crazy creations-FF part 1 - Page 3

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Posted: 15 years ago
#21
very nice lovely romantic what can i say.........waiting for them to reach aasam😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey guys iam seeing so many people reading my posts i request all of u too comment it keeps me motivated...........
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Posted: 15 years ago
#23
i will come soon with the next part, do press like button if u like it
Edited by priya98 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey priya what can i say these are very romantic ...iam loving .......the romance of ragvir and saalekh specially ragvir ........and our majnu ranvir...😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
#25
WOOWOWWWWOWOOWOW
i could just imagine itt
its amazing!
i love itt
:)

ranvir shirtless, IS VERY HAWT
i wish we could actually see this in bidaai
and some saaelekh scenes too

keeep writing
ur FF'S are great!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#26
chapter -5 page 4 updated
Ranvir and ragini the majuli hotel and resorts . Ranvir falls on the bed and says gosh i am so tired after a long journey. Ragini also falls next to him and says me too but i feeling hungry . Ranvir gets up quickly and says me too first i will call mom and tell her that we reached safely meanwhile u get ready ,we will both go and have dinner together. Then ranvir calls alekh and asks him " bhaiyya where r u ?" , alekh replies " ranvir we r in the airport our flight is delayed due to bad weather , ranvir says its k then see u soon. ranvir then calls the reception and asks them to arrange a pool side dinner. Ragini comes wearing a beautiful blue colored dress ranvir sees her and is lost .He walks up to her and holds her face and says u look so beautiful, ragini smiles shyly and asks ranvir to get ready . ranvir comes wearing a white shirt and black jeans( looking smoking hot😉) . Ranvir asks ragini to walk to reception the ranvir gets a call , he asks ragini to wait and he will come back soon and leaves from there, Ragini waits for him in the lobby , a waiter walks up to ragini and asks her that somebody is waiting for her in the pool side , ragini walks to the pool side , she finds nothing but moonlight falling on her. Then slowly all the lights come and ragini is so shocked to see the place decorated with candles and roses . she then sees ranvir holding a bouquet of roses. He hands her the flowers , kneels down takes out ring from his pocket and says let's fall in love again 😉. Ragini smiles and says sorry but i have other plans 😛. ranvir is shocked by her response he says what??? ragini says i am already in love with somebody that i don't have time for u . ranvir gets bit angry and says who is it? Ragini says it's u anmol 👏. Ranvir is so happy hearing this . They both hug and dance together ( hum tum song is played in the background).
Alekh and sadhna board the flight , sadi falls on alekh's shoulder and says is this real or just a beautiful dream. Alekh then holds her hand and says i am here to fulfill ur dreams so this is real sadhna and kisses her forehead. she then asks how much time it will take to reach assam , alekh says it will take us 2 hrs as the weather is not good but don't worry . Then sadi sleeps on allu's shoulder . allu watches her sleep and says u r my pari😉. They reach at 4 ' clock in the morning to the hotel , ranvir and ragini r sleeping . Sadhana and alekh knock their door. Ragini wakes up and says ranvir wake up open the door somebody is knocking it . Sorry ragini but i am soo sleepy u only go. Ragini says oh ho ranvir and walks to the door and opens it. Sadi says gudmorning jiji , ragini is so shocked seeing sadi and alekh she shouts with joy so loudly that it wakes ranvir , ranvir says oh my god u have such a bad of reacting to ur surprise and walks to alekh and hugs him. Ranvir asks alekh how was his flight . Alekh says it was gud.....meanwhile both sister go to the side start talking . ranvir says " dear ladies it is 4'o in the morning and ppl like me and my brother need some sleep as we r overworked and less loved by our beautiful wives so pls do the honour let us sleep, alekh gives ranvir a hi-5 and says i totally agree with u ranvir. To this sadi and ragi get angry 😡 and sadi replies jijji these ppl are so jealous of us that's why they r behaving like this ,ragini says yes and they both start giggling . Ranvir sighs and walks away with alekh to the other room and they both sleep soundly 😆😆.

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Posted: 15 years ago
#27
it was gr8.........loved it
eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 15 years ago
#28
hey priya
just read ur chapter #1, and its really very cute, i wish we actually got such cute and romantic scenes in bidaai as well!!

will be reading all ur chapters right nw, and will post my comments after reading them

Keep up the good work sweetie 🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
#29
It is awsome my dear👍🏼. 🤗 I will be waiting for ur next part.😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#30
awwwwwwwww sooo romantic....wish to see our salekh like this in television too...
ragvir are soooo cute...

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