Tanhayee, dard,bechain & ek dil ka rishta - 2nd FF - Page 8

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Kaash aisa SNS me bhi ho jaaye...
good going hun
keep it up...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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arey ayesha....i wasnt expectin the update this quick..gr8 one dear...ahem actually compliments gopi...he's lost the battle...and finally he accepts his love..all thanx 2 our kinshuk..and i hav a special song dedication for ahem in this situation

"Tum Paas Aaye ,Yun Muskaraye,
Tumne Na Jaane Kya Sapne Dikhaye,
Ab To Mera Dil Jaage Na Sota Hai,
Kya Karoon Haye Kuchh Kuchh Hota Ha.."
Edited by madhu_sridhar - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: madhu_sridhar

arey shilpa....i wasnt expectin the update this quick..gr8 one dear...ahem actually compliments gopi...he's lost the battle...and finally he accepts his love..all thanx 2 our kinshuk..and i hav a special song dedication for ahem in this situation


"Tum Paas Aaye ,Yun Muskaraye,
Tumne Na Jaane Kya Sapne Dikhaye,
Ab To Mera Dil Jaage Na Sota Hai,
Kya Karoon Haye Kuchh Kuchh Hota Ha.."



madhu u mean ayesha
shilpa not the one who updated this its actually me :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: upasana.diya

Kaash aisa SNS me bhi ho jaaye...
good going hun
keep it up...



kaash sns mein yeh hota
i agree with u diya


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Posted: 14 years ago
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oops..i'm so sorry ayesha..since i follow both ur ff's at the same time...i got kinda confused...soooo sorry yaar...i'll go n edit it first
Edited by madhu_sridhar - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: madhu_sridhar

oops..i'm so sorry ayesha..since i follow both ur ff's at the same time...i got kinda confused...soooo sorry yaar...i'll go n edit it first



no problem
no worries take your time
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Posted: 14 years ago
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and madhu that song is my favorite always listening to it 24hours
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: ayesha_78

and madhu that song is my favorite always listening to it 24hours


me too😊....hi-fi....the music, the lyrics and to top it all, my fav kajol...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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lol hi 5 but i like rani much better than kajol
infact there the same
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After hetal goes Aehem goes up to her and says: aaj kya hogya, what made u compel to wear my fav colour, infact it suits u a lot. Gopi smiled and tried to stop blushing.

Everyone was watching them talking as their dooriyan was infact going away and they were coming close to each other

Chapter 14

Aehem and gopi was talking to each other just like a usual husband and wife goes, there, that minute someone shouted :'Mani'...... "Kamla"............... Koki.......

Aehem and gopi looked and there was Kokila mother. Aehem got scared as he was surely frightened from his Nani, who was a strict woman, stricter than Koki. Koki, hetal, Chirag and the rest ran towards her except aehem, gopi, kinjal, rashi, kinshuk and Jigar who was scared of her. Rashi, Gopi and Kinshuk totall got a shock after seeing her, utter shock. They hide behing Aehem, jigar and Kinjal so that they can go first.

The adults met Nani and nani spoke: Koyli or Koki u have changed so much. Behind her go-hem,jalshuk and jigar and rashi( someone tell me their nickname) burst out laughing after a long time. Nani looked at them and went to them in anger and looked at them trying to remember who is who. She spoke to Jigar: arre jigar itna paseena kyun and why are u soo scared?

Jigar: khush nai nani,

He took her blessing and spoke: nani yeh hai Rashi, my wife.

Nani: arre jigar, tumhari biwi to lakho mein ek hai

Rashi took her blessing

Nani turns to Kinjal and spoke: so ur my koyli daughter who is getting married?

Kinjal: ji nani, and yeh hai kinshuk rashi cousin.

Nani turns toward him and spoke: waah sab rishtaydaar ek ghar mein bidaai ho rahai hai

kinshuk got a fright and took her blessing

Aehem got to his Anger look and looked as a stoned hearted as before so he could irritate his nani just as he did in childhood.

Nani turned around and looked at him and spoke: so u Aehem, spoilt brat, are u still the same naughty ?

Aehem took her blessing and stood up and looked at koki

He spoke: jee nahi nani, am changed, because of my wife, Gopi, kinshuk bigger sister.

Nani turned and said : koki, ek bradgari ek ghar main kya baat hai.

Everyone went to the dinning table and sat down while Kinjal, Rashi and Gopi served everyone. Gopi gave food to everyone and went to Aehem and gave him theplai. While she tried to go, Aehem took her hand and held it. Chirag and nani saw it and nani spoke: Aehem.... leave your wife hand, romance with her at night time...

Everyone burst out laughing to see the change in Aehem. He was totally changed.

After a while Koki and hetal took Nani to baa room and sat there and chatted while the rest was decorating the house. The house was nearly done and there Daljeet and shaleen came and supported them. Daljeet took Kinjal to the beauty palour and Shaleen took kinshuk to his room and helped him to get ready. It was almost 5pm, the guest will start arriving so the womans went to change while the mens were outside. The womans came an the mens changed.

It was half 5 and the guest has started to arrive. There Kinjal came with Daljeet from the back door. Kinjal looked gorgeous just as any bride would and went to her room.

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