Tanhayee, dard,bechain & ek dil ka rishta - 2nd FF - Page 4

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Posted: 14 years ago
#31
the Doctor comes out and says : she is absoutely fine now, she is weak. You all can meet her but be aware not to give her tension. and please urmi and dhawal you are not allowed to enter the ward as it is commanded by the commissioner

love this part when refuse her to go in awesome update pls cont soonnnnnnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
#32
sharma ill continue tommorw am tired
wrote 3 updates today
3 updates yesterday so ill continue tommorow where is stopped
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33
wonderful update, hope you feel better.

Shilpa
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Posted: 14 years ago
#34
commissioner, Kinshuk and Ahem... Urmi ko milega teen ka tadka...
witing for tomorrow hun... totally loved it
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Posted: 14 years ago
#35
Ayesha! beautiful! But get gopi well soon! I dont want her to suffer more! Love this brother of her.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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no worries bee
will get her alright soon
sorry couldnt update the next part
am not well :(
will write it soon xx
sorry friends
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Posted: 14 years ago
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the Doctor comes out and says : she is absoutely fine now, she is weak. You all can meet her but be aware not to give her tension. and please urmi and dhawal you are not allowed to enter the ward as it is commanded by the commissioner

chapter 7

urmi was shocked to hear that she wasnt allowed to see that naukarani of hers.

Aehem: ab kya huwa, ab to aap apne bhanji se nahi mel sakti, ab kya karongai,

Kinshuk walks up to Urmi and say: do you want to know why the comissioner said you are not allowed? huh, main kehta ho, jo is na laik ko ap nai dhaki ma kar ghar se nakaldiya, ek bar nahi socha os becharai par kya bees rahi ho gi, os ke dil me kya bars rahi ho gi, kehta raha, mat nikalo maat nikalo, par nahi, is na laik ki waja say, ap ki yeh halat ab hai, me hartai harti jeet gya or ap jeetki jetki har gaye, is na laik ki waja say commissioner sahab nai mana kar dala, is na laik ki waja say sub ghar walay ko aap ke kalakri pata chal gaye, ab kya ho ap ka.

Aehem smirks and says : aur apne kya kiya, voh larki, jo apne ek ma ka pyaar nahi diya, os ko mudjse shaadi kar dali, kept my family happy, kept me happy but me i have kept on wrong doing on her, because of u aap nai koi kasr nai chora

Everyone goes in while urmi and dhawal were outside. Gopi was sleeping, with a breathing mask on. She had bandages on everywhere, her arms, bruises on her legs, feet, bandage on her head scars on her neck. All she was saying was Aehem ji Aehem ji

Everyone was shocked to see her state and suddenly she wakes up. haule haule apne aankhein koli aur dekha sab gharwali os ke aas pass, all in tears. She saw Aehem sitting down near her and kept quiet. The doctor spoke and said she need bed rest. She is allowed to go home but keep those two away from her, it will be better if they dont stay with her.

The family was happy to hear Gopi was allowed to go home today. the doctor goes and they all look at Kinshuk. Kinshuk was having a psychological side and wanted to destroy Urmi and dhawal and wont let them go to jail easily. The police and the comissioner was involved and was going to take Kinshuk side. Kinshuk had a masterplan and kept it to himself.

Koki spoke : Kinshuk, for your sisters sake, come to our house and live with us, you are alone.

Kinshuk agreed to this, rashi got gopi ready while kinjal was helping her. Gopi got ready and they all left and sat in the car.

They came to the Modi mansion. Everyone got out,except from Gopi, she was struggling to get up due to the pain in her back. Kinshuk coughed 3 times to Aehem and made him look at Gopi.
Aehem went up to her lifted her up and Kinjal closed the door. Gopi was shocked to see the new side of him. She was blank, and clueless and thought : whats wrong with him. she noticed he had tears in hids eyes, he barely looked at her, he was emotional, heart broken(finally his heart has melted ) he felt his tanhayee and bechain was gone, but it wasnt he still had to tell her what he felt. He wasnt strong enough someone had to console him someone had to...






Edited by ayesha_78 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38
i know what's wrong with him....

he is smitten beyond recognition...

wonderful update...
hope to see more from you
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Posted: 14 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: upasana.diya

i know what's wrong with him....

he is smitten beyond recognition...

wonderful update...
hope to see more from you



he has definetely
he must have smittened by her beauty LOL
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no worries will continue tomorrow, its already 12pm here in the UK, way past bedtime

hope you figure out what will come up next.
enjoy

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Posted: 14 years ago
#40
magnificent update
my dear cant to read
what in store for Urmi
& Dhawal

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