Teri Yaadein..Mini Update Pg 6...

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hellooooooo😳....am writing a fic/one shot after agesssssssss and agessss perhaps after ninnyyy's buddaaayyy😆😳. But since past few days I have been yearning/craving like hell to writeeeee😳😳😳. The feeling was just greaaaaaaat becoz I havn't felt this inspired to write a fic since i wrote "tamanna"😳😳😳...And the inspiraiton comes form two facts one that I have once again fallen in love with ay😳😳..{as if i was ever out of it😆}..and two my dessertation/final mba project finalllyyyyy got overrrrrrrrrrrnow i just have to somehow pass my exams and then mba finally overrrrr. Its gooooood very very goood to be back to writing😳😳...

Anyways so here is my new ficcy, its not exactly a ficcy as in it won't have loads of chapters. At the max it would have three chapters, i wanted it to be a one shot but the background set up for the main theme only ran into pages😆😆..so i decided to be a bit kind to you all and break my lambaaaaaaa fic inot parts so that you all can bear moiiii😉

The basic concept is ay going back to that gate which led the way to that park which changed their destinies😳😳😳..But this time they arn't alone..They have their two year old tammyyyyy with them😳😳😳...Tammy ie short form for their tamanna..😳..I don't know whether i did justice in potraying them as young parents or with tammy's character, but i always wanted to write osmehting which would have all three of them..Hope i didn't screw up and you all like it....😳..Do let me know your precious views. You knooow its only your comments and reviews which inspire me to write more😳..so here it issssss....😳😳 Eveything is from yuvi's point of view😳..

Hope you guys don't run away seeing the length of the fic..plzz plzz do give it a try for my sake😳..and i really hope you guys arn't disappointed

Its dedicated to all the pagal people who love ay churajieely. to all the mad insaans who shared and gave me beautyful memories in every single of our love stations....😳...and to my qj memberss whome i adore to the coreeeeee😳

PS....the naam karan of the fic was such a pain this time, i had soooo many names, like, "a way back into love", "remembrance", "in the memory", " gazing through the pencieve"..{which pencieve is a memory storage device from where you can go back and look at past events, harry saw james and lily and sirius in action via it 😳😳...} but finally i managed to come donw to this name..😳........

Teri Yaadein

Part One

"Aah!" yuvi said, "Its good to be back to the place form where I started."

"Its good to have you back", said the good old Principal of Maurya High, Jambwal Sir better known as jumbo "But where is your wife?"

"Ander toh mere saath hi aayi thi , pata nahi kahan rah gayi, shayad...", he wasn't given a chance to finish as a horrifying shrieking sound erupted form no-where.Everybody started running idher udher in massive fear. Jumbo and yuvi ran too. Yuvi feeling highly uncomfortable.

Thoda search karne ke baad they finally found the zone of trouble.It was right outside Room No.15 of the girls hostel. where a totally freaked out brunette was trembling in fear, pointing towards the door.

There right at the center of the door was a "real" human skull..{actually made in clay but done with such perfection that it could easily pass for real}, it had eyes like hollow sockets, popping in and out as if gloating at its viewers. It clutched a bone in its teeth and side sey a sleak stream of blood was dripping over the shimmering text scrolled beneath....

"Welcome To HELl"
"ENTER At Your Own Risk"
"BECOZ".....
"The DEVIL Is BACK!!!!!"

Yuvi beat his head in exasperation. "Damm HER"!!

For a moment even Mr Jumbo was taken aback. He hadn't been faced with such a situation since almost 12 yaers...Since 12 years Maurya had been quite and he had to admit "Dull", since the day when "SHE" walked out... He braced himself and pushed open the door only to have his face thoroughly blown by smoke. Maurya rocked with the explosion that followed and just with in ten minutes, 12 years of solitude was forgotten. Suddenly the birds seemed chirpier, the sun seemed warmer, the morning clearer and the sky much more bluer. But the next instant blue was not the only colour that gleamed.

From the farthest corner of the room popped out a two feet bundle of long red hair held back by an alice band.Her face was flushed in glee and her plump features looked strikingly pretty in all their excitement big blue eyes covered half of her small face which shone with joy as she ran towards one person whom she recognized. But who? Jumbo reeled in shock as he saw the child running towards Yuvi and clutching her small little hands possesively around his knees, asking him to hoist her up.

