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Ok...guys. sou sou had requested me to write a letter for naina on behalf of daksh..so here we go

Situation;

Ye uss waqt ki baat hain jab dakshne ke life mein koi villians nahi..sirf dakshna hain..
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Daksh falls madly in love with naina and he tried a lot to express his feelings but couldnt.So finally he decides to write aletter to naina bearing his hr8 out..
This letter is a small attempt to put daksh's love for naina into words..Hope u will like it

Daksh is in his room.sitting on the reading table..with a letter pad.Uske saamne hain naina ka photo and he starts writing letter


DAKSH KA LETTER

Naina,
Samaj mein nahi aa raha kaha se shru karu.Tum soch rahi hogi ki maine ye khat kyu likha😲, jab tu mere saamne ho.Ek aisi baat hain jo mein bahut dinose tumse kehna chahta hon lekin keh nahi paya..aaj main ne decide karliya ki ye baat tum thak pahucha doonga..

Tum soch rahi ho ki aisa kya zaroori baat hain...woh ye hain ki...ki.. naina.mujhe pyar hogaya hain tumse ,tumhari har ek baat se.❤️.Naina ,mein nahi jaanta ye kab, kaha kaise aur kyu hua , main bas itna jaanta hoon ki main tumse pyar karta hoon..I love u naina ..I love u a lot ...❤️

..Mujhe pata hain tumhe yakeen nahi ho raha ye padkar, lekin yeh sach hai ki main tumse pyar karne laga hoon..chahne laga hoon tumhe..itna..itna..ki baaton mein pata nahi saktha

Kash ye baat main tumhare haath pakadkar,,tumhare aankhon mein dekh kar kehpata..lekin kya karu😍

Maine tumse ye baat batane ki bahut koshshis ke,lekin pata nahi jab bhi tumhare saamne aata hoo tho bas.kuch bol nahi pata..bas khojata hoon..tumhari aankhon mein,tumhare baaton mein...ya phir daar tha hoon..tumhare jawaab sun ne se..tumhe khone ka darr😕.. jo.mujhse bardaash nahi hoga..😭
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Jab se mujhe iss pyar ka ehsaas hua, tab se meri poori duniya badal gaya.sab kuch acha lagne laga.jab tum meri saath hote tho..tho duniya aur bhi khoobusurat lagne lagta hain, aisa lagta hain ab meri zindagi mein sirf khusiyan hain..😃 aur jab tum pass nahi hoti tho kuch acha nahi lagta..tumse milne ke liye,tumse baat karne ke liye,tumhe dekhne liye tadap tha hoon...bahane banane lagta hoon...😊

.Din raat tumahre baare mein sochtha rehta hoon😍..tumhare khayalo mein khoya rehta hoon..😍office jaa rah hoon lekin kaam par concentrate nahi kar paa raa hoon..kisi bhi kaam par nahi..Mera dil aur dimaag par sirf tum chaihuyi ho naina..

Jab bhi tum meri kareeb aati ho..tho mere dil ki dhadkan achanak se badh jaata hain..aisa lagta hain ki dil mein ek thoofan utt raha hain..❤️..

Jab bhi tum apna haath mere haath pe rakhthi ho..tho tumse ye poochna chahtha hoon ki naina kya tum mere haath zindagi bar ke liye dhaam loge,??

Maina nahi jaanta ki tumhare dil mein mera liye kya hain?..tumhare dil mein bhi wai feelings hain ya nahi..lekin ab mujhse aur nahi hoga...mere dil mein tumhare liye pyar badta hi jaa raha hain aur ab mein isse aur dabakar nahi rakh sakta..aisa lag raha hain ki agar tumse nahi kahunga tho paagal ho javunga...mere jaan chala jayega..iss liye ye khat likh raha hoon

Naina .tum mera pehla aur aakhri pyar ho aur, rahoge hamesha hamesa ke liye...aur main tumhara saath chahtha hoon zindagi bar ke liye...kya tum mere humsafar banoge? kya tum mujhse shaadi karoge?

Naina ,agar tumhare dil mein bhi mere liye kuch bhi felings hain aur agar tum bhi mere baare aise sochti hoo tho..aaj raat 12.00 pm mujhe terrace par milo.Main tumharae intezaar karunga..iss umeed ke saath ki tumavoge meri zindagi mein, mera pyar bankar aur kal se hamri zindagi ki nayi shruvad hogi...Maine apna dil tumhare haath mein rakh diya...iss jodna ya thodna tumhari marzi.Tumhara jo bhi faisla hoga mujhe manzoor hoga..

