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Posted: 16 years ago
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hello guys iam back with part 2 as promised hope u enjoy it
PART -2
Ranvir comes from the office early . He sees ragini keeping clothes in the cupboard so he goes behind and closes her eyes ragini is suprised and asks who is it? ranvir keeps quite then ragini says i know its u anmol though we have different bodies we r one soul and i can see through my mind , i can hear from my heart. Ranvir then hugs her tightly and says "anamika my love" i am soo much in love with u . will u marry me again ...then ragini smiles and says "i love u too ranvir" . Well to this ranvir says whom do u love ranvir or anmol 😉 . To this ragini says i love anmol because he is very caring , listen and understands me from my heart as a friend and ranvir is charming , romantic , husband who completes ragini . Ranvir holds ragini's face and tells i am so lucky to a have a wife like u and kisses her forehead . Ragini hugs him . 😊
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Alekh comes home and is busy reading some files. Sadhana comes there and gives him his tea. Alekh says to her that he is busy and asks to keep it on the table. sadi feels sad and walks away trying to keep her clothes in the cupboard. Then alekh smiles and sneaks behind sadi😉 and puts the necklace he bought her . sadi is so surprised the sudden gesture of alekh . then alekh asks her to open the pendant it has sadi and alekh's pic. sadi hugs him ..... then alekh tells her that he can't bear the pain of separating from her so he wants to be with her forever and ever. Then alekh gets little mischievous and kisses her on the neck. sadi blushes and runs way😳. Alekh also runs behind her . She goes to the kitchen and smiles to herself then vasu comes 🤢🤢 and asks sadi to make her a cup of tea and leaves. Alekh hears all this and hides himself behind the pillar after vasu leaves alekh comes and kisses sadi on the cheek . sadi gets shy she pushes alekh and says leave me i have work . Alekh acts angry😡😡 and says u hav time for everyone but not me and leaves. Then sadi runs behind alekh and hugs him from the back and says u r my "Dost and Destiny" how can i ignore u and leave u . 😊...............................................................................................................
sadi is making rangoli for the puja , ragini comes there to help sadi they both remember their childhood. Ragini then tells her how vineet bhaiyya used to spoil their rangoli and how bauji used make vineet bhaiyya make rangoli for them. They start laughing remembering all those cherished moments. Ranvir hides behind the pillar and mutters to himself she has time for everyone but me. He then takes a flower and tries to throw it on her but it hits sadi. Alekh then comes from the stairs. sadi seeing this smiles to herself and to alekh . Alekh doesn't understand what is going but smiles back at sadi. Ranvir throws the flower again but this time it hits alekh . Alekh sees ranvir hiding behind the pillar and smiles. He goes behind ranvir and holds his ears. Ranvir says bhaiyya nooo when did u come??what r u doing here????? Ragini and sadi smile to eachother . Then ranvir says bhaiyya leave me pls anyway u and i both know why we r here so what's the problem lets get the job done . Alekh says ranvirrrrrrrrrrrr and gives his brother a hug. They both stare at the sisters with a romantic look. The sister also stare at them. They are completely lost in eachothers eyes. Vasu and inderjit (kabab mein haddi)
come there all smiling and says looks like we have prem puja today. Hearing this they all come back to this world. sadi and ragini blush and shyly walk away. Ranvir and alekh also run away from there.............😉. vasu calls sadi and asks her to decorate the outhouse. There infront of the outhouse sadi confronts alekh he smiles slyly seeing her and pulls her to the side and starts hugging and kissing. sadi struggles to break from his grip. she tells him she has to decorate the outhouse . Alekh closes her mouth with one hand and keeps the other hand on her waist and pulls her towards him and tells her the weather is awesome, the moon is beautiful but amongst all u r very beautiful . Then they both stare into eachother's eyes. There vasu tells ragini and ranvir to help sadi in decorations . They both search for sadi everywhere inside the house but can't find her then they search outside saalekh in romantic mood. ranvir smiles and pulls ragini and says wahhh my brother does have taste....look at this place it is too good for romance and they look soo cute he then tells ragini u know ur sister is so unlike u, see she is romantic ..... ragini then pushes ranvir and walks away angrily but ranvir runs behind her and stops her . He says u know i like u even more when u get angry u look to beautifulllllll😊. ragini then hugs ranvirr.............
next part will be written soon..............................
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Posted: 16 years ago
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very nice priya keep it up..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow awsome secne of saalekh gr8 keep it up
Posted: 16 years ago
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OMGGGGG!! Priyaaaaaa That wassssssss sooooooooooo amazingggg..fantastic.....fabulousss 👍🏼 awww awawwwww!!!! What a scene..... 😍 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ Soooooooooooooooooooooo Romanticcccccc!!!

