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Posted: 15 years ago
#41
chapter seven is amazing
i can just imagine alekh in jeans and black t-shirt
soo hawt
i wish saalekh would have kids
u should write a book
called ragvir and saalekh jodi's made in heaven
and put all the fantastic scenes inside
i always look forward to reading them.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: MrsAngadHasija

chapter seven is amazing

i can just imagine alekh in jeans and black t-shirt
soo hawt
i wish saalekh would have kids
u should write a book
called ragvir and saalekh jodi's made in heaven
and put all the fantastic scenes inside
i always look forward to reading them.

can you update soon i want to read more and more
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Posted: 15 years ago
#43
omg omg olalala oh ghosh yaar sa supervv roimantci oh god u jst taken my heart away gr8 plzz cont this type of r scene of sa and all daig r just fabulous well kids we want also 1 gril and one boy
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Posted: 15 years ago
#44
Hey guys thanks for the support i am so happy u liked the plot . i am trying to develop it. Our jodi is going to rock . u will see them now in way of romance.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: priya98

Hey guys thanks for the support i am so happy u liked the plot . i am trying to develop it. Our jodi is going to rock . u will see them now in way of romance.

of course we cant wait plzz update soon soon😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46
hi im new here..........but i used u read all topics........im big fan of bidaai..................read 5chapters till now of ur fiction ..........those were so romantic 😳.......continue writing...........hi to all
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Posted: 15 years ago
#47
CHAPTER - 8 ( pg :- 8)

Ranvir and Ragini meet Mr.Mehtha and gives him sendoff at the airport. After this they both go to the car and start driving towards the resort . He says to ragini " wah !! yeh kitini khoobsurat hain na ragini",
Ragini replies " Ha! ranvir sach mein bahut accha hain , mujhe bhi bahut pasand ayya " Ranvir then says i want to live here forever with my love😉. Ragini blushes 😳. Ranvir then sings the song " mere rang mein ragne wali from maine pyar kiya" and looks into her eyes ragini then turns his head and says ranvir look at the road and drive otherwise we will both die, Ranvir says no problem then we will both go to a place where nobody disturbs us and we will do only romance 😆😆. Ragini says ranvir stop it ! drive properly . They both reach the resort. They both go to the resort they don't find saalekh so they go and ask the waiter . Then waiter tells them they went to the park and gives Ragvir the directions to the place.
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Alekh and sadhana come back from their boat ride as it started raining heavily so they run towards a old horse shed and take shelter there. Sadi tries to dry her hair, meanwhile alekh tries to light fire. He sees sadi shivering so he goes to her , sadi blushes and moves away but he holds her saree and pulls it. sadi says " leave me alekh" Then alekh comes wrapping her saree to him and comes to her and and holds her , he says now we are so inseparable amd it is very cold i can't leave u iam warm here and starts kissing her 😉😉. Sadi says alekh pls and unwraps alekh and walks towards the door . Alekh stands behind and watches her ...... Alekh then says sadhna u r looking more beautiful today , sadi replies alekh think of how to get home i am getting scared and feeling very cold. Alekh comes and puts an old blanket on her and says don't worry when iam here. They both sit near the fire lost in each others eyes .
Ranvir and ragini wander in the park searching for saalekh. They both see light so they walk towards it and find saalekh there. Ranvir comes near alekh and pats on his shoulder saying bhaiyya u scared us but alekh doesn't respond he shkes alekh but alekh still doesn't respond so he takes a twig of grass and puts in alekh's nose. Alekh sneezes loudly 😆 then sadi also comes back from the dream land. She is surprised to ragvir there. So she asks them " when did u come ranvirjii, jijji" Ranvir then says long time back Bhabi but we find romeo Juliet so much in love and busy looking in eachother's eyes. then sadi 😳😳 and allu blush😳😳😳.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#48
i always wait for the story to be updated
wicked story!
amazing
i love saalekh's barn romance
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Posted: 15 years ago
#49
hey thanks i will be updating it regularly now till the 11th of this month. so new story everyday as i have holidays now . pls read everyday at 6:30 pm and write comments ...........
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Posted: 15 years ago
#50
wow yaar u r not kum from ct wow saalekh romance is soo bang romance gr88 awsome and luved ragvir sequences and dialouge

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