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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: lucky.m

Contd...PART 2

Daksh completed writing letter...and he takes a deep breath( ofcourse itna emotional ho kar khat likne baad itna na tho banta haina).😆..takes naina's photo graph into his hand..lovingly touches th photograph..takes the letter and folds it

Just then ayi comes

Ayi; chintu kay kar raha hain?.
daksh hurriedly keeps letter in his pocket😲 and phot ko file mein rakh deta hain and says; kuch nhai ayi,kuch office ka kaam tha..
Ayi; acha..naasta karne neeche aaja aur aate waqt naina ko bula lena..saying this she leaves

Daksh goes near naina's room knocks the door..no reply..he slowly goes inside..naina not in room..daksh finds naina's hand bag on bed..
Daksh; hey bahgawan..ye letter naina tak pahhuchadena pls..pls.😛.

He takes hand bag and puts letter in it.just then naina comes in

Naina; daksh...tum yaha..😲
Daksh stuns for one min...he puts hand bag on bed and turns towards naina

Daksh; hai naina..good morning..woh woh..ayi ne tumne neeche naaste ke liye bhulaya tho iss liye..😛
Naina; comes in takes her hand bag and file on table..; acha..main akruthi ki room mein gayi thi..tho chale

Daksh; haan...chalo

Daksh and naina come down for brk fast...daksh ki dil mein count down shuru hogaya.😛.He is tensed and is going through array of emotions...Daksh and naina sit on dining table.naina asusaul baatein kar rahi hey..daksh bhi as usaul uski baaton mein khoya hua...😍..apne aap mein muskuraata hua...

Naina; daksh, agar tum office ke liye nikal rahe ho kya tum mujhe chod doge?mujhe raaste mein kuch kaam hain
Daksh ka tho hogayi god morning..; haan haan ..kyu nahi..mein chod dunga..( dil dance jo kar raha hain)

Dakshna say good bye to ayi and get into car...start from PH

oN THE WAY...IN THE CAR...dakshna❤️...

.CONTD......


Jaldi Jaldi Part 3 likhna...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lucky my darlin...mene aj hi pada...its 2 damn beautiful yar...luvd t, luvd t, luvd t 👏👏👏[infinity rakh le😊😊😊😊]...mysti s rite...makes me wana fal in luv 2...Naina s one lucky gal 😍...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part -3 Contd...

...In car

Naina is looking out of car window aur daksh kuch waqt road ke tarf, kuch waqt naina ke tarf dekhke balance maintain kar raha hai😆

Daksh; ah ..naina, kisi clent se milne jaa rahe ho?
Naina; woh.mainae uss din bataya tha na..miss chopra..unhi ke saath meeting hain..maine kuch themes socha .bas usi ke baare main batana hain
Daksh; acha..😛.

Just then naina ka phne bajta hain.she opens her hand bag aur daksh ki dil mein baji ghanti..❤️.Naina bag mein apna haath rakh kar phone niklati hain( she doesnt see into the bag)..and she attends the call from client and says she is on her way...

Daksh; naina..woh tum ladkiyan apne handbag din mein kitne baar kholte ho?😆

Naina surprised by daksh's question; daksh..tum kabse ladikiyon ki handbag par interest le rahe ho? smiles😆

Phir baji ghanti,,naina ne jo smile diya..😆

Daksh; woh bas aise hi..woh kya hain..simran haina ,,har waqt handbag kholte rehthi hain..mein soch raha tha..aisa kya hota hain hand bag mein...

Naina; woh..waise.uss ladki par depend karti hain..college girls,working women sabki alag alag zaroorat hote hain..tho uss hissab se..

Daksh; acha..tumne mere sawaal ka jawab nahi diya❓..kitne baar kholte hain average basis par😆

Naina thinks for a while' kamse kam 10 baar tho zaroor kholenge

Daksh; smiles and says' 10 baar..tho acha chances hain.( for letter to fall in hands of naina).

Naina; chance..kis chance..daksh tumhe kya hogaya hain?

Daksh trie to cover up by saying; woh kuch case ke baare mein soch rahatha...
Naina; kahi hand bag ki wajah se kiska divorce tho nahi ho raha haina😆

Daksh smiles; nahi ..abhi tak tho nahi...

Naina phirse hasi...aur phas gaya daksh...Naina reaches her destination..and asks daksh to stop the car

Naina; bas ,aagaya..
Daksh; itni jaldi aagaya??😕
, naina; kuch kaha tumne?
Daksh; kuch nahi...shaym ko pick up karu kya?
Naina; nahi main aajavungi..waise shyam tak thodina meeting chalegi..gets down the car..ok daksh bye...shaym ko milte hain

Daksh( dil mein); ussi pal ka tho intezaar hain❤️..aur kehta hain..ok then bye naina..