PS; Naina..ye khat nahi..mera dil hain..aur iss mein likha hua ek ek shabd mere pyar hain tumhare liye..I love u naina..I love u..

Tu hi hasrat, tu hi chahat, rab hi tu hain, tu ibadat,
Meri maanat, meri jannat,ishq tu hain, tu mohabbat...❤️..

Tumhare pyar mein paagal
Daksh

Contd...


PS; I will continue this fiction simultaneously..this will be a small Fiction..Hope u will like it😉

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Posted: 13 years ago
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like it? hey i love it..wht an idea.. and wht story..aasa letter to CVS vale chahkar bhi nahi likh sakte..aisa soch bhi nahi sakte.. good job lucky.m..! impressed..!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Mindblowing😊kya letter hai.Wow just loved it lucky keep it up.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Like it Lucky ?... Simply loved it 😃🤗 Wonderful 😊...
Aaisa agar actual SSBN main hua hota to itna ramayan mahabharat hota hi nahi 😆😆... CV's ko kuch apne forum writers se sikna chahiye... 😉
U are just amazing Lucky 😛👏 Naina ka kya haal hai after reading the letter want to know...😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
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After reading this letter if anyone still doesnt feel for daksh or doesnt wanna fall in love that means that their hearts are made of stone!!
Wow lucky! this is so beautiful, so touching👏 make me wanna fall in love right now and what a lucky girl Naina is😍 amazing!! i wish gaurav can read this somehow...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow.. wow..!!!! 👏
credit goes to sou sou also for the idea... 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow.. U r great.. Ur thought like it.. Thank u so much..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: lucky.m

Ok...guys. sou sou had requested me to write a letter for naina on behalf of daksh..so here we go

Situation;

Ye uss waqt ki baat hain jab dakshne ke life mein koi villians nahi..sirf dakshna hain..
.
Daksh falls madly in love with naina and he tried a lot to express his feelings but couldnt.So finally he decides to write aletter to naina bearing his hr8 out..
This letter is a small attempt to put daksh's love for naina into words..Hope u will like it

Daksh is in his room.sitting on the reading table..with a letter pad.Uske saamne hain naina ka photo and he starts writing letter


DAKSH KA LETTER

Naina,
Samaj mein nahi aa raha kaha se shru karu.Tum soch rahi hogi ki maine ye khat kyu likha😲, jab tu mere saamne ho.Ek aisi baat hain jo mein bahut dinose tumse kehna chahta hon lekin keh nahi paya..aaj main ne decide karliya ki ye baat tum thak pahucha doonga..

Tum soch rahi ho ki aisa kya zaroori baat hain...woh ye hain ki...ki.. naina.mujhe pyar hogaya hain tumse ,tumhari har ek baat se.❤️.Naina ,mein nahi jaanta ye kab, kaha kaise aur kyu hua , main bas itna jaanta hoon ki main tumse pyar karta hoon..I love u naina ..I love u a lot ...❤️

..Mujhe pata hain tumhe yakeen nahi ho raha ye padkar, lekin yeh sach hai ki main tumse pyar karne laga hoon..chahne laga hoon tumhe..itna..itna..ki baaton mein pata nahi saktha

Kash ye baat main tumhare haath pakadkar,,tumhare aankhon mein dekh kar kehpata..lekin kya karu😍

Maine tumse ye baat batane ki bahut koshshis ke,lekin pata nahi jab bhi tumhare saamne aata hoo tho bas.kuch bol nahi pata..bas khojata hoon..tumhari aankhon mein,tumhare baaton mein...ya phir daar tha hoon..tumhare jawaab sun ne se..tumhe khone ka darr😕.. jo.mujhse bardaash nahi hoga..😭
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Jab se mujhe iss pyar ka ehsaas hua, tab se meri poori duniya badal gaya.sab kuch acha lagne laga.jab tum meri saath hote tho..tho duniya aur bhi khoobusurat lagne lagta hain, aisa lagta hain ab meri zindagi mein sirf khusiyan hain..😃 aur jab tum pass nahi hoti tho kuch acha nahi lagta..tumse milne ke liye,tumse baat karne ke liye,tumhe dekhne liye tadap tha hoon...bahane banane lagta hoon...😊

.Din raat tumahre baare mein sochtha rehta hoon😍..tumhare khayalo mein khoya rehta hoon..😍office jaa rah hoon lekin kaam par concentrate nahi kar paa raa hoon..kisi bhi kaam par nahi..Mera dil aur dimaag par sirf tum chaihuyi ho naina..

