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Posted: 15 years ago
#31
omg so awsome i missed 2 chapters but i read bot omg sa aise bidaai mein omg i will die thnks fro such an awsome fantabulous romantic scens ghosh u r supervvv plzz cont always omg awsome yaar gr888 rr toh int e fabulous lage aur sa ka romance sone pe suhaga ur all dialouges of regarding allu is soo nice yaar keep it up
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Posted: 15 years ago
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CHAPTER - 6 (page 5 updated)
Sadhana and ragini enter alekh's room and sees ranvir and alekh sleeping . sadi calls them but they don't wake up, ragini says i will wake them up and goes near ranvir and shouts " Good Morning", ranvir wakes up suddenly and accidentally kicks alekh , alekh falls from the bed and wake up, Ragini comes near sadi and says now they woke up. Sadi and ragi starts laughing seeing both the brothers. Ranvir gets angry and walkes to their room, ragi gets scared and runs behind ranvir. There alekh is still sitting on the ground looking at sadi who was so beautiful in maroon red anarkali dress with green border. Sadi walks to alekh and gives him a hand but alekh pulls her towards him and sadi falls on top of alekh. Alekh kisses her on the cheek and says wow u look too good. sadi blushes and gets up and runs towards the window alekh comes behind and hugs sadi, he puts hair infront and kisses her on the neck , he then turns sadi around and says u forgot something , Sadi is puzzled she says what did i forget alekhjii? u forgot my good morning kiss , and he holds her face and kisses her on the lips . Suddenly a waiter comes and knocks at the door with breakfast , saalekh break apart ,sadi runs away blushing 😳😳😳. Alekh goes to opens the door and gives the waiter 500 rupees and says until i call u don't even come near this part of the resort tell all the other's including room service until i tell u ..he keeps don't disturb sign,closes the door and runs for sadi...........................................
There ranvir enters the room and sits on the bed, ragini comes and goes to ranvir. she kneels down and says " ranvir iam sorry , i didn't mean to hurt u '', it's jus for fun . Ranvir turns away pretending he is angry but is enjoying every moment of ragini pleading him ....ragini feels sad and gets up to walk away, then ranvir holds her hand and says oh! i was not angry with u , i was jus pretending , ragini hearing this gets angry😡 and tries to walk away but ranvir pulls her towards him and lifts her head up and says see my eyes can't they tell u how much i love u , and see puts hand on his heart and says this heart beats ur name then how can i get angry on u , but i must say u looked very beautiful when u were pleading for forgiveness and hus her . Ragini i love u , Ranvir i love u too........
😆Alekh starts running after sadi when his mobile starts ringing...it's vasu 🤢. Alekh picks it up and tells her they reached safely, ranvir ,ragi and sadi are fine. when vasu starts telling abt something alekh tells vasu that he can't hear as the signals are bad here. He tells her he will call her soon and asks her not worry abt them ( bravo alekh😆)... sadi hearing this comes to alekh and says it is bad to lie that to mummyjii , alekh holds sadi by the waist and says "sweetheart for u i will do anything to spend time with u and i don't like any disturbance even if it is from good". They both are lost into eachother's eyes when they hear a door knock. Alekh gets very angry now 😡
😡 he goes opens the door shouting can't read the sign it said don't disturb but finds ranvir and ragini. Ranvir says sorry bhaiyya i am uneducated and i love disturbing romantic couples
😆. Alekh says ranvir stop it now and come in . Bhabi promise me that bhaiyya will not hit me then only i will come . sadi comes and says ranvirji u know that ur brother will not hit u now come in. soon all three of them start talking, alekh goes to get ready...........................
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Posted: 15 years ago
#33
👏👏wow awsome chapter gr8 fantabulous omg u mk both jodi soooooooooooooooooo romantic aur sa toh oh ghosh ghazab yaar luv uu muaaahhhhh plz always cont i liked ttht funny scene ki rv hits and alekh's falls 4m bed😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
#34
Thanks for the support 😉. I want to see our jodi's like this happy and filled with nothing but love 😊.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#35
