Tanhayee, dard,bechain & ek dil ka rishta - 2nd FF

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All fanfics and oneshots which i have been written with my own knowledge - this is solely my work and no one can recreate or copy my work without permission

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hello friends, am back with my 2nd scenario.

(The whole fanfic had been finished in september/october)

I hope u all enjoy it and do comment it

  • CH1/2 PG1
  • CH3/PG2
  • CH4/PG3
  • CH5/PG3
  • CH6/PG4
  • CH7/PG5
  • CH8/PG6
  • CH9/PG7
  • CH10/PG7
  • CH11/12/13/PG9
  • CH14/PG11
  • CH15/PG12
  • CH16/PG12
  • CH17/PG14
  • CH18/PG14
  • CH19/PG15
  • CH20/PG15
  • CH21/PG16
  • CH22/PG16
  • Ch23/Pg16 (same paragraph with ch22)
  • CH24/PG17
  • CH25/PG17
  • CH26/PG17
  • CH27/PG18-AFTER 6 YEARS LEAP STORY
  • CH28/PG18
  • CH29/PG18
  • ch30/pg18/19
  • CH31/19 -LAST CHAPTER


Chapter 1


Gopi left the house as kinjal has got married to the person she never wanted. She had to leave, leave for her Aehem ji and she remembered that day she broke the vows as he never wanted to accept her as his wife because she was an unpar, gavar. What could she do? Her happiness lies in this as well as everyone else. It was 12am everyone had gone to sleep and she was walking down in the middle of the road in the heavy rain, unknowingly she forgot that where she was going to go. She had no one in this world except from her mahma and mahmi and Dhawal bhai. Her mahmi refused to let her in the house, her mahma kept on watching her and was helpless. She was crying, asking kanha ji why he did this to her? What life did he give her. All she got is unhappiness, sadness and that's it. kyun kanha ji kyun, kya main itni burhi(bad) hoon, kya main insaan nahi hoon

The rain was pouring really heavily, the cars horning loudly telling her move at aside, but Gopi never heard anything. The cars drove really fast but thankfully Gopi got saved. It was 2pm, the rain gone heavier and the thunder started to happen. Gopi started to stride, with a black bag in her hand, and knew nothing about Rajkot. Gopi was likely to vomit as she hadn't ate since morning. She was all in pain and was lonely. She barely never told anyone her feelings and never had a mother's love.

Gopi: kyun kanaji, kyun, pehle aap nai mujse merai ma bab to laye gaye aur aj Aehemji aur sasural ko. Why did I have to see this, why am I repenting all this, kya maine koi bap kiya pechle janam mein is liye aj mein os ki saza laye rahi ho.

Gopi was all in pain but suddenly a car hit her and she met with a accident. The car stopped. A guy came out from the car and went to Gopi body in a hurry to see if she was alive. Gopi was unconscious, bleeding heavily from her head, all injured. The guy took her to the hospital and no doctor was taking her as they said the police was to get included. They called the police and the police came and saw her in a terrible state. She wasn't breathing, blood coming out continuously, heart was beating. She was still alive.

The doctors took her to the ICU while the police took information of the guy who brought her. The guy was no other that Kinshuk Mahajan, the famous businessman in Rajkot after the Modi's. Kinshuk was a tough guy, a guy who has been finding his sister for the past 4 years. His sister was no other than Gopi, Gopi Modi, the girl in the ICU. Kinshuk felt pain in his heart but didn't know why.

On the other hand the doctors came out and wanted to talk to Mr Mahajan.

Doctor: the patient is very critical, she has lost a lot of blood, she needs o positive. Unfortunately we have ran out of blood but don't know where to get it so can we ask u for permission if we can publish this on newspapers and on television, but don't worry we won't show the patients face.

Kinshuk: don't worry doctor, publish it, as I don't know this girl, and found her in the middle of the road due to the accident, you have my permission to announce it, but will she be safe?

Doctor: Don't worry Mr Mahajan , we will try our best to save her, right now we have put her in a lot of medication and put her unconscious.