"Powieeeeeee"she crooned and Yuvi's heart melted at the sound of his fuaghter-the most adorable voice in the world. He felt a fierce sense of pride, possession, love whenever his baby called out to him.He was a "powy"- her powyyy...!

He picked her up and she wrapped her little arms around his neck and gave him a noisy kisshy on his cheeck. He bumped his head with hers whispering "I love you" in her small pink ears. Her enthusiasm crossed bounds as she tugged him towards the cupboard.

"What tam? whats in there baby?"

"Mummmmaaaaaaaaa!" She said clapping her hands as if she was proude to lead him to her "mumma".

He opened the cupbard but there was nothing except stacks of feminie stuff.."She would definately feed me to her pet crow if i even tried to tocuh someone else's stuff." He thought and backed off towards the bed to be only pulled out of his shoes by an invisible force.He landed on the bed in a crumplled heap and got up all confused to find his dotty giggling like a maniac and going to give a victory hi-5 to the lady who prided in being the pain of his life.

"Argggggg!". He wanted to strangle her right there. she always managed to arouse feelings of a jungly bhaloo in him.

"TUUUUM"!!!!!!!.. Jumbo shrieked

"Tum nahi Sir, Tum Se Hi...Tum Se Hi....the love song of the year, music and lyrics by Mr Fake Heman, composed at a moment of eternal love for his beloved wife..." she said bowing down infornt of all to flaunt the "wife" part.

"Anvesha Banergy Ray is back in school, dhamka toh hona hi tha na Sir, sorry about the smoke though aap mujhe punish kar sakte hai, but kuch aisa punishment dena which i can transfer to yuvi. My small litle gurl needs her mummaaa 24/7..."

Something was On, Yuvi knew it by the look she was giving him.Why was she smiling so adorably? And I swear her cheecks were unsually pink today...Okay not "pink". She would kill me if i called naything of hers "pink"! But seriously she was looking way too "irresistable' and she knew it, thats why Queen Victoria was flushing so much.

But hold on! Her hair was tied up in half pony and and his eyes ran down to the clothes she was wearing....BHAGGU!11...Save Me..!...How can he ever forget that set of clothes? That picture of hers was imprinted on his mind by an irrevocable ink. .

Her military coloured capries and that brown top. The clothes she had worne when she proudely walked back into his arms for good. He could still feel that look of blinding joy in her eyes when he had said... "kyunki ashi apny life main main sirf ek ladki ke saath ladna chahta hun aur woh ho tum...I Love You Ashi"....that look had become his armour against rejections and failures that life brought with it. He knew that atleast in her arms and in her heart he would always be accepted....

God! It happened so long ago at this very place. But he could still remember that moment vivdly, as if he lived through it again and again every single day of his life...And in a way he really did live through it everyday. Because that was The one day when he had won her back, when they had finally laid their past ghosts to rest and accepted that nothing else mattered as long as both of them were secure in each others arms believing and trusting with faith that he/she was the only thing they wished for in their secret prayers.

"Tammy Mummmaaaa", a tiny voice said raising her arms for her mumma who bend down to pick her up and snuggled her against her aura which overflowed with love and warmth. Looking at them cuddled together like that, he knew his wish-his "tamanna" has been fulfilled in the form of two red heads whom he would love till the stars faded away from the sky.

"Aaaachiiiiiiiiiii", Tammy jeared playing with her mumma's pony. It was so difficult to make them apart today, because her mumma looked as innocent and vulnerable as her dotty. She was constantly throwing shy glances at him {i know shy is a big word for her but only I can make her feel that...haha!}, urging him to recognize her outfit.

"Haha recognize Wacko? Do you htink I can ever forget that?", he told her via their special mode of communication which always managed to reduce the world to only the two of them- and since Tammy came-to the three of them- because Tammy always sensed any wibes between her powy and mumma and somehow gloried in the air charged with love all around the three musketeers.

He told her {again through eyes} she looked gorgeous and how hard he was trying to keep his hands to himself. She blushed slightly." Aaaaah!", yuvi thought "I love it when she does that". It means that her big head is on the "only yuvi" mode."She can't think of anything or nayone else when that mode is on and that is an immense source of pleasure for me."..

She said {eyes speaking} "tum hamara fifth rule bhool rahe ho..hum ek doosre ki personal space nahi invade karenge.." He beamed in the glory of their past which she had ressurrected for him..."I am sorry, he said {eyes doing the talking}Main apny babes ke rules and regulaitons bhool gaya..."