Dono chale gaya apne apne kaam se

Contd...

Edited by lucky.m - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Dakshu talking abt handbags??🤣 so funny...nice concept😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART -4..contd...

Daksh reaches his office, but is not in an mood to work.He is tensed and worried..impatient, not able to sit at one place...
Simran,his secretary notices this

Simran; sir; aapki tabiyat teek haina?
Daksh; haan..main teek hoon , mujhe kya hua?
Simran; woh aap kuch tensec lag rahe hain tho iss liye maine poocha...
Daksh sits in his chair, drinks water..; aisa kuch bhi nahi..tum apna kaam karo.simran nods her head and continues with her work

Daksh holds his phone; within himself; kya naina ne kaht pad liya hoga? phone karu usse? lekin abhi abhi tho drop kiy ..meeting mein hogi shayad..lekin kaise pata karu.usne pada ya nahi.shyam tak tho ye tension mujhse bardaash nahi hoga...Thinking this...he looks at simran..aur uske dimmag nein ek khayal aaya

Daksh; simran..tumse kuch poochnatha?
simran looks at him; kahiye sir
Daksh; woh mere ek friend hain.usse ek ladki se pyar hogaya..woh uski dost hain..usse propose karte huye usne ek letter likha aur uski hand bag mein dal diya..ab pata kaisa chalega ki uss ladki ne letter pada ya nahi
Simran;agar usne leeter padi hogi tho shayad call karegi..lekin sir mujhe lagta hain aapke dost ne hand bag mein dalkar galat kiya..kya guarntee hain? agar miss hogaya tho..haath mein de diya hotha...😆
Daksh more tensed now..😕; samjho ki letter miss nahi hua..tho..
Simran;sir aapke dost kuch kaha hogana..ki letter padne ke baad phone karne le liye..ya khai milne ke liye..
Daksh; haan..terrace pe? nahi nahi.😆.terrace nahi.mujhe pata nahi..😆

Simran; tho woh waha aajayegi agar pyar karti he tho

Daksh' lil frustated' offo simran..maine tumse kya poocha uar tum ya keh rahi ho?.uski aane thak intezaar karna bahut miskil hoga... pls mujhe itna batavo ki mujhe kaise pata chalega...mere matlab mere dost ko..ki usne pada ya nahi..

Simran; sir..ek tareeka hain..uss ladki ko phone karne se..agar woh normally baat karegi tho usne nahi pada..pyar se baat karegi tho usne aacept karliya..agar phone kaat degi ya phir guse mein baat karti hain , agar avoid karegi tho..usne inkaar kar diya..simple/...

Daksh; perfect..bahut acha idea hain..meim abhi call karta hoon..simran looks at him surprised.😲..
daksh; woh mere friend ko ye batane ke liye.😆..but he thinks he will call in noon..and postpones his call...

Daksh; (within himself); daksh tu ek dum buddu hain😆..letter haath mein diya hotha..agar sachmuch misss hogaya tho aur paagal ki tarah raat 12 00 Pm ko milne ke liye kaha. phone karne ke liye keh sakte the,..ab bardaash karo..isss tension ko...tera kuch nahi hosakta..😉

Daksh tries to concentrate on work to reduce his tension..but everytime he keeps loooking at time and phone.Simran is sure ki iss kp ko aaj kuch hogaya...

Daksh; simran..tumhare friends ke saath aisa kuch hua..tumhara bhi tho boy friend hain na
Simran; hamare story tho success tha..lkin mere ek freind tha..uske saath bhaut boora hua
Daksh suddenly becomes concerned; kya hua?😲

Simarn; sir..uss ladke ne bhi aapki friend ki tarah apne dost ko propse kiya..lekin usne mana kardiya..ye kehke ki woh sirf usse acha dost maanti hain..aur kuch nahi..uske dil mein aisa kuch bhi nahi..aur ab woh dost bhi nahi reh sakte..

Daksh immediately imagines the situation with him and naina( naina saying this to him)🤣
Daksh; nahi..nahi..aisa nahi ho sakta..bilkul nahi...😆( speaks out)
simran; sir ..kya hua? aap teek hain
Daksh comes into this world; haan..teek hoon
Ye sunne ke baad dakshu ka tension aur bad gaya.😉.b'cos he can't think of loosing naina..and idea of naina refusing his proposal will kill him..
Daksh; phir uss ladke ka kya hua?

