Tanhayee, dard,bechain & ek dil ka rishta - 2nd FF - Page 6

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Kinjal was happy she was freed to that gavar, and back to the Modi house. She was now to live a peaceful life.


Everyone knew something had to be done to bring Gopi and Aehem close. But how. They thought

Chapter 10

Kinjal had a brilliant idea. She thought of why not do a rapid fire on him which we will ask him random questions.


Jigar was overjoyed to hear kinjal idea, as he loves rapid fires.


After a while Aehem comes back from office. He comes in and sees everyone sitting in the main hall waiting for him and Gopi was there too with her ghoongat on her head which made him hate her but inside him he actually wanted to take it off her head. to see her face.


Rashi: finally... ur here, we've been waiting for you, how come u took soo late.


Aehem gave no answer and walked in and was stopped by Kinshuk.

Kinshuk: look, I have some questions which you have to answer honestly. If you lie detector will beep by itself even though its not connected to you.


Aehem : what, but am not in the mood


the lie detector beeped


Jigar: see it beeped, move and sit down here beside me.


Aehem sat beside him and drank water.


Finally the rapid fire started with the lie detector.


Kinjal: 1st question, Do u love Anita? Remember do not lie


Aehem: yes before marriage.


The lie detector never beeped. And they continued.


Kinshuk: ok, did Gopi tell you after that 5 lakh necklace that she is unpar?


Aehem: no she never


the lie detector beeped and the light flashed red.


Koki, that means she did and u never heard it


Aehem: maybe


it beeped again


Rashi: enough now, let me ask you, ok she an unpar, is that true u have enchanted to her beauty.


Everyone turned around and looked at her thinking what she is saying.


Rashi: tell me have you.


Aehem: why would I fall for a girl like her from a poor family huh. The one whom I never considered her as mines,


The lie detector beeped again.


Aehem: what nonsense is this, am fed up, am going.


It beeped again.


Everyone laughed quietly.


Kinshuk shouted in a fit of rage: sit down you.


Aehem sat down and started again, infact he had enough , and wanted to yell.


Panna came in and said: why did you slap her, are you mad, why did she leave the house? Is it for your sake or the family.


Koki was impressed by panna due to the way she asked him


Panna: boloo tell me


Aehem: soo many questions at one time , well she tried to ruin the family reputation by breaking kinjal marriage.


It beeped again everyone turned and looked at the detector


Aehem spoke again: nonsence again this detector, why would she leave the house for me, she left the house coz of the family and due to the vows she broke


the detector beeped again and red flashed again.


It was going on his nerves but he kept calm.


Kinshuk: do you still love Anita after the marriage? Do u still feel you have done the wrong mistake of getting married.


Aehem thought: omg I cant answer this coz I know I dont love anita naemore, and I have made a mistake


he spoke: I do love anita and I havent made a mitake.


It beeped again


Aehem heart was beating faster and faster as he didnt want anyone to know what is in his heart.

Panna : so many lies, jiju, wow am impressed at you


Panna winked and everyone burst out laughing. Rashi came up to her and pulled her cheeks : you are getting really naughty I will not spare you

Panna spoke again: so after all this you have 3 questions more. Number 1 from me, be serious with this. Do you love Gopi say yes or no


Aehem : he paused and spoke : No


The detector beeped


Everyone looked at him. Panna : you are caught, definitely caught you do love her.


Koki was impressed, she knew he will fall for her.


Kinjal: so you are caught. Ok now answer this, we came to knw what is in your heart , now will you remarry her


Aehem: what nae chance. Who marries 2wice, I dont


The lie detector never beeped but the red light flashed as it wasnt sure.


Kinshuk: why did you picked her up while she came back home from the hospital?


Aehem: coz I had to, u coughed at me and made me go and pick her up as you wouldnt


The lie detector beeped again.


Kinjal : now ur lying again. For god sake come back to the real world.


While Kinshuk switched of the detector jigar spoke


Jigar: look bhai admit u have fallen for her, now your stoned heart has melted finally. Your back to the real world


Aehem had tears in his eyes and went upstairs and was pissed off. Koki asked panna to come to her


Panna went to her and koki spoke: badmaashh your really naughty, ur rashi sister arent you. But you brought my son back to the real world and made his heart melted which no one could do. Am really impressed


Panna: kakiji I had to be naughty afterall, am rashi sister but I have kinshuk anger.

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Posted: 14 years ago
#52
Panna is so cute.... really love her a lot....

way to go ayesha... keep it up
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: upasana.diya

Panna is so cute.... really love her a lot....

way to go ayesha... keep it up



no worries honey i have another storyline should i open a new topic or shall i finish this first.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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if you can continue both side by side then go ahead and open another thread... if you want to write one at a time... keep writing the other on the side in your PC/Laptop and start posting once this is done...

i made the mistake of keeping both FFs going and with my work, am unable to touch either...

but i would love to read the other story tooo...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: upasana.diya

if you can continue both side by side then go ahead and open another thread... if you want to write one at a time... keep writing the other on the side in your PC/Laptop and start posting once this is done...

i made the mistake of keeping both FFs going and with my work, am unable to touch either...

but i would love to read the other story tooo...



yeh thnks diya
am always on a word document writing scenarios and then when i checked it over then i post it here
well i think i just post the other scenario in a hour time.


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: ayesha_78



yeh thnks diya
am always on a word document writing scenarios and then when i checked it over then i post it here
well i think i just post the other scenario in a hour time.




thats awesome... would love to read more from you... you write fabulously
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: upasana.diya



thats awesome... would love to read more from you... you write fabulously



aww how sweet.

ur actually the 2nd person who has done my tareef about how i write .
thnks hun
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ayesha! very beautiful updates! never was a lie detector put to such a use! what will we call kinjal and kinshuk - kinkin or jalshuk?

BTW, let me be the third to say that you write wonderfully and I hope that you keep writing and I keep reading them.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Loved the update, I liked the rapid fire idea.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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super update ayesha😊...lie detector test..wat an idea...i bet all the scientists in this forum will love it...
ahem is caught red handed...and panna is cute as usual...
wat next? wat next? i'l start suffering from bechain and dard if u dont update fast...

@bee: we'll name kinshuk and kinjal 'kinkin'...its kinda cool

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