She continued to blush and said "good boy" and yuvi could have sworne that he felt her tap his head and ruffle his hair from across the room without even touching him. And standing there reliving the past both of them had once again turned into eighteen year old teens fallen in love for the very first time and incapable to handle such a fierce emotions sanely. so they had handled it their way-the insane way-and had ended up "woof woofying" at each other.

And suddenly Ashi shouted "woooooof wooof "to Tammy. He knew what she was doing. She was trying to add a new memory to our old one- a memory that would have our Tammy in it. People said as life moves on one tends to forget the past. But when the past has been a dream come true, when the past has made your future a bliss, when the past has given you a promise to move on..then you never really forget the past, Yes you move on definitely, but with that same past held tightly in your hands making every breath of your life a "present" from bhaggu. Because to live life is to be happy that you are alive and living and that happyness comes from the past you chose to make it your future.

Tammy glowing in her mumma's love responded.."wwwwwww....wwwww....." Haha! She wasn't able to pronounce it. Yuvi went to her and she reached out for him form her mumma's arms opening her tiny arms for him..."Powyyyyy" she said happyly as if she had just now discovered him."Mummaaaa wwwwwwwwwooo" she said wringling her nose. He laughed and kissed her. "Its wooof woof tam", he said winking at her

As if miraculously Tammy understood her powy She tugged at her mumma and brought her close then leaned over from her powy's hand and passed the kiss he had given her for both herself and her mumma.

Ashi blushed .AGAIN.. .half with the joy of being kisshed by her dotty..half becoz she knew it had originated from his lips. Gosh!!!!!!! he loved them. They were so totally complete. The circle of his life was....

"Mummum Mummum". Ashi's phone rang with the voice of her mother filling the room..{ashi had set her mom's number with the caller tune of her mom's voice}...Yuvi laughed at this strange telepathy and shook his head. Sonya was the radius of their circle and the circle and the circle could never have been made without her. Together the four of them made a beautyful circle of a cherished life in which all were part of each other's soul.

"Hey Shaitaan ki nany! How is you?" ashi said to her mom

"Mummum you are talking to your Mom"

"No am talking to my shaitaan daughter's nany"

"Don't call me nany"

"Sonuuuuuu nanieeeeeeeeeeeee", Tammy shouted snatching the phone form her mumma

"Mummmmmmmm mera bacchaaa kaishaa hai mera baby?", Sonya said from the other end, "mum" being her nicky for her "mummum"'s dotty...

"Nanieeee", Tammy said and she was devoured with a million mwuaaah mwuaaah mwuaah from the other side, which sended the child into buckets of laughter.

"Tammy Sonuuuuuuuu", she wooed which techincally meant she wanted her grandma abhi ke abhi

"Awww, sonuu would come soon and sonuu bought tammy a big big bear"

"Tammy Bear?"

"Yaaa Tammy's bear and lots of chocolates"

"Chocoooookakeeeeeeee"

"Hey gorgusssssss Come back soon my arms are dying to hold you", yuvi said in the phone

"Mummumm is bander ko bol bhawnkna band kareee"

"Mumaaaa bander doesnt bhawonkofies"

"I hate the two of you", yuvi said

And both of them reciprocated "We TOOO"!!

And the todller said "Tu Tu Tuuuuu"

"Hahaha"!, jumbo finally came out of his trance on seeing the three of them and said..."tum sab main se koi bhi nahi badla, na tum dono na tumhari mom"

Ashi said.."Sir hum world ko chage karne wale log hai and those who change the world never believe in chaging themselves because they change the world THEIR way"

"Ya fir ye kahe ki there are few poeple in the world who can stand firm. And tum Anvesha woh firmness ho jispe ye sab stand karte hai, like Maurya used to do when you walked on it."

"Sir ab aap mery leg pull kar rahe ho. Aap shayad bhool gaye ki maine aapka medical bill kitna badhaya tha.,especially blood pressure ki tablets"

"Hahaha1 Don't forget the SOS heart medicines i used to keep for an emrgancy situation in case you antiques gave me a heart attack"

Dont worry Sir Tammy ko main bohut acchi education deke school bhejungi..She would brake all my records"

"Nahi Anvesha tum tammy ko kuch mat sikhana main tumhare haath jodta hun. I mean tum toh fir bhi akely thi but tammy main tumhare aur yuvi dono ke genes hai and tum dono ka combinaition toh aisa explosion kar skata hai ki ye building hi demolish ho jaye!!"

