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Posted: 14 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: ayesha_78



he has definetely
he must have smittened by her beauty LOL
😆😆
no worries will continue tomorrow, its already 12pm here in the UK, way past bedtime

hope you figure out what will come up next.
enjoy

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no worries hun
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks Ayesha, fabulous keep going.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Chapter 8

Gopi was shocked and inside her was butterflies. She never had love from her husband but she thought how come her aehemji is changed. She knew something had gone wrong.
Aehem took her to his bedroom(oops mean their bedroom) and put her onto the bed and sat beside her. He gave her food as she refused to eat it and gave her medicine.

Aehem: now you go to sleep, we will talk tomorrow, I know u are thinking why am I behaving like this but there is a reason.

He had tears, so he left the room while gopi slept. He goes up to Koki and says: ma, now u tell me what shall I do, I have hurt Gopi so much, but I don't have the courage to ask forgiveness, to that person who helped me in my needs, who slowly took over my heart when I never paid attention what shall I do?

He broke down and koki spoke: dikra, himat kar, yaad hai bachpan mein jub tum ghir jatai thai and I used to say stop crying and get up and ignore ur pains get up move get up. Now am saying to u again, go dikra, go to gopi himat kar aur don't lose, go son go. I am with u

Aehem was pleased and goes and sleep with Gopi. The next morning Rashi does pooja and everyone comes down. She gives it to everyone and goes up to kinshuk who was standing right at the back.
Rashi: kinshuk take the aarti,
He nods and takes it and rashi goes up to Gopi in the bedroom and gives it to her. Gopi health was a bit better.


After 10 days Gopi health got better. Aehem had started to talk polietly, he had never been angry at anyone neither in office and remained calm. He decided to tell Gopi how much she was to him while on the other hand Kinshuk at the Office talking to the police about what to do about Dhawaal. Now he thought of announce to the family how cheap and greedy man he was and they made a mistake of getting him married to Kinjal.


Enjoy friends
Next chapter updated tommorow
Edited by ayesha_78 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44
this was a treat... and we will wait for tomorrow for our next treat...

thanks hun
Posted: 14 years ago
#45
Hey Ayesha! I just read all 7 parts! They were wonderful, like really really wonderful! Looking forward to next chapter!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome Ayesha! hope you feel better now! take care.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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aww thnks bee
am feelin better now
next chapter updated in a while
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Posted: 14 years ago
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After 10 days Gopi health got better. Aehem had started to talk polietly, he had never been angry at anyone neither in office and remained calm. He decided to tell Gopi how much she was to him while on the other hand Kinshuk at the Office talking to the police about what to do about Dhawaal. Now he thought of announce to the family how cheap and greedy man he was and they made a mistake of getting him married to Kinjal


Chapter 9


Dhawal was a greedy man, even though he owned 4 restaurants in Bombay, one hotel in Rajkot but still. He got married to a rich girl, a girl who was the way he didnt want, totally opposite. He was fed up, fed up with this strict woman, Kinjal, Kinjal Modi, a girl who can go to any extent to leave him ,any extent of reuniting his brother with Gopi. She was happy Kinshuk had returned. After hearing his story about Urmi, about kicking him out in childhood made her hate urmi and dhawal more. She was involved in Kinshuk plan. She was happy and eager as she was to Divorce Dhawal, as she had fallen for Kinshuk. A man who is the type of guy she needs not like Umang, who ditched her just the sake of his sister.


Kinshuk smirked and said to Jigar: look all of you got married kinjal to Dhawal, but I know something about him that you dnt, you even know why Kinjal ran on wedding day, why she refused to marry him, because he is a cheater, a greedy man. He wants to take all the property of the Modi khandan and make it his, after Gopi got married to your brother.


Jigar was shocked.


Jigar went hope and promised to stay silent until Kinshuk announces it to the family. He had to get proof evidence, proper evidence to back it up as he knew Dhawal can go any extent for money.

He got 3 workers who was betrayed by Dhawaal, and stole their properties.


Kinshuk took his phone and made a call to the Shah family, Urmila picked it up and he spoke: if you want ur izzat to be secure come to the modi house exact 7pm, with Dhhawal. Dont worry about Kinjal as she is already there. He hunged.

Urmi : listen '.. Listen..


he cut the phone, but who was he, and why was he talking like that, I have to go with dhawal to the modi house to find out.

It was 6pm and they got ready. Jigar called everyone to the main hall as he had to speak something urgent, something which they did not know and Kinshuk did. Everyone was sitting down and the bell rang. Mani opened the door and saw Kinshuk there. He came in and says : Where is that cruelty woman and her nephew?


Urmi: am behind you.


Kisnshuk: so you are here finally , mr Dhawal Panday, a fraud who married a girl from the Modi house just to take their property.


Everyone was shocked. Utterly shocked to here what Kinshuk spoke.


Urmi: what are you saying why would dhawal do that.


Kinjal: acha why wont he, after all he had ditched 3 womens and 4 mens and stole their business and owned them.


There comes, Raghvan, Anshuman, Saurabh, Angad, Sadhna, Madhuri, and Tamanna.


Chirag: whats going on here


Kinshuk: I will tell you kaka, since the past 2 months there has been a decline in the Modi office as someone had done something which made it fall


Aehem: ha, but we didnt find out who it was.


Kinshuk: thats it, thats the reason, someone had made a proof plan so that no one could find out, its non other than ur sisters husband Dhawal. That guy who treated ur sister terrible, and now they are divorcing. Did you hear about that.


Everyone was shocked, and koki in a shock sat down.


Kinjal: ha bhai thats right, he used me. Told you so many times a dont want to marry him but nahi you all forced me now that what you all get.


Urmi spoke in a fit of rage


Kinshuk: bas, put you voice down, now you know what extent this na laik can go to, u cant imagine init, so now bear the consequences.


Dhawal laughed out loudly, : now you all know how am like, yes ave done all this, I have divorced your daughter, tried to take over modi business but failed, yes am a greedy man,


Dhawal goes on and on, and finally it can to an conclusion. The police came arrested both urmi and dhawal, for going against the Law, and there will get a severe penalty.


Kinjal was happy she was freed to that gavar, and back to the Modi house. She was now to live a peaceful life.


Everyone knew something had to be done to bring Gopi and Aehem close. But how. They thought

Edited by ayesha_78 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#49
nice one hun....
please continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#50
no worries diya
am so unsure how to right the next part :(

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