The doctor goes, and reports to the police and says to them can you please post this on television and newspaper as a patient needs o positive blood and needs someone with that blood to come in and give some to the patient as she is very critical and might not be saved.

Back to the Modi house, everyone was tensed as where would have Gopi went, went without informing everyone and looked at Aehem angrily as he had broke all the ties with her. Aehem was feeling pain inside him and something was telling him that Gopi is hurt and badly needed him. Aehem had tears and Kokila looks at him and says

Koki: dikra now why are you crying, now gopi has left due to what u wanted, Isn't that enough.

Someone was at the door, a newspaperman and gives them the newspaper and says: put the television on Modi maam as some serious incident has happened last night at 2pm and the police and the doctors are asking something from everyone.

The newspaper man goes and the modi house puts the t.v on and the news reporter was saying.

'Welcome to the Star news, myself neelam and will be telling you the incident happened last night. Last night about 12 ' 2pm a girl was walking in the middle of the rood and got knocked down by the car and now she is in the hospital in a critical condition and is badly needed blood o positive. Anyone who has the blood o positive , can u quickly come and give the blood to the patient who is fighting life and death. She can die anytime.

The doctor comes and say: aap sab ki meherbaani ho gi agar aap apna khoon is patient ko day kyunki oski jaan kisi bhi halat mein ja sakti hai, jo insan is ko lekar yahan ponch chadiya hai, vo khud nahi janta os ko. Aur aap sab kanhaji say prathna ki jiyay kai vo bach jay. Shukriya.

Myself Neelam and will come back soon after the break.

Gopi was behoosh and was remembering everything what happened to her after kinjal marriage, and what Aehem did to her. Aehem had slapped her due to breaking the marriage to her cousin Dhawal who was a greedy man. Everyone was upset due to what Gopi did.

Everything was echoing in her head but suddenly Gopi life has gone critical again, the nurse ran to the doctor and told him that the patients halat has gone bad and the doctor came and gave her injection and made her go to sleep.

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still working on the next chapter will post it soon
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ohhhh dear... poor Gopi...
one chapter not enough.... more plzzzzz....
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Gopi was behoosh and was remembering everything what happened to her after kinjal marriage, and what Aehem did to her. Aehem had slapped her due to breaking the marriage to her cousin Dhawal who was a greedy man. Everyone was upset due to what Gopi did. Everything was echoing in her head but suddenly Gopi life has gone critical again, the nurse ran to the doctor and told him that the patients halat has gone bad and the doctor came and gave her injection and made her go to sleep.


Chapter 2


The doctor came out and saw Kinshuk waiting outside and kinshuk said: what happened to her? Is she alright? Did anyone gave her blood yet?

Doctor: some many questions at one go? Ok , the patient halat went bad so I gave her injection, no-one has gave her blood yet and I made her go to sleep put giving her an injection

Kinshuk sat down and waited for the Police to come.

On the other hand, Aehem was feeling lonely, but why he thought so. He hated that gavar so much that he couldn't face her and stand her a minute. He went to his room and lied down on his bed. Koki: bechari kis halat mein ja rahi ho gaye, kanaji us ko buchai. What blood does she need again?

Hetal: o positive koki o positive, pur ab hum Gopi se kahan dhoonday, where would have she been. What if that patient is her.

Everyone was feeling lonely after Gopi has left, but then suddenly Rashi has said

Rashi: mummyji, shall I say something?

Hetal: ha bolo?

Rashi: mummyji I am o positive shall I go and donate the blood to that patient. Bechari she is fighting her life and can die anytime, if I donate the blood and save her will Kanhaji be happy?

Chirag: why didn't you tell us before, go quickly to the City Hospital and donate her blood and do let us know how she is

Rashi : jee

Rashi is all set to leave and left the house. She went to the driver and told him to take her to the city hospital. They went to the hospital and rashi told the driver to go back home and she will call him when she wants to come.