Hahaha! everyone laughed

Jumbo beamed at the trio. He couldn't believe they had managed to stick together for so long without killing each other. He knew then why their love was called "intensely insane". He could see its strength in the eyes of their baby that shone with the happy, confident, princess-in-charge attitude of a child

.He knew she would turn into an amazing woman. As heroic as her mother. No matter how harshly he might have treated this student of his, he knew she was and will always be his favorite student.There was something about her which attracted everyone like a magnet and once you know her you can never happen to forget her. You would remember her in every smile, every helping hand, every consoling word and in every hope of a better tommorrow.

"Ashi, Maurya misses you and aaj i want to give you somehting very special..." He took them to his office and removed a painting which hung proudely at one of his wall fronts.

"This is for your happy family Ashi"...He said gifting her the painting which brought a sudden moistness in her eyes.It was her own "happy family" potrait which she had made in this very school for which she had been rebuked by this same very man. She couldn't believe he had preserved it. The past really had a way to get back to us "Happy family woh hi hoty hai Anvesha jo her kaam saath main kare and i hope your family is always happy always together"

Yuvi also felt chocked he never knew jumbo could have such storng emotions for them.Today was a day of revisting the past. And it was not over yet...Lets see how many pandora boxes are yet to be opened. how many more "Yaadein" yet to be taken back home.....

ps....man i diiiiieed typing it😕 hope you all like it😳 apollogies for the horrible spellings😆...part 2 would be up soon😳..as soon as i recover from the back ache of typing this one😆😉

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Posted: 17 years ago
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yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee...loony i love uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu🤗🤗🤗...finally you posted it and finally i will get to read a ficcy by you...yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee now lemme read and the will post my comment☺️☺️...well just wanted to make sure that i am the first one 😉 😳 😆
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SMRITI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏
I love you yaar! Lol. I was wondering during this thing, how did she not die typping this extremely looooong part! It's amazing yaar! Kya toughts hain! Everything you said from Jumbo's point of view was so real! Aur the little telepathy between A-Y-T was soooooooooooooo beautiful! Aisa bond har kisi mein nahi hota! You seriously brought tears to my eyes!!!!! I can't wait until your second part!!!!! Love you soooooooooooooooooo much!!!!!!

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I am thinking from where to startttttttt?? Coz seriously it's soooo awesome that it confuses me from where to start!!😳😆 Loony this is such a cuteeeeeeeeeeeeee fictionnnnnnnnnnn!! Myyyy godddddddddddddddddddddddddddd... I am in loveeeeeeeee with it!!! shitttttt...shittt...shitttttttttt... it is soooooooooooo cuteeeeeeeeeee... Tammy is soooooooooooooo cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee... awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww me wannaa just goooo and hug herrrrrr 🤗🤗 I toh started loving tammy since Tamanna (your fic)😳😳 but nowww i love her moreeeeeee... I mean she is sooooo cuteeee☺️ awwww powyyy😳😳 that's sucha cute name for yuviii by her cuteness personified daughterr☺️☺️ Okie i admit...tammy is more cuter than mee... i meann just look at her... she is soo cute and sucha lil devil!😳😆😆

But now lemme start from the beginninggg...Yuvi's entry wasnt that surprising... but what scared me was that ashi was no where to be found by yuvi... and every1 were roaming...it seriously scared me😆😆 but i sooooo didnt knew what's cominggggggg aheadd... mannnnnnnnnn i had goneeee into splitss reading further 🤣🤣🤣 Room No. 15! With blood sign...THE DEVIL IS BACK!! 🤣 I still cannot stop laughing imagining that part 🤣🤣 and jumbo's expression🤣🤣🤣 I bet he got scared as he lost habits of this shocks... and now this sudden one as soon as ashi entered...after 12 years 🤣🤣🤣 I can soo imagine his expression... and that is something that is making me laugh moreee 🤣🤣 But the next momentttt...came the entry of my tammyyy🤗🤗 awwww... when you first wrote red-hair with half pony tail... i seriously thought it would be ashi😆😳😳 but the next moment i saw blue eyes... aww tammy has bluee eyess☺️☺️ I bet she looks like a doll😳😳😳 and i just loved the ways she comes and hugs yuvi...saying powyy and kisshes him☺️☺️☺️ This was sooooooooo cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeee☺️☺️ And then happens mum aur mumum ki mili bhagat🤣🤣 Hey Bhaggu!! I never knew tammy being 2 year old only...itni devil hogiii😆😆 but well no doubt that she is one...coz ofcourse her mother is none other than the devil personified Anvesha Banerjee Ray Dev!😳😳😳 and poor yuvii... so sweetly goes with her and opens the closet🤣🤣 And he is soo scared of ashi😆 that just leaves from there and dont even touches those clothes😆😆 and then comessssssssssssssssss Ashi!!!!!! 🤣🤣🤣 Her entry only starts from prank on yuvi 🤣🤣 what more we want?? 🤣🤣 I just couldnt stop laughingggggggg🤣🤣 poorrr yuviiiiii 🤣🤣🤣 dono maa-beti ke beech mein phaas gaya... actually not only maa-beti... it would be mumma- mumum- mum😆

