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topsyturvy23

@topsyturvy23

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#101

hey nice poem
reflected so much emotions of a person when goes through so much pain
thanks for pm

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur
i wanna reserve it for the first comment.........

today i will be the first!

yipee!

wow!

oh!

what?

why?

uske saath aisa kyun hua?

hey bhagwaan!

uska chehra kharaab ho gaya????????

she might be feeling terrible!!!!!!!!!!

but i am happy that he supported her!

whot????????????

he just pretended???????????

he wasn't nice one!

he felt shame to walk with her?????? shame on him!

but i think character is important than that face...................face only is outer beauty........one shud possess inner beauty.........

u r right.........love is most important.......(though i believe only in love after marriage)........

Sachey Pyaar Mey Chehra Agar Chahat hai,
To Gahara Wah Pyaar Nahi Hai,

Chehra bas Hame Bahakaata hai,
Chehra Charitra nahi Dikhata Hai,

Chehrey par Umra Bahut Havi Hai,
Pyaar to Zindagi Bhar ke Liye Kafi hai,

Sunder Chehra Aainey Mey Nazaar Ata Hai,
Saccha Pyaar To Dil Mey Utar Jaata Hai.

these r the lines which i loved the most

coz i throughly believe in them.........

how can u come up with such brilliant poems????? and then say in ur replies that u r a learner?????

u r simply brilliant........

i mean.......

how can u ever think urself to be immature??????????

u r simply genius..........

hats off to u........

well i think its true........i only love realistic things.......and not filmy things......that's why i never write a story inspired by any movie.....coz i think that they r films and not reality.......

u know what? aajkal ke zamaana mein yeh sab bahut ho raha hai.......

bechaare log bhugat rahe hain........

agar aapne kisi insaan ko sach much pyaar kiya ho to theek hai.........varna chehre se mat pyaar karo......

loved the poem to bits........

loved it simply..........

love,
Mahak

Hi Mahak,

😃😃😃 Congrats dear.. so phirsey u r comign first and I knew it Tumhe first anesey tum khud bhi apneaap ko nahi rok sakti..😆 I am glad that u read it and soon want to reply it and comment and let me know how u felt reading the whole poem.

Mahak yes the story is more on real side...and a bit painful but true.. we all soemwhere coem across many things many situation where we know beauty take the beginning be it in selection for any play or sogn or just standing in row or anythign in work , in career marraige for sure...... people first give preference to face and a dark skin is hugely felt bad why??? god knows.. 😡.. and comign to this poem..its just a mark after the accident on her face and thats botherign her husband and people around her..

i have met people whos whole faceis burnt and still i look into thier eys and never eel any pity on them but proud thta they survived and live on...why others feel humiliated and ashamed to walk alogn such people is just out of my knowledge🤢..

Yes in this poem the guy married as he had to he was committed to ehr when she was beautifuly withotu any mark and now after marriage he leaves no stone unturn to make her realise he ha sdone a huge sacrifice...

i posted this poem for her swabhimaan line.. this line refelcts her inner beauty and will makes her most charign and beautiful..

good to get ur comments MAhak on this one..and i belive in love and filmy thing..why not..i belive in that too.. i have seen good and bad both..sometimes some beautiful co-incidence happen which seems so filmy..but ite lovely.. hehe dont be pessimistic about loev haan.. 😆😆😆

that heart u sent awww so cute.. and i am a learner yaar.. i have no doubts on it.. my thoughts make me feel confident but my skill may be just immaturish...i feel.. hope i am gettign better improving..i seriously hope so..

luv u Mahak,,tc

hugs ur way..

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: sri_4

hey bhoomika

how r u ,,and hows alls going

another fab poem dear..

u have put out again the emotions of that girlwell

i do really feel sad when people see beauty -just outer n physical appearence but not their internal appearence which is most imp in life,physical appearance may be faded but not inner..

i felt sad for that girl but then she was great n didnt loose her confidence..

Duniya Mey Aaj Pyaar Se Badakar Kuch Aur Bhi Hai,😭
Sapno Se Ubharkar Dekho Duniya Ki Niyat Kuch Aur Hi Hai.

Sachey Pyaar Mey Chehra Agar Chahat hai,
To Gahara Wah Pyaar Nahi Hai,😭

Chehra bas Hame Bahakaata hai,
Chehra Charitra nahi Dikhata Hai,👏

Chehrey par Umra Bahut Havi Hai,
Pyaar to Zindagi Bhar ke Liye Kafi hai,👏

Sunder Chehra Aainey Mey Nazaar Ata Hai,👏
Saccha Pyaar To Dil Mey Utar Jaata Hai.👏👏

so true

thanks

good wishes..

sri:-)