Dooooooo continueeeee.....waiting for the next parttt!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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amazing writing priya...
loved the parts alot khaas k the rangoli waala...
i guess ye dekh k creatives ko kuch seekhna chahiye...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey guys iam back with a bang an episode full of romance . so here goes .............
Alekh enters the ranvir's room . Ranvir is busy reading some files. So alekh comes and tells ranvir i want to tell u something. Ranvir says yes bhaiyya tell me ,alekh then shows him tickets to assam . Ranvir gets suprised he says r u going some where bhaiyya??? then alekh tells no not only but we all are u , me ,sadi and ragini all together.Wow bhaiyya what a pleasant surprise i am so happy bhaiyya . Then alekh leaves the room. Ranvir starts making a list of places they should visit. Ragini enters the room and sees ranvir all happy and humming .She asks him why he is so happy today. He pulls ragini and she falls on bed with ranvir on top of her. He tells her that we r going on a honeymoon all together and kisses her on the cheeks. ragini blushes and tries to runaway but he pulls her back where r u going janeman we hav lot of packing to do .........................................
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow gr8 again honeymoon of sa and rg cant wait and gr8 rg scene good
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Posted: 15 years ago
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ooooooooooooo honeymoon..!!! these brothers are crazy haan...hehehe
such a cute scene priyaaa loved it...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Priyaaaaaaa OMG again an honeymoon to assam 😆 😆 😆. Good Good I like it. Mast hai yaar.........
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Posted: 15 years ago
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PART 4 - page 3
HONEYMOON SPECIAL - PART 1
Alekh enters the room sadly and sees the excitement in sadi's eyes for the trip and gets even more sad. so just goes to sadi hugs her and tells her that we can't go now cause some important work came and i can't leave it . I already told ranvir and ragini not to change their plan and asked them to go. I am so sorry sadi i broke my promise. Sadi is touched by alekh and says it's k alekhji it is u that is important to me its k as long as i am with u i don't need to go anywhere else. They share an eyelock moment . Alekh kisses sadi on the forehead and tells her iam so lucky to have a wife like u. " I LOVE U SADHNA😊". He then asks her to come with him to drop ranvir and ragini in the airport. soon all four of them reach airport they bid eachother goodbye .

Ranvir and ragini take their seats, ragini is all sad and lost in thoughts about sadhna she is sad that they cannot come.Ranvir notices this and holds ragini's hand and assures her everything will be fine , he tells her don't worry they will come soon. The airhostess comes and tells everyone to wear seat belts , ragini struggles to keep hers then ranvir comes close and ragini tries to push ranvir away but ranvir comes then ragini says ranvir everyone is watching and suddenly closes her eyes 😳 blushing , ranvir smiles to himself and puts the seat belt. Then he comes close to her ears and whispers " janu u can open ur eyes , i kept ur seat belt " ragini opens her eyes and they both laugh . Ranvir then asks her were u expecting something more u know this majnu is always ready for his laila😉 and winks at her. Ragini smiles to herself and turns away watching through the window. Announcement comes and the plane is ready to take off. When it is going up ragini gets hell scared and holds ranvir tightly. After the takeoff ranvir kisses her on the forehead and holds her face with both his hands, he kisses her on the eyes and she opens them slowly he tells her nothing will happen to ragini when i am with u . i will never let anything happen.............😊😊😊
Meanwhile alekh and sadi return to rajvansh mansion . Alekh stops the car and tells sadi he will leave from here only but sadi says come inside and eat something and go but alekh says he getting late for work sadi walks away sadly and but turns around and sees alekh behind her he come to her and says he forgot 2 things . sadi says what is it i will get it for u then alekh comes close and touches sadi's lips and says u r smile it is my good luck charm and then the second thing is he kisses her on the lips for 5 min and then they both break apart sadi is so shocked with happiness and runs inside blushing .Alekh shouts behind sadi i will come early from work. Then he rushes to the office and finishes all his works so soon. They have 5 meeting and alekh completes them all and also meets all his clients and gives them a demo on his project . Vineet comes to alekh and says alekhji why r u rushing all ur works these are for the coming month u r so ahead of schedule what is happening then alekh tells bhaiyya i want to take ur sister for a long honeymoon so iam trying finish all my works so that i can enjoy with her. sadi is waiting for alekh to come back and sees the time it is 1:00 in the night. Finally she hears his footsteps and runs to hug him .Alekh is so suprised seeing sadi so and hugs her back they share eyelock.. Alekh then takes sadi to the car and takes her to the airport . sadi says what is this alekhji why r we here???? alekh says sadhna its a suprise for u . i wanted to suprise u so i completed all my works for the whole month so we can stay there in one month . It was actually planned by me and ranvir it is joint suprise now come fast and takes her inside the plane. they take off and reach the resort .................................................

precap
sadhna and alekh reach assam 😉
( dear all sorry for a late update i was busy with my college hope u enjoyed my writing so far , it is going to get more exciting so please do comment, u r comments give me pleasure to write more)
Edited by priya98 - 15 years ago

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