But i lovedd jumbo's shocked look as if he didnt knew that ashi and yuvi were married😆😆 (Did he really know it?😕) and jumbo is like TUM?? and omg loonyy... this can only be you...you are impossible...but i loveddd the answerr... tum nahi sir...tumse hi! the best song of the year composed by yuvraj dev for his beloved wife😳☺️☺️ Haha i can soo imagine yuvi's expression to it😳😳 He would have been looking soo lovingly at ashi😳😳

And then yuvi thinking... ashi is soo pink today...and is likee noo not pink 🤣🤣 okie then yuvi darling...let's make it red!😳😳 after all its color of love, color of ashi's hair, color of passion, color of intensity, color of Ashi-Yuvi and now color of Ashi-Tammy-Yuvi😳😳😳 And i am sure ashi's cheeks would go more red when u tell her that her cheeks are red!😳 But u know wat? I love the reason that was making her blush like anything😳😳 and even i love those set of clothes of her😳😳 she looks gorgeous in them... and obviously it is very precious😳😳 I justtt loveddd it loonyyyyyyyyyyyy... this was soooo sweetttttt😳😳😳

And then starts their talking through eyes!! This was soooooooooooo sweet☺️☺️☺️ Their bond has grown soo strong that they dont even need words to talk with each other!😳😳😳 but woof woof part was the besttttttttttttttttttt!!😳😳 ashi was like repeating those same dialouges and so was yuviii😳😳 and then ashi is like woof woof to tammy... and she is like wooo wooooooooo (awww she is sooooooooooo cuteee... i just wanna hug her tighttt)😳😳 and then yuvi takes her in his arms and is like... it's woof woof tam...kissing and winking her😳😳😳 but u know i just lovee this word powyy... it sounds sooo cuteeee😳😳 and just like tammyyyy☺️☺️ awww i loveee her and AY...what a perfect family😍

Oh btw loons... in this i also love that part when tams was playing with ashi's hairr☺️☺️😳 It sounds soo like tammyy☺️☺️ And I just love this partt of the ficcy☺️☺️☺️ It is soo cute...showing happy family!😳

As if miraculously Tammy understood her powy She tugged at her mumma and brought her close then leaned over form her powy's hand to and passed the kiss he had given her for both herself and her mumma.

Ashi blushed .AGAIN.. .half with the joy of being kisshed by her dotty..half becoz she knew it had originated from his lips. Gosh!!!!!!! he loved them. They were so totally complete. The circle of his life was....

I soo love this part...it's soo cute... yuvi kissing tamy and tamy passing it to ashiii😳😳 It's soo cuteeeeeee... it gives me goosesss😳😳 I love their bonding... ashi-tammy-yuvi... they are just toooooooo awesome!!😳😳😳 awww loony this is sucha wonderful scene☺️☺️ Me loved it!😳
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And now coming to tammy's sonuuuuuuuu😳😳😳 sucha sweet convooo between tammy and soniaaa...and i loveeee the way tammy said... tammy bear!!😳😳 You know i just lovee small kids... and if they are likee tammyy... then tohhhh i would goo mad spending time with them... they are choo cuteeee😳😳😳 Love you tammyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy... you are jst toooo cuteeeeeeeeee🤗🤗 and i love yuvi saying this to sonia... dying to take you in arms... my god i just couldnt stop laughing😆😆😆 and sonia-ashi calling yuvi bandar🤣🤣🤣 yuvi is like i hate you bothhh... shittttttttttttttt i had loved that part and just couldnt stop grinningg🤣🤣 and sonia-ashi is like we TOO!! and tammy sooo cutely goes... tu tu tuuu..🤣 poor yuviii🤗

And finally jumbo comes to the scene again🤣🤣 I loved that dialouge by jumbo...

