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lucky.m

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Part 6...contd...

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9.30pm

Daksh is impatiently waiting for naina to return..in hall..chalo intezaar kahatm huva aur naina wapas aagayi...😛

Naina very very tired..comes and sits in hall.Daksh doesnt speak anything..just keeps looking at her.

Naina; hi daksh..

Daksh; hi naina.

Ayi comes and asks them to have dinner as everybody else is done..and says daksh had been waiting fo her..Naina lil surprised😲 but feels happy😛

AT dining table

Daksh; tho tumhara din kaisa tha..?.

Naina; poocho mat..itna busy that ki saas lene tak bhi fursat nahi thi.pehle meting..phir shopping...lekin client ko meri theme pasand aagayi(lil excited)..and asks tumhara??

Daksh gives a smile ( remembering tension he went through); acha tha😆

Naina; daksh I am sry..woh ja tumn call kiy atho meeting ke beech mein thi ..iss liye aisa baat kiya maine..sry..

Daksh' its ok ?(he understands naina didnt read his letter aur uska mood aur bhi off hojata hain...

Naina; bahut thak gayi hoon ..aaj tho..phat se sojavungi

Daksh ; kya? sojavoge

Naina;; surprised by daksh's question; haan..kyu koi problem hain kya?

Daksh; nahi koi prblm nahi..

Dinner khatam..both move into their respective rooms...naina wishes daksh good night and goes into her room..

Dakshu bechara..woh bhi apne room mein cahala jaata hain..aur mooh phulakar bet jaata hian' ;ab kya hoga mera dil ka?..❤️

He looks at ganapati bappa'e statue in his room; haath jod kar;

Bhagavna aap jaante ho ki main naina se kitna pyar karta hoon..agar mera pyar sacha hain tho pls naina ko mujhe dedo///.bahagavnji pls kuch chamatkar kardo..pls kuch chakkar cahalvo aur naina tak mera letter pahuchavo..pls..pls😉

Bahgavan jo saache dil se maanga jaata hian woh zaroor milta hain..tho lo ji ganse ji ne dakshu ka prayer sunliya..aur chakkar chala liya...👏

10.30pm

Nain is in her room..she gets changed and comes and sits on bed...she starts reading some book...slightly woh neend mein jaa rahi hain...suddenly usks phone bajta hain..phone is in hand bag.She wonders who could have called her at this time..starts searching for phone..

She is in sleepy mood🥱 and she can't find her phone..she gets irritated aur poora hand bag ka samaan bed par girathi hain..she finds the phone but by that time phone band hogaya.😆.Customer crae walo ka number..She starts putting all her things back in bag...she finds dakshu ka letter😛

Naina; takes letter into hand; ye kya hain? and opens it...starts reading..😛

Contd...

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DakshnaFan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Yaar Lucky sahi point pe aake freeze kar diya scene ko... abhi aage ke liye bechare Dakshu ke saat saat mera bhi haalat bura ho raha hai...😍😲

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LadyMystique

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Naina is going to get the shock of her life i thnk! Karela Patwardhan loves her!! haha!!😆😆 poor dakshu, dear god and lucky pls dont be harsh on him😊

and lucky, when u stop ur FFs right at the point where our excitement is high u can imagine how tensed we get yeah???😭 have to agree with dakshnaFan...dont do this us dear😉🤗

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lucky.m

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Part -7...contd......

11.30PM,On terrace

Daksh is waiting impatiently with lot of tension and worry...

Daksh; kya naina ne khat pad liya hoga? kya hoga uska jawab?..daksh keeps walking from here and there..goes near steps every now and then to see if naina is coming...and always keeps looking at watch..

Daksh ; mere watch tho teek se kaam kar raha haina..kahi ye slow tho nhai hogaya..phir waqt nikal kyu nhai raha hain..ek ek pal jaise ek ek saal lag raha hain...

11.45 pm

Terrace ka doors open hua...daksh turns back and sees naina standing there..uska hr8 beat bad gaya❤️..lab dab lab dab..kar rha hain...

Naina comes near daksh..hugs him and says I love u daksh...daksh tho khusi se paagl hogaya and hugs her and he says..I love u too naina..I love u..He opens his eyes., koi nahi hain waha par.LOL.😆..😆Its his dream..( pls guys ..maaro mat mujhe.)

11.55 pm

Daksh realises its his dream and he thinks.; khas ye sach hota..he looks at watch..sirf paanch min aur..naina..pls ab tho aajavo..mujhese ye intezaar aur bardarash nahi hota..aajavo..