Hey guys pls comment it motivates me to write more i see atleast 600 ppl viewing posts . i request all of u to comment on my writing ......it keeps me charged ......and makes me think more , write more ....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#36
nice chapter. i loved it. Gr8 job👍🏼. u deserve a 👏.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#37
OH MY GAWD
I HAVE just read from page 2-5
and iTS AMAZING
i just cant express it!
u should SO be on the bidaai creative team
wow
ragvir scenes were soooo amazing
and alekh falls off the bed
LOOL
i loved the part where ragini goes to the poolside and she says "sorry i'm in love with someone else"
hahahahaha so funnyyy
and saalekh's MORNING KISSES
SO ROMANTIC
i LURVEEEE it
and the part where room service comes and alekh pays them to go away FAST
keep wriiting. at least we can read these scenes, even if we dont actually get to WATCH them.
cant wait for the next part :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
#38
CHAPTER - 7 (update pg- 5)
Alekh goes to the bathroom to take bath meanwhile ranvir, ragini and sadi sit on start talking , ranvir gets a call from inderjit , he tells ranvir and alekh to go Mr.Rakesh Mehra's house ( he is inderjit's close friend) ranvir says dad i will go but bhaiyya is in the bathroom after he comes we will all go then inderjit tells no ranvir Mr.Mehra is leaving india today so u go and meet him , u know how close he is to me . i can't come so u go on my behalf his health is not good he is going abroad for treatment . Ranvir says k dad i will go alone .Ranvir informs sadi and ragi this . sadi says ranvirji u and jiji go i will tell alekhji when he comes no problem. If u don't go papajii will feel bad. So, ranvir says his place is from here so we better leave now and he tells ragini to come ......
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Alekh comes wearing blue jeans and black t-shirt looking fabulous . Sadi sees him and stares at him all lost in his eyes and they both stare at each other. Alekh comes to sadi and says what are looking at ?? sadi says alekhji u r looking very handsome ....Alekh smiles hearing this and says " wah aaj bohut khas hai , sadi says kyun ??? alekh replies well aaj pehle baar mere patni mere thariff ki hain na iss liye" and he keeps his hands on sadi's shoulders and says if i looking that good then give me my good morning kiss , sadi blushes and turns away but alekh pulls her and hugs her ohh sadhna i love u too much. sadi says i love u to alekhji. Alekh says u changed my lifestyle u made what i am today and for that i am greatly indebted to u . sadi says alekhji i am ur wife i have to do this , it is my responsibility to take care of u and ur family. Alekh says sadi u r a wonderful human being and from today onwards leave ji and call me alekh i feel more close and happy. sadi says i love u alekh . Alekh kisses her forehead. Then alekh and sadi leave their room and go to a nearby park. Sadi and alekh walk in the park holding hands, they see so many kids playing alekh whisper's in sadi's ears how many do u want ??? sadi says what?? alekh says "kids" . sadi blushes . He then says sadhna i want a boy and a girl ?? sadi smiles😊. Alekh says no problem dear we can manage it ,and starts doing romance with her . sadi breaks free from alekh and says what is this alekh this is public place what will they say?? alekh then comes to her and holds her from the back and says they will say wah!! what a lovely jodi😉. Then they both spot a lake. Alekh puts his hand forward and says sadhana want to go on a boat ride . Sadi smiles and agrees for it. They both go on a boat ride lost in eachother's eyes and enter a new world filled with love 😉 ........................
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Posted: 15 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: MrsAngadHasija

OH MY GAWD

I HAVE just read from page 2-5
and iTS AMAZING
i just cant express it!
u should SO be on the bidaai creative team
wow
ragvir scenes were soooo amazing
and alekh falls off the bed
LOOL
i loved the part where ragini goes to the poolside and she says "sorry i'm in love with someone else"
hahahahaha so funnyyy
and saalekh's MORNING KISSES
SO ROMANTIC
i LURVEEEE it
and the part where room service comes and alekh pays them to go away FAST
keep wriiting. at least we can read these scenes, even if we dont actually get to WATCH them.
cant wait for the next part :)




hey thanks for the support i will write more😉.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: pankhi

nice chapter. i loved it. Gr8 job👍🏼. u deserve a 👏.



😊😊 thanks for the support dear😊
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