"Ya fir ye kahe ki there are few poeple in the world who can stand firm. And tum Anvesha woh firmness ho jispe ye sab stand karte hai, like Maurya used to do when you walked on it."

This is sooo awesome part...that too coming out from jumboo... I loved it and it is soo truee... every1 used to look out for Ashi...and she used to help and support every1...be it her worst enemy! That's why i love ashi soo much (well its one of the many reasons😉) She rocks!😳😳 And the next part that came... loonyyy i had gone madddddddddddddddddddd laughing on it!! I seriously had gone madd 🤣🤣 When ashi was like maine aapka medical bil bhadhaya hain🤣🤣 and jumbo is like dont forget heart attack medicines...coz even i didnt knew ki mereko uski kab need pad jati thi🤣 I had goneeeeeeeeee maddd laughinggggg on itt... ashi rocks and soo does her pranks!😳

And then ashi is like...dont worry sir i will very well train tammy... and jumbo is like please dont... coz when u were there...it was only you...but tammyy...she has yours and yuvi's blood...and when anvesha's and yuvraj's mind gets together...then no1 can stop explosion from happening🤣🤣🤣 I loveddddddddddddddddddddddddddd this partt and it very well is sooo truee!!😳😳😆 Oh god loony...you know what this fiction is irresistable.. i might request you to keep on continuing this fiction forever!!😳😳😳

But neways... after this comes the best party... when jumbo takes them in his cabin and gives ashi the happy family pic that she made... this was soooo sweett... this reminds me of archie and mr.weatherbee😳😳 but seriously...this was soo unexpected from jumbo..i mean he literally hated that painting... but he still had it with him... it was really touching!😳😳 That was soo sweet of jumbo😳 Loved this part and the change in jumbo a lot too😳😳 And i am definatly waiting to reveal more memories of AY with them and tammy!!😳😳😳

This is just wonderfulll fiction loonyyy!! Sooo refreshing...and soooo beautiful!😳😳 Sooooooooooo cuteeee and soooo irresistable!😳 Very uniqueeee...which only you could have written!😳😳 I knew i missed your writings a lot... but didnt knew that it was soo much... i really missed them...and for this ficcy, I would just say... Wat a comeback loony!! What an amazing comeback!!🤗 Continue soon... or else i would literally kill u if u try to test my patience againn!! Today was enough...not again please...please continue soon!!😳😳 Love you lotssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss and thanks for writing such wonderfulllllllllllllllllll ficcy😳😳😳 with tammy in it too☺️☺️ awwwwwwwww lovee this ficcy soo muchhhhhhhhhhhhhh and love you toooo🤗🤗🤗 Muahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!🤗🤗

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awesum one... 😳
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toons hope u don mind wid dis lil reply, as u know me not a person replys long n all.. jus d pure fing i wanna tell afta reading dis feeling i've jus fallen in luv wid ay d 1st time eva! primary time craziness.... u'r jus extraordinary writer u must must say!!! post d next part soon, n well wen i giv ma replies without ny smilly here, dat i'm i'm damn seriously amazed bout d fing, as right now i am.....
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i will reply bck aftaaaaaaaaaaaa...........

well reaadinnnnnnn ittttttttttttt sooooooooooooo mnyyyyyyyyyy endklesssssssssss timeeeeeeesssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss 😳

--edittd--

powieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!

omggggggggg i hve jus fllen in lu wth tammy!!!!!!!!!! she's d abssssss daughtr 4 ay!!!!!!! n im dead sureeeeee she's vry vry vryyyyyyy close 2 hr powieeeee!!!!!!! u kno dis lil girl mkes u feel real n she defntly reflects gr8 shades of her mumma! thgh im sure uv ka bhi kuch th hoga naaaaaaa!!!!!!!! bt neva d less smritiiiiiiii dis is nt easyyyyy!!!!!!!!!! creeatin a charctr tht dsnt exist,,,,,to top tht such an integrl chrctr for dese 2 wnderful chrctrs tht alrdy exist!! its nt easy!!!!!!!!!! hats off 2 u 4 dis!!!!!!!!!! cuz d chrctr uv creatd ws defntly sumthn no1 cudv imagnd! cum onnnn!!!!!! who wudv gne dwn 12 yrs n thght of thm hvin a daughtr tht 2222222 givin her suchhhh details n suchhhhh importnc!!!!!!!!!!!!!! she's jusssssssssssss 2222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222 cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!! a true ay baby!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! u kno as i ws readin disssssss i cud actually imagineeeee tamanna!!!!! a lil girll wth shrt hair jussssss like her mumma!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 sparklin sparklin sparklinnnnnnn eyes!!!!!!! filled wth enthiuuuuuu!!!!!!!!!!!!! i actually hvvvvvvvv a cumplete photogrph of her now!!!!! *yay im d proud owner* *yay im d proud owner* *yay im d proud owner* *yay im d proud owner*

chalo movin on......

