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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: YaSha0512

Fab updates
So was it Kabirs plan for Sunny to save Sara's so he could enter n convince Kumud she loves him???
Wonder what score he has to settle n why kumud ???
Thank god Kumud knows she doesn't love sunny thoughtfor second there she was loosing it or kabir had some kind of mind control power lol
So they both believe the curse n not that someone is playing trick
Omg kabir is sunny bro
Looking forward to mystery behind Kabirs revenge
Thanks for pm plz keep em comin n continue soon


Thanks, Kabir has a negative character and the rest of ur questions will be answered with the upcoming parts. 😊
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Thanks...😊
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Updating in 2 or 3 hours...😊
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Part 11:

Previously: " Nothing will happen to me."


Kumud withdrew from the hug when she heard footsteps approaching...She quicly wiped her tears and took some steps backwards.

"You are here? I've been searching for you all over the place. Saras you are here too?"
"Anushka, actually, we got lost..."
"No worries,Kumud, come let's go."

Kumud looked at Saras as she went away.
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"What were you doing with Saras?"
"Nothing."
"You can't lie to me."
"Ouch...Sunny, you are hurting me." Kumud said as Sunny held her hands furiously.
"You are my girlfriend and I have every right to know."
"You know what, I misunderstood my feelings for you, you were just a friend, and it's Kabir who got me confused now I have realized it, I don't love you, you are just a friend,"
"What crap are you talking about? You love me."
"No, I don't love you."
"Don't you remember, the mirror..."
Kumud froze," You did all that, you instigated me to open it..."

Flashback:

Kumud was in her room, she was looking at the mirror...

The door opened and she saw Sunny standing there.

"Come inside."

He did as he was told and sat next to her on the bed.
"Look, at this Sunny, the design is amazing, it's so beautiful..."
"Kumud, why don't you open it, once you see yourself in it, it would be more beautiful."
"Sunny, I really want to but Saras said..."
"Since when do you listen to Saras...If I have a good memory, then you hate him then why are you listening to him now..."
"I know I hate him but in this matter, we should be careful."

Sunny got up and walked to the door. Before going, he turned and said," He may be right but by doing this, you will give him an opportunity to boss over you."

Kumud did not know what to do. She decided that she would do what she wanted. At midnight, she opened it...

After the morning when Saras found the wound on her face, she started to feel dizzy. She thought that it was because of the change of environment. She had gone in her room to rest a bit.

When she got in her room , she felt someone's presence. She turned but Kumud did not see anyone.
"Might be my hallucination..." she muttered to herself.

She heard something and then she saw the figure of a woman in front of her. She was shocked at first and became numb. She was going to run away from there but the door closed and and it was locked. She was afraid now, who was she?

"You might be thinking who am I? But that is not important, you know why?" The woman turned her face towards Kumud who was more scared after seeing her face, it was half burnt..

"You have every reason to be scared of me," she walked toward Kumud who was keaning on the door for support.

"I am very happy today, you have set me free, exactly at the time when I had expired some years back...but don't think that I will be like the ones that spare those who set them free, no, no, no, you will suffer, because you love someone and I hate lovers."

"W..why?" Kumud managed to say in a chocked voice.

"Oh, you can talk, I thought that you were dumb...well, I hate lovers because I hate them and don't you dare reveal this to anyone, or leave the mansion, I have been alone all these years...I must get someone to torture now... she laughed evilly and disappeared into thin air.

Since that day, the spirit torured her everyday and blackmailed her by saying that Saras will die, she behaved normally...

She could no longer tolerate it so she revealed all to Anushka.


End of flashback,

Kumud held Sunny's shirt's collar in her hands," Why did you do all this?"
"I did not do anything, "
"Just shut up, you knew all about the spirit then why..:"
"Yes, I knew everything, but I did not know that she would be free when you opened the mirror, I just wanted to gain you."
"So, all this was just to gain me, you do not love me,"

She was about to go away when Sunny said," I expect you to keep all of this to yourself or else your lover has greater risks of losing his life...
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"Are you mad, why did you tell her?"
"Kabir, if I had not done that, she would have ended our game."
"Sunny, we must find out how to control her."

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Kumud was sitting restlessly, she was worried about the spirit, what Sunny told her, Saras...

She heard some noise, she was scared and was about to scream when someone held her hand..






"Leave me,"
"I won't let you go now, "
"Saras, please, leave me, she will kill you and..."
"And what? Kumud, I can't leave you alone now, we will face this together."
"But Sunny..."
"What Sunny, you are mine and he better understands that."


Finally updated. 😊 Hope you like it.😛
Sorry for making you wait for so long.

Love Jess❤️










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Posted: 10 years ago
Jess🤗 Superb update😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: jyo_loveurlife

Jess🤗 Superb update😃

Jyo 🤗 thanks 😊
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thnx 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
sunny...how dare he?so sad.whats kabir n sunny planning?loved saras hlding kumud n saying that she is his.beautiful pics
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

sunny...how dare he?so sad.whats kabir n sunny planning?loved saras hlding kumud n saying that she is his.beautiful pics

Sunny and Kabir wanted to make Kumud fall for Sunny for "some reasons"( which will be revealed.)
and Thanks 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome Jess. 👏 Read all the parts in one go. Just loved them all, the concept, the characters, samud romance n most important of all - the story. Pls keep updating 😳

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