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jyothi

@jyothi_cool

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Posted: 15 years ago

#71

awesome poem bhoomi its really touching cont soon

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Sri

@RadiantTreasure

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Posted: 15 years ago

#72

hey bhoomi great poem

u really put out the emotions very well

Alag Alag aaj jo hogaye hum,
Apne Apne raste pe chal diye Hum.,
kya kahen Zindagi bhi ajeeb Imtihaan leti hai,
Dil mey, Sapno mey aaj bhi wahi Tasveer dikhae deti hai.

loved those lines bhoomi..

i felt bad for that person,career is definetly imp not more than u r family i feel or atleast she shoud have lead her own life..not involving him...hmm.great!!!

good wishes..

sri:-)

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

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Posted: 15 years ago

#73

loved the poem di!

awesome!

infact i loved how the story came out to be!

loved it to bits............

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Kanu K

@artizia

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#74

its quite rare to get to hear a Man's side of story when he is in such a relationship where woman puts her materialistic achivements above the internal happiness and relationships .

well done once again Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool
awesome poem bhoomi its really touching cont soon

Hi Jyothi dear,

U liked reading hte poem.. it touched u ..feels god to know.. tc

Bhoomi

Originally posted by: sri_4
hey bhoomi great poem
u really put out the emotions very well

Alag Alag aaj jo hogaye hum,
Apne Apne raste pe chal diye Hum.,
kya kahen Zindagi bhi ajeeb Imtihaan leti hai,
Dil mey, Sapno mey aaj bhi wahi Tasveer dikhae deti hai.

loved those lines bhoomi..

i felt bad for that person,career is definetly imp not more than u r family i feel or atleast she shoud have lead her own life..not involving him...hmm.great!!!

good wishes..

sri:-)

Hi Sri,

Thanks dear for makign me feel u like my poem and also that such poems though simple do have impact..

yup the last part is the state we al go through ... even if we may be far away still they seem to have a huge plac ein our heart why we relly cant understnad thats love.. ya u r right.. but woman feel why they shoudl take a back seat in career... its difficult to understnad when the man understnads her but he cant be super to have no feelings to have a family like all normal men do.. its so simple but ti seems so complex..

thanks for ur wishes..u too tc..dear

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur
loved the poem di!

awesome!

infact i loved how the story came out to be!

loved it to bits............

Hi Mahak dear,

am glad dear u liked the poem.. awesome.. heheh kya yaar ab fantastic readers n friends ho to awesome poem has to be..akhir dosto ka asar hota hai mujhpe..waht say? 😃

luvu dear..and nice to know u read and felt the story and enjoyed reading it..tc

Bhoomi

Originally posted by: KehanT
its quite rare to get to hear a Man's side of story when he is in such a relationship where woman puts her materialistic achivements above the internal happiness and relationships .

well done once again Bhoomi

Hi Kanu,

Ya, its a bit rare but still we find such men who r very true genuine and encourage woman to achive a lot..its just that we shoudl not try and misuse the whoel freedom somewhere a thought has to be given to ur life partner needs and not take as a invasion of ur space.. marriage is not only abt achivment its abotu togetherness and completness and someone has to bow down or else both ends will remain in pain with each other loving wantign but with not gainign gettign only pain is divided..love can never be divided..

thanks for reading my poems and good to know u r enjoyign reading these..😃

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#77

Tumsey karu baatein

Jante the hum Saalo se Ek dusrey ko,
Hume lagey kai mahiney dil ke jasbaat bolney ko,

Tumhara savla sa rang aur gol sa chehra,
Halke Gaalo key gadhe dekh hota har din sunehra,

Tumhari Sharmati Ankhen , dil mey halchal machati thi,
Jab tum muskurati dil mey khushi bhar jati thi,

Tumhara baat na karna aur rooth jaana yaad hai,
Mera Pachas uthak beithak kar manana yaad hai,

Meri Kamyabi ke liye vrat kitne kiye hai tumney,
Mere kadvahat bhari zindagi mey shahad ghola hai tumney,

Gharwalon ney hamare rishte ko napasand kiya,
Tumhey to ghar mey nazar band bhi kiya,

Jaat-paat, samaj unkey liye sabsey jaroori tha,
Hamara Sacha gehra pyaar unkey liye gair mamuli tha,

Kyun tab tumney mera sath yunh chod diya,
Unkey sitam key agey ghutney kyun taik diya,

Ek pal mey meri Duniya khatam hogayee,
Apney jeevan ka Anth kar tum yunh sogayee,

Tumsey pyaar aur tumhara intezaar aaj bhi kar raha hoon,
Tumhari rooh us tare mey bassi hai, jissey roz baat kar raha hoon.

..................................Bhoomikauttam

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#78

Awe Bhoomi....it was so touchy!!! Feeling so sad for the couple....ek k bina to dusra adhura hai na....so its soooo painful!!! Very beautifully written n it touched the heart.

Wel, guess I am again fast to comment....kya karu tumhare poem ka naam hi itna attractive tha....I knew it wud be again a beautiful piece!!!

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Sri

@RadiantTreasure

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#79

hey bhoomi

great poem again

loved it

its really penned down well emotions of a lover ..they loved eachother,,their sweet memories..

hmm.sad hope their parents have accepted their relation..lttile did they knw theri dter is gonna die for him

but i do knw half of the love stories do have this ends in real life too..n am really sad for it..

Tumhari Sharmati Ankhen , dil mey halchal machati thi,
Jab tum muskurati dil mey khushi bhar jati thi,

Tumhara baat na karna aur rooth jaana yaad hai,
Mera Pachas uthak beithak kar manana yaad hai,😆

Meri Kamyabi ke liye vrat kitne kiye hai tumney,😳
Mere kadvahat bhari zindagi mey shahad ghola hai tumney,

Jaat-paat, samaj unkey liye sabsey jaroori tha,
Hamara Sacha gehra pyaar unkey liye gair mamuli tha,😭

Ek pal mey meri Duniya khatam hogayee,
Apney jeevan ka Anth kar😭 tum yunh sogayee,

Tumsey pyaar aur tumhara intezaar aaj bhi kar raha hoon,
Tumhari rooh us tare mey bassi hai, jissey roz baat kar raha hoon. 😭

great again!!

good wishes

sri:-)

Edited by sri_4 - 15 years ago