uvs reactnssssss!!!!!!!!!!!!! d wy uv gt bck dose moments!!!!!!! c u hve a flair 4 writtin but it stillllllll ISNT easyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!! his reactns n thghts n de memories!!!!!!!!!!

He opened the cupbard but there was nothing except stacks of feminie stuff.."She would definately feed me to her pet crow if i even tried to tocuh someone else's stuff."

true true trueeeeeeeeeeeee absssssssssss trueeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i cnt imagineeeee wht wud hppn!!!!!! (smriti u gtta write a small thng on dis haan!!!!!!!111 wht wud hppn if he touchd it n hw wud ashi react) its amazinnnnnn d wy uv pickd out on detailsssss! n d wy uv shwn all dis is jus...i dnno...its.....well REAL!!!!!! n thts y whn u read it u feel apart of it! as if ur watchin all dat!!!!!!

atleast i felt i ws dre watchin it hppn!!!!!!

dis mde me laff smile blush cuddle up hold onto a my teddy luk arnd if sum1s wtchin me gt up agn smile sit dwn agn smile luk at screen n agnnnnnnn strt readin it frm d begnnin!!!!!! trust meeeeee dis is all dat i did!!!!!!!!

She was constantly throwing shy glances at him {i know shy is a big word for her but only I can make her feel that...haha!}

hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm!!!!!!!!!!!!! as of now agreed ur d only one!!!!!!!! but wht iffff iiiiiiii cum up wth it!!!! no no noooo jokinnnnnnnnnnnn.............bt yet agnnn hre 2222222 i cud imagine!!!!!!! i hd a blurrd picture reftlectin infrnt of me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! of wht it wud b like wth tammy in her gody uv stndin opp 2 her jumbo next 2 hm n ashi lukin at hmmmmmmm.............god god godddddddddddd

Tammy always sensed any wibes between her powy and mumma and somehow gloried in the air charged with love all around the three musketeers.

y y yyyyyyyyyyyyyyy do u gve me d perfct feelin tht tammy is soon gnna grw up 2 becum dissssssss FRND 4 bth her parents!!!!!!!!!!! frndsip like wht dey hd n im sure still must hve hd frm maurya!!!!!!! u kno she gives u tht feelin tht evn if everythin in d world binds her parents 2gtha its still her tht is d biggst fctr tht binds thm 2gthr!!!!!! well its a vry bold statemnt im mkin cuz bth of dem wre anywysssssssssss binded 2getha b4 she cme in!!!! but stillllllllll dis is wht i felt!!!!!!!!!!! n im ready 2 b killd 4 it!!!!!!!!!!

n cccccccc d wy ashi tries creatin new memories moments n all wth her lil dotty!!!!!! its jusssssss!!!!!!!!!!!!! i dn hve wrdssssssss 4 ashi im nt gnna sy nythin 4 hw uv pennd her dwn in dis fic cuz im jus blankkkkkkkk i dnno wht 2 syyyyyyyyyyyyy

soniaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!! aaaayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!11 she's becum a naniiiii!!!!!!!!!!!!!! d gorgeous sonia ray!!!!! it musv been d headline of tht dy nahi nt dy yearrrrr!!!!!! hai naaaa!!!!!!!! but omggggggggggg she's potrayin it sooooooo welllllll!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111 d wy she's luvin her lil shona's lil shonaaaaaaaaaaa d wy she's pamperin her likeeeeeee a true naniiiiiiiii d wyyyyyyyyyyy she's still haggerin behind poor old uv's life!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm perfcttttt perfctttttttttttttttttttttt perfctttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt!

but wht shckd me wssss JUMBOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i dnno if uv dne justice hre!!!!!!!!!!!! i cv neva in dreamssss imagned hmmmmm 2 sy stuff like disssssss react like disssssss stuff like dissssssssssssss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ashi, Maurya misses you and aaj i want to give you somehting very special..." He took them to his office and removed a painting which hung proudely at one of his wall fronts.