Simran gives sigh; kya kahu sir; woh tho majnu aur devdas ka combination bangaya..aur..har waqt gham mein dooba rehta hain..us ladki ko woh bhool nahi paa raha hain..hum sabne bahut koshis ki use normal baane ki lekin..woh tho hamesha kisi doosre duniya mein khoya rehta hain

Dakshu immediatly imagines himself in same situation😭( woh beard ke saath..devdas bankar ghoom raha hain..naina 😆..naina kehte huye, asu bahate huye)...🤣🤣

Daksh decides ' ab bahut hogaya..ab aur nahi, naina ko ek baar phone karleta hoon.. pata chal jayega usne pada ya nahi..( he plans to follow simran's idea)..
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contd...

PS; Guys, the main intention of this part is bring out the anxiety and tension of daksh with a hint of humour..and I had to involve simran in this is to bring out daksh's state of mind...Hope u dont mind...and u will like it😉

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Posted: 13 years ago
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majnu nd devdas ka combo...aw man...🤣🤣🤣 luvd t lucky...dakshu tho gaya😆😆😆😆 baki ka kab dalegi yar...jaldi kar na...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lucky ur 2nd 3rd and 4th part all are awesome😉... I just read them... itna pyaara Dakshu... 😆
From where do u get these mindblowing ideas Lucky?😍... Just loved the whole scene...👏
Bechara Dakshu itna tension main (Majnu aur Devdas) 🤣🤣 nice idea of including Simran in the situation 😆Handbag and Dakshu ka connection wah wah 😆 Loved u dear for giving such a good FF 😛🤗
Please next kya hai dear... jaldi jaldo batao na please 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Poor KP! Simran scared him!!🤣 awww
Nice lucky! simply amazing👏! dakshu cant even lie properly!😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey what happens nxt lucky??😃 cant wait ! cant wait!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 5...contd...

Naina's client office...

Naina thought that meeting jaldi khatam ho jayega..lekin as her client is a very busy woman..thoda late ho gaya and meeting starts up late😕

Naina starts explaining client about her themes..just then she gets a call from her office regarding some arrangements..she asks client to excuse her and attends the call aur after some time phir se baji phone..some wrong number..naina gets irritataed as well as client😡

Daksh's office

Daksh calls up naina.Naina who is alreday in an irritated mood..disconnects the call
Daksh feels lil bad and says; mera phone kat diya..He calls her up once again

Naina; picks up the call' daksh..maine ek baar call disconnect kiya..tum smajhte nahi//dekho main ab koi baat nahi karna chahthi..baad mein baat karenge..and disconnects the call

Daksh ka chehra utar gaya..😕..Naina switches off her mobile asks client to excuse her and continues meeting

Daksh in office..remembers simran words and naina words..aur woh phir se tension me lag jaata hain.😆.( bcos naina spoke angrily with him);

Daksh; mujhse aisa kaise baat karsakti hain woh..kahi usne letter pad liya aur mere pyar ko..inkaar...nahi nahi...acha yahi hoga ki ab seedha terrace pe milunga..wahi saari baatein clear ho jayenge...haan yahi teek hoga...

Daksh slowly gets into work aur dekhte dekhte evening hogaya.

.6.00pm

Simran ka kaam khatm hogaya..daksh asks her to leave..before leaving simran..

Simran; sir aapki friend ne uss ladki ke liye gift liya jab woh accept kargi tho dene ke liye?
Daksh;arey gift? uske baare mein tho mein bhool gaya//thanks simran yaad dilane ke liye...

Simran leaves from there aur dakshu bhi jaldi jaldi apna kaam liptake waha se nikalgaya naina ko gift karidne ke liye...

Daksh after going through heavy thought process on what to gift naina..he finally decides to give her a ring..THo daksh gaya..ring ke shop mein..finally he chooses one simple diamond ring( wow..kash koi mujhe bhi gift karta).😍. dakshu uss ring ko dekh kar imagine karta hain poora scene jab woh naina ko ye ring pehnayega.😍.apne aap mein khush ho jaata hain..😛.aur hamare liye smiles hi smiles deta hain...😛
Dakshu reaches home..

.8.00pm Patwardhan house


Ayi asks daksh to freshen up and come down for dinner.Daksh ki aankhen kisi ko dhoond rahe hai😉.he ask ayi about naina.ayi says she is not yet back ans she will be lil late today( naina calls and informs ayi)

Daksh lil disapponited , but goes into his room.takes out gift..aur naina's photograph from file.. looking at photograph; naina..kaha ho tum?😕

Naina' sday

After client meeting..miss chopra finalises on one theme..and as lesstime is left for wedding arrangements naina seedha shopping par chali gayi asking seema to join her.at some place.She calls aku and asks her to take care of office..and client as she will be late..and she calls and informs ayi

Contd...

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