Rashi goes to the reception and says : last night some accident had happened, and a patient needs blood o-positive, I am here to give blood to the patient.

The Police heard this and went up to her : ma'am come this way and we show you the way to the ICU.

Rashi follows the way and reaches the ICU and the Doctor comes and says : thank you for coming along and giving the blood to the patient come inside with me

Rashi goes in and goes beside the body and couldn't recognize who it was at first as gopi face was covered in bandage and then suddenly she recognizes her by the mungalsutra and says: Gopi, what happened to you? .. she burst out crying. The doctor says do you know the patient and how?

Rashi: she is my cousin, my dad's sisters daughter. She is a wonderful sister, bechari she never had any love since her parents passed away and I was the only on who helped her since childhood.

Rashi then lies beside her and gives her blood and she goes outside and talks to the Police and notices a man with Black suit on and was fit. She goes across to him and says: are u th one who saved my sister and brought her here?

Kinshuk replys: yes I brought her here, I am kinshuk Mahajan, naam to suna hi hoga, aur tum Modi khandan sai hogi

Rashi: haha yeh I am from modi family, am jigars wife. Thank you for saving my sisters life.

After a while Rashi phones home and says : kakiji the patient is still critical, I have gave her blood, and the doctor told me to stay until she might need more

Koki: theek hai, if you need anything let me know.

Kinshuk turns around and says: why didn't you tell them its ur cousin who is critical, why did u lie?

Rashi : I had to lie because , my sister was the older daughter in law in that house ans she left the house because her husband didn't love her as she wasn't educated and she was a gavar, I used to get hurt seeing him shouting and abusing her, but then gopi broke all the vows with him so that he can change and be politer to her but nahi it got worse, then after kinjal his sisters marriage, he told Gopi to leave as per the vows she took and she left. Now this what happened. Kinshuk I will tell you the whole story another time, because I trust you. But can u please do me a favour, I am going to leave and go back home but can u take Gopi and let her stay at your house whenever she gets discharged. I will come to meet her tomorrow chup chup ke without telling anyone in the house its Gopi if I do then Aehem ji will not leave me

Kinshuk: don't worry Rashi, I will take care of her until everything is better between Aehem and her don't u worry go back home and ill take care of everything.

The doctor comes out while rashi had left. The doctor confirms that the patient is out of the danger and she needs completely rest. She will have to stay here for 15-20 days or maybe more.

It was 12pm everyone in the modi house was extremely upset, Koki, Hetal, Mani and Kamla were in the Kitchen while Chirag Jigar and Aehem were away to office. Aehem was feeling lonely, and thought : " that gavar is so scared of me, just because I told her to leave she went and now shes away am so lonely and was feeling bechain.

Rashi comes home and goes and sit beside Baa and Parag and tells them the patient is fine out of danger, but she is badly wounded. Baa and parag prayed for her and rashi goes to the Kitchen and sees Hetal and Koki cooking and tells them to leave it and she will do it. They move aside and sit down while Rashi had cooked everything. The men were about to come back home and koki asks how is the girl now

Rashi: she is better now, completely weak, badly injured and out of danger. And the doctor even told her to come back again in two or three days.

Edited by ayesha_78 - 14 years ago
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continue plse we want more😭
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can't wait to see what happens.
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Pepsi plzzzz... ye dil maange more and Rashi Good to Gopi... welll... no comments on that...😈

continue hun
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Rashi: she is better now, completely weak, badly injured and out of danger. And the doctor even told her to come back again in two or three days.

Chapter 3

The mens come back from work and goes to the dining table and sits down. Koki and hetal comes and tells rashi, mani and kamla to serve. Aehem is in the thinking mode and doesn't realize Koki is watching him. Aehem was sad, totally sad, and couldn't bear as Gopi was gone far away from him just like Anita did. He didn't know what to do. Koki was calling him: Aehem… Aehem..

Jigar pushes him and says: Aehem bhai, kaki calling you

Aehem: yes mom,

Koki: what happened, why you are all pale and sad? Is everything alright?