Jab bhi tum meri kareeb aati ho..tho mere dil ki dhadkan achanak se badh jaata hain..aisa lagta hain ki dil mein ek thoofan utt raha hain..❤️..

Jab bhi tum apna haath mere haath pe rakhthi ho..tho tumse ye poochna chahtha hoon ki naina kya tum mere haath zindagi bar ke liye dhaam loge,??

Maina nahi jaanta ki tumhare dil mein mera liye kya hain?..tumhare dil mein bhi wai feelings hain ya nahi..lekin ab mujhse aur nahi hoga...mere dil mein tumhare liye pyar badta hi jaa raha hain aur ab mein isse aur dabakar nahi rakh sakta..aisa lag raha hain ki agar tumse nahi kahunga tho paagal ho javunga...mere jaan chala jayega..iss liye ye khat likh raha hoon

Naina .tum mera pehla aur aakhri pyar ho aur, rahoge hamesha hamesa ke liye...aur main tumhara saath chahtha hoon zindagi bar ke liye...kya tum mere humsafar banoge? kya tum mujhse shaadi karoge?

Naina ,agar tumhare dil mein bhi mere liye kuch bhi felings hain aur agar tum bhi mere baare aise sochti hoo tho..aaj raat 12.00 pm mujhe terrace par milo.Main tumharae intezaar karunga..iss umeed ke saath ki tumavoge meri zindagi mein, mera pyar bankar aur kal se hamri zindagi ki nayi shruvad hogi...Maine apna dil tumhare haath mein rakh diya...iss jodna ya thodna tumhari marzi.Tumhara jo bhi faisla hoga mujhe manzoor hoga..

PS; Naina..ye khat nahi..mera dil hain..aur iss mein likha hua ek ek shabd mere pyar hain tumhare liye..I love u naina..I love u..

Tu hi hasrat, tu hi chahat, rab hi tu hain, tu ibadat,
Meri maanat, meri jannat,ishq tu hain, tu mohabbat...❤️..

Tumhare pyar mein paagal
Daksh

Contd...


PS; I will continue this fiction simultaneously..this will be a small Fiction..Hope u will like it😉


haaa Daksh tho pagal aur ek khat padkar mai aur bhi pagal bhangayi hooo pata nahi Naina aur kitna Kush hojayagi...Thank u Sooo much Lucky.m
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Contd...PART 2

Daksh completed writing letter...and he takes a deep breath( ofcourse itna emotional ho kar khat likne baad itna na tho banta haina).😆..takes naina's photo graph into his hand..lovingly touches th photograph..takes the letter and folds it

Just then ayi comes

Ayi; chintu kay kar raha hain?.
daksh hurriedly keeps letter in his pocket😲 and phot ko file mein rakh deta hain and says; kuch nhai ayi,kuch office ka kaam tha..
Ayi; acha..naasta karne neeche aaja aur aate waqt naina ko bula lena..saying this she leaves

Daksh goes near naina's room knocks the door..no reply..he slowly goes inside..naina not in room..daksh finds naina's hand bag on bed..
Daksh; hey bahgawan..ye letter naina tak pahhuchadena pls..pls.😛.

He takes hand bag and puts letter in it.just then naina comes in

Naina; daksh...tum yaha..😲
Daksh stuns for one min...he puts hand bag on bed and turns towards naina

Daksh; hai naina..good morning..woh woh..ayi ne tumne neeche naaste ke liye bhulaya tho iss liye..😛
Naina; comes in takes her hand bag and file on table..; acha..main akruthi ki room mein gayi thi..tho chale

Daksh; haan...chalo

Daksh and naina come down for brk fast...daksh ki dil mein count down shuru hogaya.😛.He is tensed and is going through array of emotions...Daksh and naina sit on dining table.naina asusaul baatein kar rahi hey..daksh bhi as usaul uski baaton mein khoya hua...😍..apne aap mein muskuraata hua...

Naina; daksh, agar tum office ke liye nikal rahe ho kya tum mujhe chod doge?mujhe raaste mein kuch kaam hain
Daksh ka tho hogayi god morning..; haan haan ..kyu nahi..mein chod dunga..( dil dance jo kar raha hain)

Dakshna say good bye to ayi and get into car...start from PH

oN THE WAY...IN THE CAR...dakshna❤️...

.CONTD......

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Make it a happy ending lucky🤗

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