'Mom with U' ' Maa Oo Maa'page 80 - Page 12

how sweet na!

i always loved stories of agatha christie......enid blyton....nancy drew most..........

but now my favourite writer whose story i love the most is- U

love u a lot............

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

how sweet na!

i always loved stories of agatha christie......enid blyton....nancy drew most..........

but now my favourite writer whose story i love the most is- U

love u a lot............

hahahha.. kya Tum bhi Mahak , mujhe chaney ke jhaad pe mat chadaoo..waise I dotn even have knowledge abotu any writers..little bit i know hteir names but havnt read any noel epect few in hindi .. but ya i feel emotions and observe things... it feel special to be loved and when my work is appreicate i will nice but there are many many loads of talented people and i am just one part there is always so much more to write to improve and to understnad and feel..liek U urself.. i am still discoverign u ..as much as i am stilldiscoverign myself..

pata hai what i love the thing in ur personality?

u have the power to make anyone cry or laugh by ur work....

and i simply adore that fact.....

infact i never loved anyone's work more than i love urs.......

i simply get touched y the simple words used in ur stories and poems......

how u touch the hearts......especially mine.........is simply mind blowing......

i always love simplicity without any artificial things.......

and u always do that......

i always find ur stories so real........

agar maine unke baare mein bola to aapka pages bhar jaayenge........

i mean i treasure them........

i always loved ur poetic lines in stories which make me feel great........

but i never knew that u can write such brilliant poems!!!!!!!!!

i mean simple awesome!

hats off to u.....



and i always love ur sweet replies........

i always check them out coz i know that for sure u would reply.........

love u a lot.........and i mean that...........

hey was a nice n hilarious poem

oh my god bhoomi
it was so hillarious hehehe!!
bechara ladki dekhkhe kuch zyaada hi expect karne laga aur wooh nikli koi aur..-hai hai!!kya ho gaya.. 😆
loved this side of u rs it was small yet so funny,,,


Hai!!, Unki Ankhen Saagar jaisi thi,
Bas Unhe dekh Dil de bathi thi,
Unki Ankhon key Lense jo gir gaye,
Woh to Meri Maa ke gale lag gaye. Hai!!,
Unki Hassi thi Kitnee pyari,
Jaise Moti hi beekher diye the,
Raaz jaanaa to ho gaya tha dil bhaari,
Saari Punji jo dentist ko de diye the. Hai!!,
Unki chal,dhal kya jabardast thi,
Dekh unhe dil mey hoti masti thi,
Magar Unki Awaaz Sun haal bura tha,
Aisa lagaa Engine mey Kachra bhara tha.


😆

good wishes..
n keep laughing
😆

sri:-)

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

pata hai what i love the thing in ur personality?

u have the power to make anyone cry or laugh by ur work....

and i simply adore that fact.....

infact i never loved anyone's work more than i love urs.......

i simply get touched y the simple words used in ur stories and poems......

how u touch the hearts......especially mine.........is simply mind blowing......

i always love simplicity without any artificial things.......

and u always do that......

i always find ur stories so real........

agar maine unke baare mein bola to aapka pages bhar jaayenge........

i mean i treasure them........

i always loved ur poetic lines in stories which make me feel great........

but i never knew that u can write such brilliant poems!!!!!!!!!

i mean simple awesome!

hats off to u.....



and i always love ur sweet replies........

i always check them out coz i know that for sure u would reply.........

love u a lot.........and i mean that...........

Hi Mahak dear,

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Chehra was really nice Bhoomi....even i think most of the tym....luv is bcoz of the face....I mean I wont completely go against those who fall for the face....bcoz beauty is bound to attract....but then that love is not true.....n I felt the guy in the poem shudnt hav married the girl....if he was so embarrassed....huh!!! Anyways, diff ppl hav diff ways of lyf....if that stupid foolish guy blvs chahra is more imp....then its soooo sad for him that he lost a true luv....the girl did the right thing by leaving him....nuksan to uss idiot ladke ka hi hua na.....hehe.

Waise iss baar late ho gaya comment me....but I knw u understand...hehe. And even I'm glad I cud make a frnd like u.

Hi Sumaiya.. i guess ur exams r on ..so i shoudl wait and give u enoguh time to take ur time out to read and comment..i am posting as i have time warna with exams even i am busy at my end..saturday sunday seem so easy to get al my free time here online..

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Okay 'Hai!! Kya hua'....it was like actually "Hai!! Kya hua???" hehe.....it was really funny Bhoomi...maza aa gaya.....meri to hassi chhut rahi hai....brilliant....and this tym I must praise ur talent....u touch a sensitive subject so wonderfully....and at the same tym u hav this funny creativity....and that too in poems (which I blv is really tough to write)....hats off dear!!! Love u for this!!

Hi Sumaiya,