'Mom with U' ' Maa Oo Maa'page 80 - Page 10

Originally posted by: sanju_veni

nice poem as usual

Hi,

Originally posted by: sri_4

hey bhoomi another great one..
the lady believed him but what she got nothing but sadness hmm..i really feel sad when i hear about extra marital affairs..its feels bad to someone suffer,,why cant people understand it ,,live n let live..
great one bhoomi..n really it touched me again

Tumney Vaada kiya hamarey rishtey ko Naam Milega,
Mujhse Shaadi kar Rishta Ab sawalon mey nahi ghirega,
Hamara Rishta har maryada paar kar chuka tha,
Tumhara pyaar mera Sansaar ban chuka tha,
Kuch mahiney baad tumharey ghar khushiyaan ka Agman hua,
chonki jab pata chala tumhare betey ka janam hua,
Tumney kaha shaadi ko ab nibhaney ki majboori thi,
kya karoon wah ek pal ki kamjoori thi,
Samjhi tumney kafi kuch chupaya tha,
jaana mujhe jhoothi kahani batakar phasaya tha,
Kahati kya gumsum se rah gaye,
Umeed hamaree Ab bah gaye,
Tane sabkey hum sah gaye,
Armaan sarey Ab dhah gaye, Akele zindagi mey kuch kami hai,
Ab bhi Ankh mey nami hai😭 😭 😭

cant believe such people exist!!
hmm great one
sri:-)

Hi Sri,

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

u know what? today u changed my thinkng a bit......i mean i used to think that aurat ki galti hoti hai.....in extra marital affairs...but no......man has that too........

awesome poem........

loved it to bits..........

wow di!

another social poem!!!!!!!!!!

awesome!

now i respect u more than i love u.........

seriously........

u r the best!

love,
Mahak

Hi Mahak,

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Awe....even this one was so nice!!! Wat to say.....we all knw there r such cheap ppl in the society.....btw....none tells me anything like why am I on the net....actually no one knws wat I do on the net...hehe. And thank u for the best wishes....its just that....I am fed up of reading....and at that tym...its cool to read ur poems. Gr8 job again Bhoomi!!!

Hi sumaiya,

Chehra

Barish Mey Bheegatey Hum,

Kahatey they Saath Rahengey Har janam,

Tumhe Hi baas Chaha Sanam,

Lagata Tha Ab Na Koi Gam,

Intazar Tum Mera Kartey Kab Aoongee,

Aakar Mafi Mangati Mai, Jab Tak Jaoongi,

Tumharey Har Dukh Par Fikr Itna karti,

Apney Dukh Ka Zikr Bhi, Kabhi Na Karti,

Mera parivaar mere liye Sab Kuch Hai Samajhti,

Magar Unhe bhi Dukhi kar tumharey Liye Jhagadti,

Ek Din Rasta Chala, Gaadi Rooki Nahi,

Takkar Lagi Aisi, Kai Din Ankh Khuli Nahi,

Par Kismat Achi Thi, Saans Tooti Nahi,

Bas Chehrey Par Gahara Daag, Mitta Nahi,

Sath Tumne Choda Mera Nahi,

Thama Mujhko Jantey Hooa Meri Kami,

Socha Tum Mujhe Apney Aap Se Pehchaan Karaoogey,

Samjha Tum Meri Zindagi Mey Bahaar Laoogey,

Jaana Nahi Saara Yeh Dikhawa Tha,

Duniya Ko Dikhaney Ka Nazaara Tha,

Ek Pal Mey Mitt Gaya Saara Bhram,

Jab Merey Sath Chaltey Tumhe Aati Sharam,

Tumhari Nazaro Mey Merey Daag Ki Parchae Thi,

Najaney Kahan Chuti Chahat Ki Gahraee Thi,

Daya, Ehsaan Ka Ehsaas Tum Mujhe Jatatey,

Daya Jhood Manobal Mera Kabhi Nahi Badatey,

Swabhimaan Mera Bhi Kam Nahi ,

Isiliye Tumhey Chodney Ka Mujhe Gam Nahi.

Hum Sochtey Duniya Mey Sacchey Pyaar Ka Dum Ab bhi Hai,

Jaana Nahi Aaj Duniya Mey Pyaar Kam Hi Hai,

Duniya Mey Aaj Pyaar Se Badakar Kuch Aur Bhi Hai,

Sapno Se Ubharkar Dekho Duniya Ki Niyat Kuch Aur Hi Hai.

Sachey Pyaar Mey Chehra Agar Chahat hai,

To Gahara Wah Pyaar Nahi Hai,

Chehra bas Hame Bahakaata hai,

Chehra Charitra nahi Dikhata Hai,

Chehrey par Umra Bahut Havi Hai,

Pyaar to Zindagi Bhar ke Liye Kafi hai,

Sunder Chehra Aainey Mey Nazaar Ata Hai,

Saccha Pyaar To Dil Mey Utar Jaata Hai.

........................Bhoomikauttam

i wanna reserve it for the first comment.........

today i will be the first!

yipee!

wow!

oh!

what?

why?

uske saath aisa kyun hua?

hey bhagwaan!

uska chehra kharaab ho gaya????????

she might be feeling terrible!!!!!!!!!!

but i am happy that he supported her!

whot????????????

he just pretended???????????

he wasn't nice one!

he felt shame to walk with her?????? shame on him!

but i think character is important than that face...................face only is outer beauty........one shud possess inner beauty.........

u r right.........love is most important.......(though i believe only in love after marriage)........

Sachey Pyaar Mey Chehra Agar Chahat hai,
To Gahara Wah Pyaar Nahi Hai,

Chehra bas Hame Bahakaata hai,
Chehra Charitra nahi Dikhata Hai,

Chehrey par Umra Bahut Havi Hai,
Pyaar to Zindagi Bhar ke Liye Kafi hai,

Sunder Chehra Aainey Mey Nazaar Ata Hai,
Saccha Pyaar To Dil Mey Utar Jaata Hai.

these r the lines which i loved the most

coz i throughly believe in them.........

how can u come up with such brilliant poems????? and then say in ur replies that u r a learner?????

u r simply brilliant........

i mean.......

how can u ever think urself to be immature??????????

u r simply genius..........

hats off to u........

well i think its true........i only love realistic things.......and not filmy things......that's why i never write a story inspired by any movie.....coz i think that they r films and not reality.......

u know what? aajkal ke zamaana mein yeh sab bahut ho raha hai.......

bechaare log bhugat rahe hain........

agar aapne kisi insaan ko sach much pyaar kiya ho to theek hai.........varna chehre se mat pyaar karo......

loved the poem to bits........



loved it simply..........

love,
Mahak

Duniya Mey Aaj Pyaar Se Badakar Kuch Aur Bhi Hai,😭

Sapno Se Ubharkar Dekho Duniya Ki Niyat Kuch Aur Hi Hai.

Sachey Pyaar Mey Chehra Agar Chahat hai,

To Gahara Wah Pyaar Nahi Hai,😭

Chehra bas Hame Bahakaata hai,

Chehra Charitra nahi Dikhata Hai,👏

Chehrey par Umra Bahut Havi Hai,

Pyaar to Zindagi Bhar ke Liye Kafi hai,👏

Sunder Chehra Aainey Mey Nazaar Ata Hai,👏

Saccha Pyaar To Dil Mey Utar Jaata Hai.👏👏