12.00pm

Naina doesnt turn out..

Daksh; bas aati hi hogi...

Slowly time keeps ticking...12.15 pm...12.30pm..

As time keeps ticking along with time daksh emotions and feelings keep changing

From anxiety to pain of rejection...to hurt.😭.😭tears roll down from his eyes..as his first love is a failure.He remembers all those incidents right from fisrt meeting to the moment he fell in love with naina..and he can feel his hr8 brking.💔..

Khwab mera kyu tooth gaya.💔.jaane kyu rab mere rooth gaya..( song in back ground)

1.00pm

From hurt to anger😡...y is his love rejected?.😡.he thinks atleast he deserves an explanation//y cant naina love him? y?and suddenly he thinks what if naina didnt read his letter at all😲...he calms down a bit after this thought decides to confront naina on this next day morning...

Contd...

PS; GUYS, I know ye padke upset hojavoge..iss liye not keeping u ppl waiting I am posting next part...nJOY😉

Edited by lucky.m - 13 years ago

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lucky.m

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

PART 8..CONTD

1.15pm..

Daksh apna asu poch kar😭..terrace se niche utar raha hain..on steps he finds naina sitting and doing some work...

Naina lifts up her head looks at daksh and says; arey daksh..iss waqt teraace se...neend nahi aarahi thi kya? mujhe bhi... iss liye office ka kaam kar raha hoon..

Daksh kya kahega..bahut mushkil woh apna feelings control kar raha hain.

Naina again looks up and says; ya phir kisi ka intezzar ho raha hain😉

Daksh ke ander ke feelings burst hota hain😡..he comes down near naina and says

Daksh; naina, mujhe tumse kuch baat karna hain..pls mere saath chalo

Naina; daksh..iss waqt😲

Daksh;naina pls koi sawaal nahi..chalo..he holds her hand and takes her to terrace

On terrace Daksh and naina F2F

Naina; daksh aisa kya zaroori baat hain?

Daksh; bhaut zaroori hain naina..naina kya tumne mere khat pada..aaj subha maine tumhare hand bag mein ek khat dala..kya tumne usse pada?

Naina thinks for awhile' khat?kaunsa khat? woh..haan haan maine pada

Daksh; tho phir tumhara kya jawaab hain,,main sunna chahta hoon..pls batavo mujhe..kya hai tumhara jawaab???

Naina;( very casually)kya sawaal aur kya jawab? aur mujhe samaj nahi aa raha ki ek choti se kahagaj ki tukde ke liye itna emotional kyu ho rahe ho?

Daksh tho ek dum se KP banjaata hain😡; he comes nears naina .and says;

Kya kaha tumne..khagaj ka tukda..woh khagaz ka tukda nahi mera dil tha.❤️.aur usme likha hua ek ek shabd mere pyar hain tumhare liye..❤️maine apne poora dil kholk kar use khat ke zariye tumhare saamne rakha aur tumhare liye woh...😡

I dnt believe this naina.mera pyar aur mera feelings ka ye value hain tumhare aankhon mein😭

Naina; daksh ..ye tum kya keh rahe ho???😲

Daksh; kya keh raha hoon??.😲.tumhe sunayi nhai deta ya samaj mein nahi aaraha hain..naina😡

He holds her sholuders tightly and says; pyar karta hoon maina tumse..damnit..I love u.❤️.I am crazily in love with u.❤️.tum samajthi kyu nhai mera pyra ko..chahta hoon mein tumne..tumhara saath apna poora zindagi bitana chahta hoon..I love u naina...naina i love u...😭..( with tears spiliing out of his eyes)

Few minutes of silence..b/w them

contd...

Edited by lucky.m - 13 years ago

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lucky.m

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Part 9..contd...

Small tears roll down from naina's eyes; kya kaha tumne?

Daksh; takes naina's face into his arms and says; I love u naina..I love u a lot...I love u

Naina looks in daksh's eyes and says..yahi sun natha mujhe daksh..ye 3 shabd mein tumhare mooh se sun na chahthi thi👏..yaad hain tumne khat mein likhatha ki khas mein tumhara haath pakad kaer tumhare aan khon mein dekh kar ye keh pata...

Lo tumne keh diya...👏

Daksh still with tears 😭listening to naina realises that in out burst of emotions he confessed his feelings for her...He removes his hands from naina's face. and moves away from her...not knowing how to respond..he turns his back to her and starts going from there

Naina; daksh..tumhe mera jawab nahi sun na hain kya?..daksh stops for while..still his back turned towards naina..