"This is for your happy family Ashi"...He said gifting her the painting which brought a sudden moistness in her eyes.It was her own "happy family" potrait which she had made in this very school for which she had been rebuked by this same very man. She couldn't believe he had preserved it. The past really had a way to get back to us "Happy family woh hi hoty hai Anvesha jo her kaam saath main kare and i hope your family is always happy always together"

dis is jusssss unblvbllllllQ!! but its trueeeeeeeeee evry wrd of it is trueeeeeee!!!!!1 dey def hve a happy family!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! n it all seems sooooooo gudddddddd!!!!!!! u knooooo its nt alwys tht u think u hve a happy family n u actully hve 1!!!!!!!! sumtimes d parents rnt 2gtha sumtimes d kid dsnt gt equal luv frm d parents sumtimes d parents dsnt hve deyr eldr tgetha but hereeeeeeeeeeee everythin is perfctttttttt!!!!!!!!!! like jumbo says Ashi, Maurya misses you and aaj i want to give you somehting very special..." He took them to his office and removed a painting which hung proudely at one of his wall fronts.

"This is for your happy family Ashi"...He said gifting her the painting which brought a sudden moistness in her eyes.It was her own "happy family" potrait which she had made in this very school for which she had been rebuked by this same very man. She couldn't believe he had preserved it. The past really had a way to get back to us "Happy family woh hi hoty hai Anvesha jo her kaam saath main kare and i hope your family is always happy always together"

bt her im gnna sy sumthin......dis line is aptt but nt cumpletely truee.....harr kaam saath mein karne se bhi it may seeeeeeeeem like a happy familyyyyy but it may nt hve 2 b a happy familyyyyy.........

neva d less in our ay case hereeeee its a perfct happy go lucky luvlyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy family!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

hmmmmmmmmmmmm dis is vry vry vry nice.......its "HORRIBLY" gud!!!!!!!!11 wth a ring of truth!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! amazin smritiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

like u cn c my reply 4 tammy is d lngest......yyyyyyyyyyy.......

1)i luvvvvvvvvvvv kidsssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

2)she's ay dottyyyyyyyyyyyy

3) she reminds me of sum1

4) uv created an absssss apt image of herrrrrr

& 5) iv fallen in luv wth hrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!!!!!!!!!!!!

cont asap....

(iv givn such a lng reply afta centuaries...as of nw mine is d lngest reply dear...al dose who wnt 2 c my lng reply afta ages.....pls contct smriti singhvi 4 d link....)

Edited by funky n crazy - 17 years ago
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smritiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii m not having ne words to describe wat u hav written??? all i had done while reading was blush blush blush n smile n grinn n gooses evrywhere!!! ashi-tammy-yuviiii! awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww perfect happy family! i can't specify which part i liked the most coz each n every part is just just perfect! loved all all all the partsssssssss! ur an amazing writer smriti! n when it cums to ashi-yuvi + tammy then toh i know u can write 4eva! but this fic is really one of my most fav.! n m w8ing for the next part like hell! u hav seriously made me go mad with tammana ficcy! n if again u'll take ages then i don't think i'll b able 2 hold myself! n as nitzie said don't test our patience! for bhaggu's sake! plz! seriously m still craving for tammana ka continuation part like nething n now this fic has added more crave! but smriti u r the beshtesht writer in here! n the best one who make us go bongo for the next part! 😡
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yay !!dont be shocked finding me here
yess its d same old UVCRAZIESTFAN d maha laziest female of the world whoz gets so mixed up wid pending stuff dat she neveer reads fics bt sumhow today i had nthing to do nt felt like nething to do so i just opene ddis randomely seeing it is by smritisashi n knowin it wud be long🤣bt i got up wid courage closed ym n read it!n i guess i didnt waste d time..it was fulfillin 😳 mann i knew u cud write well didnt knew so well...it was actulally taking place in frnt of me all events happening ..i cud visuallise ashi yuvi jumbo and tammy as d angel frm hey babby 😳 it was relly adorable to read it..i lafed i aawww'eed nd did all d blushing..it was sweet...
n belive me i even went to serch to read ur tammy ficcy everyones talking bout 😉
gr8 work smriti 😳 👏
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Smriti yaar don't hesitate!!! continue naa!!! can't wait!!!! i'm like dying!!

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