemma , urmila's grief and ram's anguish , these three feelings have been beautifully potrayed

well done sweetie

👏 👏 👏 👏

Edited by Anokhisharma - 8 years ago

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Janaki

@RamKiSeeta

Achiever

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#136

Beautiful final chapter, Sumi! 👏

The Lakshmila dialogues are so cute and romantic, and so realistic. ❤️

But my fav are the Ram-Lakshman scenes. You have captured their relationship so well.

I will miss this story, but I'm happy it ended on such a happy note!

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Sanjana

@Siya-Ram

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#137

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beautiful sumi dear as anokhi Di said it requires maturity to write this and u have portrayed the relationship really well.

Edited by Cluny123 - 8 years ago

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Rati

@rati_pandya

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#138

Superb OS Sumi 😊

With pictures it came out very well...Read all parts in one go

Keep writing abt Lakshmila😊😊

Sorry for late reply

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Amaya Rishikesh

@Seraphina231

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#139

Sumi! 🤗🤗

Truly wonderful story and such a lovely chapter!

I loved the dialogue between Lakshman and Urmila ❤️

Ram tiptoeing into the room so He doesn't disturb Lakshman

I loved the story because you showed the love between all the siblings, and you did Lakshman very well, his turmoil, his emotions, all of it. Hats off! 😳

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Mili

@LakshMila

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#140

Sumi 🤗
This last chapter stole the limelight!
I literally loved the whole SS due to the perfection of display of emotions,but something it is in the last chapter that it makes you smile and cry at the same moment.
And obviously,a bow for the dialogues,especially by Urmila.
Loved this little journey of bondings in the family.
As everyone else said too,Ram-Lakshman bond was totally ❤️❤️
And cannot deny the concern each one had of each other.
The Ram-Lakshman-Urmila parts were lovely.
Keep it up yaar!
You and your imagination,which makes us imagine so vividly!

Love,
Mili

P.S-Please read and review fragile😆

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