Naina comes running and hugs him from back and says; i love u daksh❤️..main tumse bahut pyar kari hoon😍😍

Daksh shocked with happiness.🥳..uska sapna jo sach hogaya aur usko uaka pehla pyar milgaya....immediately turns towards naina

Naina holds his hands. and says; I love u too daksh...and share a eye lock..both eyes filled with tears of happiness...and they hug tightly..

Naina tere..song in back ground..tu hi hasrat...😛

Contd...

PS; ab tho khush!!!😉 hojavo yaar...abhi last part baaki hain chota sa.happy ending jo karna hain..😉..jaldi will be posted...

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

last part👏👏👏👏...luvd d way she got him 2 say t out...😊😊😊 luvd d way he said t...nd she said t...awesm he yar...u did t again😊 ab baki ka hapi ending ka part😍 'm waitin...

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DakshnaFan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Too good Lucky 👏 Beautifully well organised scene👏... Dakshu's dialogues the best as usual 👏 😳 Itna Daksh ko pareshan karne ka to haq banta hai Naina ka 😉 Afterall she is the only one who knows how to make him express all his feelings 😉 Loved it 🤗 😛 Last part only happy happy ending... i'm waiting 😍

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LadyMystique

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: lucky.m

PART 8..CONTD

1.15pm..

Daksh apna asu poch kar😭..terrace se niche utar raha hain..on steps he finds naina sitting and doing some work...

Naina lifts up her head looks at daksh and says; arey daksh..iss waqt teraace se...neend nahi aarahi thi kya? mujhe bhi... iss liye office ka kaam kar raha hoon..

Daksh kya kahega..bahut mushkil woh apna feelings control kar raha hain.

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Naina again looks up and says; ya phir kisi ka intezzar ho raha hain😉

Daksh ke ander ke feelings burst hota hain😡..he comes down near naina and says

Daksh; naina, mujhe tumse kuch baat karna hain..pls mere saath chalo

Naina; daksh..iss waqt😲

Daksh;naina pls koi sawaal nahi..chalo..he holds her hand and takes her to terrace

On terrace Daksh and naina F2F

Naina; daksh aisa kya zaroori baat hain?

Daksh; bhaut zaroori hain naina..naina kya tumne mere khat pada..aaj subha maine tumhare hand bag mein ek khat dala..kya tumne usse pada?

Naina thinks for awhile' khat?kaunsa khat? woh..haan haan maine pada

Daksh; tho phir tumhara kya jawaab hain,,main sunna chahta hoon..pls batavo mujhe..kya hai tumhara jawaab???

Naina;( very casually)kya sawaal aur kya jawab? aur mujhe samaj nahi aa raha ki ek choti se kahagaj ki tukde ke liye itna emotional kyu ho rahe ho?

Daksh tho ek dum se KP banjaata hain😡; he comes nears naina .and says;

Kya kaha tumne..khagaj ka tukda..woh khagaz ka tukda nahi mera dil tha.❤️.aur usme likha hua ek ek shabd mere pyar hain tumhare liye..❤️maine apne poora dil kholk kar use khat ke zariye tumhare saamne rakha aur tumhare liye woh...😡

I dnt believe this naina.mera pyar aur mera feelings ka ye value hain tumhare aankhon mein😭

Naina; daksh ..ye tum kya keh rahe ho???😲

Daksh; kya keh raha hoon??.😲.tumhe sunayi nhai deta ya samaj mein nahi aaraha hain..naina😡

He holds her sholuders tightly and says; pyar karta hoon maina tumse..damnit..I love u.❤️.I am crazily in love with u.❤️.tum samajthi kyu nhai mera pyra ko..chahta hoon mein tumne..tumhara saath apna poora zindagi bitana chahta hoon..I love u naina...naina i love u...😭..( with tears spiliing out of his eyes)

Few minutes of silence..b/w them

contd...

@ red,

i wish one day a guy would come and say the exact same lines to my face holding my hand!!😍 ( but he should not say naina😆😉he should say my name) awesome dialogues lucky!All the parts u updated today were mind blowing👏👏👏 thanku thanku so much!!!!!!and even when dakshu is expressing his love Naina plays pranks on him and gets things outta his mouth!😆 poor dakshu! he is gonna have a time with her when he marries her😛

Edited by LadyMystique - 13 years ago