Hi Sri,

Yes inner beauty remains forevr but its the face which the society talks abotu and is concerned about.. be it marriage or work place..people jump to conlcusion soon enough a fair lookgin girl is easily made to look confident good cute sweet..and darker skin girl with rude , aree pity feelgin for her.. i think anywhere its the personality which shoudl amke u... ur confidence , the way u carry urselves the charcter u have the values u have but society have priorites very weird many times and its silly..

in this poem only a mark on the face was soemthign ithe boy felt ahasemed of..and its so real not only men but women themselves also promote all this.. sick but true..

i hope times hcnages and face is given less immportance but character more..

am glad u liked those lines and themotions they refelcted .. i had the lines Swabhimaan mera hi kam nahi in my mind .. and tumhe chod ney ka mujhe gam nahi.and i decided i need to write this poem.. 😃

thanks for commenting..tc

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: Divya_kaldivya
Bhoomi.. yaar kya kar rahi ho tum??????... ek baad ek... Amazing Poems.... Yaar TOOO GOOD... Khud ki book publish karke sabse pehle copy mujhe dena apne autograph ke saath.... Theek hai?👏

Hi divya,

so read this poem too..so sweet of u to rpely and comment here..it is a very encoraugign thing for me as a poet.. poet but just learnign haan... feels a bit nervous to call myself a poet 😆.. Awww u liked these so much that u feel they can be made or collected into a book form.. hmm i hope it does have that much to it..but reality mey who will read and buy dotn know..whatver. i am glad to share with u all and enjoy ur comments they r much more ... Mera utograph kya karogi autogrpah lekey divya.. u have me as ur friend aur friend sey to pura letter likha saktey hain autograph hi kyun😃..thanks for ur lovely comment and kinds words.. touched.. 😳

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: sanju_veni
hey nice poem
reflected so much emotions of a person when goes through so much pain
thanks for pm

Hi ,

good to know u liked the poem.. and dotn thnk me for Pm..thanks to u for commentign here... tc

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#106

Hai!!! Kya Hua...

Hai!!, Unki Ankhen Saagar jaisi thi,
Bas Unhe dekh Dil de bathi thi,
Unki Ankhon key Lense jo gir gaye,
Woh to Meri Maa ke gale lag gaye.

Hai!!, Unki Hassi thi Kitnee pyari,
Jaise Moti hi beekher diye the,
Raaz jaanaa to ho gaya tha dil bhaari,
Saari Punji jo dentist ko de diye the.

Hai!!, Unki chal,dhal kya jabardast thi,
Dekh unhe dil mey hoti masti thi,
Magar Unki Awaaz Sun haal bura tha,
Aisa lagaa Engine mey Kachra bhara tha.

......Bhoomikauttam

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#107

i am the first one again!

yipee!

di?

aaj ek comedy poem?

kya baat hai?

har baar to rulati ho.......ya phir touch kar leti ho........

aaj man behlaaya?

loved it!

bechara!

how sweet!

awesome poem!

loved it to bits.........

brilliant.......

i think i pity on his condition.......

awesome!

👏

awesome!

do write more...........

u r just brilliant......

love,
Mahak

Edited by mahaklovesmayur - 15 years ago

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#108

😆

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur
i am the first one again!

yipee!

di?

aaj ek comedy poem?

kya baat hai?

har baar to rulati ho.......ya phir touch kar leti ho........

aaj man behlaaya?

loved it!

bechara!

how sweet!

awesome poem!

loved it to bits.........

brilliant.......

i think i pity on his condition.......

awesome!

👏

awesome!

do write more...........

u r just brilliant......

love,
Mahak

Hi MAhak,

this was timepass... ab hamesha apna mature side kyun dikhaye..soemtimes we should have fun with ourselves and the people we see.. kuch practical baaatein with less eotional atyaachar on u all...😆.. i have loads of emotionalatyachaar wale poems... but i feel sad whensomeone says they cried readign them..but i had felt immense painw ritign them as well.. but to post them..i thoguht i shoudl try these oens to ..just an attempt that i can attempt these otr not..

waise bhi ismey sey kuch bhi unreal nahi hai na..😉.. we come across so many epople who impress us and alter when we know itna kharchaa karaya to do this n that we go crazy ..arey natural kuch nahi sab surgery ka asara hai..😆..

glad Mahak u came First.. tum to ekdam first pe first ho... saree rocrd toodd rahi ho...👏👏👏..

lu vu

Bhoomi

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#109

ek cheez bhool gayi thi.......

sorry.......

yeh hai woh cheez-

And one more thing this time-

and why not this?

hope u know my answer now.......

loved all ur poems..........

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur
ek cheez bhool gayi thi.......

sorry.......

yeh hai woh cheez-

SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO sweet.. u r cutest
And one more thing this time-

A huge hug ur way tooooo....take it..warna beeche mey sey koirr aur agaya to we both will faint😆😲
and why not this?

U rock as well....

isshhhh 😳 A flying kiss ur way too...and loads of dairy milk

hope u know my answer now.......

loved all ur poems..........