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Posted: 14 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: br2499

Ayesha! very beautiful updates! never was a lie detector put to such a use! what will we call kinjal and kinshuk - kinkin or jalshuk?


BTW, let me be the third to say that you write wonderfully and I hope that you keep writing and I keep reading them.



we will call then KinKin
what an superb idea
but i prefer jalsuk better

aww thnks for lettin me knw i write wonderfuly bee no worries, am writing another senario except of this too called Wapsi hope u have read it so far.

i will thank my london lecturer who is actually in my area in glasgow who has taught me how to write a proper scenario.


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: madhu_sridhar

super update ayesha😊...lie detector test..wat an idea...i bet all the scientists in this forum will love it...

ahem is caught red handed...and panna is cute as usual...
wat next? wat next? i'l start suffering from bechain and dard if u dont update fast...

@bee: we'll name kinshuk and kinjal 'kinkin'...its kinda cool



no worries ill update the next chapter soon as u wish madhu
kinkin souunds good but i love the jalshuk better :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Panna: kakiji I had to be naughty afterall, am rashi sister but I have kinshuk anger.

Chapter 11

Everyone laughed at the naughty panna, and was happy that the lie detector made Aehem bring out the truth which was inside him. He was in his room, in a fit of anger, smashed 4glasses, and vases on the floor. His anger was najaize.

He spoke: How dare Kinshuk compelled me to speak everything what was inside my heart, with his lie detector and Kinjal with her rapid fires. Now everyone knows how am enchanted with her beauty, and I cant even accept it. Shes not even my type so why accept her. How dare they?

He took the table and throwed it and all the glass smashed into tiny pieces. He went to the washroom and took his shirt off. He had soo many scratches on his back and remembered what Gopi had done to him before they got married. He was disgusted to what she had done. He decided to forget it and called up the Doctor and said, : I want to meet you, as I want to get rid of the scratches on my back. The doctor agrees to this and he went downstairs and goes outside but he was stopped by Koki

koki: where are you going?

Aehem : I forgot my file in my car am going to get it.

He goes to the doctor and gets the operation started. It took 3 hours to get rid of them. The

doctor advised him to have bed rest.

He goes back home and again stopped by Koki: where have u been that long.

Aehem: I went to the doctors, had an appointment,

He goes upstairs without having food and sees the room cleaned.

He saw Gopi looking through the wardrobe finding her sari the one Koki gave her. He simply ignored her and went to the bed and went to sleep.

The next day, he woke up and went downstairs. He ate food, and found it delicious and everyone saw him smirking. They all smiled and Chirag says: Did u speak to Gopi and told her your feelings?

Aehem: nahi, I tell her the right time.

Actually Aehem was blushing from inside, but he was bechain and wanted to blurt out the truth so he left it for 2 days and tell her.

Chapter 12

Everyone was staring at him, which made him more anxious. He called mani : what is this, there is no salt in this chutney.

Mani: but, we made it perfectly, Gopi bhabhi has made it, how come today u said there is no salt.

Aehem: leave it

he walked away from the dinning table, and was trying to fool them. He walked upstairs and knew he had to confess but he had no guts to do so. On the other hand, there was a love blossom going on between Kinjal and Kinshuk or call them Kinkin or JalShuk. Koki noticed and whispered in hetal ear and told her to lood at them. She noticed them and told everyone about it but Kinshuk and Kinjal was on their love world and never heard thhem or noticed them staring. Everyone knew what was going on between them. Gopi came out and noticed the romance going on and spoke: Kinshuk,

he never heard her.

She pinched him and said: are you in the real world, leave kinjals hand, tujko sharam nai aayee, sub kai samnai, yeh pyaar ka tamasha kar rahay ho.

Kinshuk: look sis, dont u have to worry about us, u worry about that husband of urs, Aehem who will start romancing you soon then dont complain later he doesnt talk to you.

Gopi blushed and ran to her room and stopped on the doorway as Aehem was in front of her. They stood there looking at each other in the eye then was butted in by Kinshuk: aha, no there is another love blossom going on instead of me and Kinjal, superb.

Aehem never understood him and asked what he on about

He spoke: look Aehem, me and kinjal are going to get engaged soon and love each other just as the way that lie detector told us u love my sister. Now u get me,


sorry two chapters are together, hope u enjoy


Edited by ayesha_78 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64
thanks for the treat hun... Kinjal n Kinshuk getting engaged... wow...
please do write more soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Very nice Ayesha! I am looking forward for the romance. Let us go with jalshuk (sounds like jal jeera) as you are the author and so the God of this FF world.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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mast ayesha😊...so now we have jalshuk engagement and next ahem's confession...and lots n lots of romance...and honestly kinshuk's character reminds me of the real kinshuk mahajan (ranvir of bidaai)....so ur gonna keep us entertained 4 the rest of the week...keep it up gal!!!

Posted: 14 years ago
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Eh, wat did Gopi do to leave scratches on Aham's back?
I am not joking, i seriously dont know 😕
Tell me okay pls... Btw update was great
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: madhu_sridhar

mast ayesha😊...so now we have jalshuk engagement and next ahem's confession...and lots n lots of romance...and honestly kinshuk's character reminds me of the real kinshuk mahajan (ranvir of bidaai)....so ur gonna keep us entertained 4 the rest of the week...keep it up gal!!!




hey
yup loads of romancing gonna be here but it has to otherwise it gnna be dull and boring
well this kinshuk mahajan is the real kinshuk mahajan from the bidaai fame ranvirr or ccbm viren

i hope so ill keep up the entertainment for the rest of the week
enjoy
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: khansk

Eh, wat did Gopi do to leave scratches on Aham's back?
I am not joking, i seriously dont know 😕
Tell me okay pls... Btw update was great



well they had a fight to be honest just before she left the house after kinjal wedding, in their room long story but i will update this scene later as it will be out in the family
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Aehem never understood him and asked what he on about

He spoke: look Aehem, me and kinjal are going to get engaged soon and love each other just as the way that lie detector told us u love my sister. Now u get me,

Chapter 13

Aehem understood him and accepted the fact he actually did love that Gopi. But how he thought how

It was 8am next morning and the sangeet was tonight. Everyone was decorating the house. Gopi comes out of her room at 12pm in her golden ' green sari which was unknowingly gifted by Aehem which made her happy. She goes to the hall and sees the decorations. Aehem notices her in the sari he gifted in fact, he was smitten by her. He followed her and Hetal calls her: Gopi arre ur sari is looking good on u, the colour is really suiting u do buy more saris with this colour.

Hetal notices Aehem lookin at them and she whispers: If aehem sees you he will go crazy after all ur wearing his favourate collour.

In fact he had gone crazy, with her love. What could he do. This love compelled him to go near her.

After hetal goes Aehem goes up to her and says: aaj kya hogya, what made u compel to wear my fav colour, infact it suits u a lot. Gopi smiled and tried to stop blushing.

Everyone was watching them talking as their dooriyan was infact going away and they were coming close to each other

Edited by ayesha_78 - 14 years ago

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