Mom: yes mom I am fine, I just have a headache.

Everyone starts to eats and Aehem spoke: Mani, what is this? Neither this have salt, pepper and any masala in it.

Mani: Aehem bhai… Ji vo … Gopi bhabhi usually cooks, but she is not here as she left so Rashi bhabhi cooked.

Aehem got angry and stood up and moved his chair and was about to turn and leave and hears someone saying, "raghu, mani, kamla"

Everyne looks around and koki turns and was shocked. She was shocked to see her older sister was here, her sister Sadhana, She knew what happened between Aehem and Gopi and she came for Kinjals wedding.

Koki turns and goes up to her and says: Sadhana ben u here,

Sadhana ; ha am here, I heard Kinjal is getting married so I came

Hetal: but she just got married 3 days ago. You came late.

Sadhana was shocked to hear this and looked for Gopi.

She asked: Wheres Gopi?

Rashi got scared as she might make her blurt out the truth so she goes up and gets blessing and says am rashi jigar wife

She blesses her and still asks hetal wheres Gopi?

Chirag tells her everything what happened between Aehem and gopi and after kinjals wedding a day after at night she left the house due to the vows she had made. We can't find her anywhere and was about to inform the police.

Sadhana is all shocked to here this while Aehem who was behind everyone was thinking : " why am I lonely, I only loved Anita, but hated Gopi and got married to her for Moms sake now shes away why am I so sad, and emotional, why does that happen.

Aehem was repenting for his deeds inside him while his face showed that he didn't really bother. No one could read what was on his face, and what he was thinking, but what could he do he was stoned hearted and he actually admits that he was. He hated sharing his thoughts with people, his emotions his tanhayee and what was on his heart. He hated everything but one thing was on his mind was business, business, business. But Gopi innocence took over him and he never realized it. He was actually paining from inside and wanting to take his anger and hatred out on someone for what he did but he ignored it.

Back to the hospital, it was 10pm and Gopi gained conscious and ask the nurse for water and said where am i? and why she dizzy?

The nurse: Ma'ams here have some water first

Gopi drinks water and asks the nurse again with the same question

Nurse: you are in the hospital and you are not well, you have a severe accident due to that you are dizzy. Take care of yourself I go and call the doctor.

Kinshuk comes in and sees gopi lying down and sees her awake. From the inside he was missing his sister and wanted to go and find her but he didn't know she was in front of him. He sits beside her and says: are you alright, Gopi?

Gopi: much better but how do you know my name?

Kinshuk: when I brought you here, u was very critical and you needed blood. There wasn't any o positive in the hospital so we announced it on t.v and newspaper that a patient that is you need blood and someone came and gave donated you. Do you want to know who it was? You own cousin Rashi, don't worry she hasn't told anyone in the house you met with the accident and I know what happened between u and …

Gopi had tears in her eyes, as her rashi always supported her since her parents passed away and when she lost her brother she needed someone to be her support so she did.

Kinshuk saw her in pain and doctor comes in and does her check up and says you are still weak, wound still to be healed and you are in pain so forget your pains and rest.

At the Modi mansion there was a hungama going on, Sadhana was shouting at Aehem for making her leave and in a fit of rage he spoke: " this is my life, when I loved someone I never got her, but instead I got a gaavar and a unpar whom doesn't fit to my standard, so why should I accept her as my wife. Why? Since childhood I hated unpar people, so why should I accept them today?

He was paining, totally paining from the inside, and could hear Gopi yelling for help.

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Originally posted by: upasana.diya

Pepsi plzzzz... ye dil maange more and Rashi Good to Gopi... welll... no comments on that...😈

continue hun



are u shocked to hear rashi being good to her
no worries will continue tommorow
done chapter 1,2,3
enjoy reading
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Originally posted by: ayesha_78



are u shocked to hear rashi being good to her
no worries will continue tommorow
done chapter 1,2,3
enjoy reading



Thanks hun.... read all three and must say, you did an awesome job....
will wait for tomorrow...

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