Lakshmila OS : Biggest Dilemma of my Life : Updated Final chapter Pg19

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mandy001

@mandy001

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Posted: 8 years ago

#141

Wonderful update sumi.

Really loved lakshmila nd Ralaksh bond. Their dialouges, their anxiety to meet each other are well written. Loved the way u portrayed flashback where laksh couldnt sleep without his Ram bhaiya.

Ending was really good. It was so cute when lakshmila said that Ram has full right on their child then feeding, teasing, spending quality time were so so so cute.

Overall this SS was really good. Keep writing.

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Srutha

@SriMaatangi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: KrishnaPriyaa
Res 😆😆

Unres

You made me cry 😭😭

Well done Sumi 👏👏

LakshMila

Ram-Lakshman- Vo dono Dou Shareer, Ek Praan hai! Lakshman recognizing Ram's touch was so beautiful 😳

And Ram-Lakshman-Urmila in the end It is true, they are Raghuvar's children.

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Shivam...

@Shivam...

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Posted: 8 years ago

#143

Part 5 was best out of all

Ram lakshman Urmila bond was so nice , specially the feeding scene and fake fighting to cheer Ram up

Also i liked very much how everyone became Ram's shield and defended him against accusations by his mothers.

Too Good👏

Edited by Shivam... - 8 years ago

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proteeti

@sambhavami

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Posted: 8 years ago

#144

The last update was a such a fine mixture of painful smiles and hope! Loved it to the core!

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Mohini

@..Dharma_dasi..

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#145

Sheer piece of Awesome Art Sumi Di !!!!

Full with emotions... All the parts were heart taking n the last scene which included Ram Lakshman n Urmila undoubtedly turns to be the best!

Plz do write on this trio more...

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Sumi

@RadhaKrishna_19

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Posted: 8 years ago

#146

@Dharma_Dasi ,Thanks a lot dear !!!!! 🤗

My next one will be on Lakshman's parityaag , so in that Urmila will be not present , it will be purely Ram-Lakshman OS !!! 😳

What's your name dear ?? 😳

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Mohini

@..Dharma_dasi..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: LakshmanMila..1
@Dharma_Dasi ,Thanks a lot dear !!!!! 🤗

My next one will be on Lakshman's parityaag , so in that Urmila will be not present , it will be purely Ram-Lakshman OS !!! 😳

What's your name dear ?? 😳

Will be waiting for it Sumi !!

After all Ram Lakshman's bond is something that makes me luv Ramayana the most

My name is Mohini dear!!

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Riya

@Riya_16

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Posted: 8 years ago

#148

Sumi...I am so sorry for being late and really glad that you've incorporated my prompt. Loved the entire five shots. I wish SKR had even 10% of the sense. But did good...Keep writing more as that will improve both your vocabulary and your flair. Keep up the good work.

It was truly beautiful.

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Rii