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Posted: 17 years ago
#41
i'e read only the frst part and its great! but y is it named teri yadein i mean whos the teri? and powieee's tooooooo cuteeeeeeee but honestly i didn't like u giving the toddler tammy red hair- i mean its like what ever m mummy does i'll do..sorry if i've hurt u but this is how i feel sorry again...and pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee have some pain killers and continue pleaseeee
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Posted: 17 years ago
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read the 2nd part and i need to tell u this
whatever genre u write u do it greatt!! i mean i've read ur sad fic cute fi funny romantinic and now this is cute..u are giftedd smrriii ohh hw proud i'm to share ur namee!111111 this oneesss great! do continue soon plese
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Posted: 17 years ago
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OH my gosh!!Smriti!!!This is soooooooooooo awesome!!!!awww...I just love love love the tammy ke saath wala siggy!!!aww..man!!!Its makin me sooo emotional!!!Smriti!!Thanx 4 givin us this family yaar!!!
U noe lookin at that siggy makes me feel...feel so happy!!!It sort of reinstills my faith n belief in love n family and life...man this is so totally rocking!!!!Awesome yaar!!!! 👏U write sooooo well smriti...just keep up the gud wrk!!
Edited by evilseye - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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well firstly m very very sorryy for late replying baccchaa...😭, u know the reason re, and regarding yr ficy, I just cannot say nething, it would be an insult if I use small words that are bounded in my vocabulary yaar, I am just spellbounded...completely.. I can acctually feel each and every line, the essence of yr fic, the depth, the nature, I just donno wat to say wat to write, I am completely taken a back, I need to jolt back into reality, but trust me, I dont want to cum back, the ATY world is so beautiful, and u expressed it even with more suttle profile😊, Tamanna is totally Aashi, TAMANNA, the name it self, can make ne1 feel proud about, and as Aashi had a great confidence in using her name, m sure humari Tamanna would have it too, Yuvi's doll, Aashi's life, Sonia's jaan, and wat not man, and now she is in Maurya, I can imagine, Aashi n Yuvi had left the corridors, rooms, canteen, Shed, etc of Maurya, long ago, and now it was a time to rebel again, , last time when i had read the fic, I was into a river of sentiments, and a flood of emmotions, but I truely enjoyed each and every aspect of the fic, and understood, what it means to be what we are, many a times we don't be what we are, but Aashi was always what she was, she never changed for ne1, but had the caliber to change the world, there was this saying, Don't walk as if u rule the world, walk as if u don't care who rules the world, thats attitude, and this is proved by our Aashi, and now would be again proved by our Tammy, I really am in an entire new world, and wanna thank you dearest, for bringing Tammy yaarr... and now if I start from the beginning of yr fic, yr fics are always been very meaningful, they are never a castle in the air, they always portray a side of life, and Aashi Yuvi are the medium, love you bacchaaa.. this fic is another gift for all of us from yr side.thanks a lot yaarr snow white..🤗 😍🤗 😍🤗 😍🤗 😍🤗 😍🤗I am acctually in a dreamland..oopzzz ATY LAND!! 😍🤗 😍🤗 😍🤗 continue kar jaldi se maharani...have to be Anvesha Banergy for that or her baby gurl. Right Tammy? You would make your momma proud hai na?" definately definately definately definately definatelyyyy mannn.... she would always make her feel very proud... I wanna write so very much, but rite now, didi needs the PC, I am acctuallyyy rushing to write fast and cover jitna bhi... goshhh... m gng maddoooo.... totallyy maddzyy.. beautiful workd yarr simmmi...Well I would teach her hundreds and thousands of spells to harass teachers, infact if I am not wrong she already has this knack indigenously built within her now that is so very humari Aashi man... just wayyy tooo cute and notorious man...I know Tamma uska naam zarooorr roshan karegi, and wuld be a step ahead of her, probably she would put pony tails to her teachers.. or nething like dat.. hey bhagguuu.. Aashi's family was her mum, with whom she fought like crazy, loved her to the core, admired her in her unusual way, but the deep down line was that she could not be complete widout her Sonia mammaaa...I definately want to write even more Simmi... do wait.. love you bacchaaa!! mmaaa...

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Posted: 17 years ago
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heyllloooooo😳😳

was sitting wella in office today so decided to write something and ended up writing a bit of ty😆😳

well this is not really an update but its a snipper😃..am sowiee i won't be bale to do a full fledged update at alll atleast not in the near future coz i am really loaded with loads of work😭...thats why i have decided to just continue in the form of snippers as in not full full chapters but small small paras😆😆

i dunno how many people would like htis sort of an update but me ccan't help it am writing as and when i get any and every free timee😳

anywyas heres the first doze of snipper😉...i hopeeeeeeee you like it coz trust me i loveee it😆😳

ps....am updating after ages so you might have forgotten where i stopped hence if u want to re-read the last chap's end then its on page 4😆...for keep sake this is yuvi's answer to ashi's anguished pleas from the last chap😉...hope u like it as much as moiiii😳

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Yuvi kneels down besides to her and cradels her beautyful face in his palms, looking deeply in her reverine eyes as if trying to read her soul through them

Anvesha! aaj main tumhe kuch kahna chahta hun aur I want you to listen to every single word of myne very very carefully and to imbibe them as your Bible....

My life begins with YOU and ends at YOU...Tum aur sirf Tum hi ho jike liye I am alive...YOU give me a reason to conquer all the prajudices and maladies of the world because in the end of it all I and only I have the privvlage to return back to your arms where i find solace and shelter because YOU My Love are the greatest feel of happyness for me...I would again and again go through any and every hardships if winning them all means having YOU as my victory hat.....YOU are my hope of success after every failure...YOU are my good night dream, my good morning usn shine...YOU are the colour of my blood the smell of my sweat... YOU are the wish i seek everytime i close my eyes before blowing the candle...YOU are the answer to all my prayers....I yearn to live forever and ever because YOU are the one I am sharing my life with...In short YOU ARE MY IMMORTALITY.....

I don't know what lies ahead, I don't know how many terrians we have to encounter, I don't know at which point of time we might have to part ways...all I know is that NO ONE can ever snatch you form me not even YOU yourself....YOU would always stay safe in my soul and there would always be a "ps : I Love You and Always Will", because I can never stop loving you not now not tommorrow not day after not fifty years later not as long as my soul survives. The day I stop loving YOU that would be the end of "I"...my body might take thousands of birth and change thousands of shapes and names but my SOUL just has one name one purpose one aim and that is to love YOU....Your love would transcend with my soul for an eternity...

Tammy came to me in "this" life but you were there in me since forever...Tammy is my life and I can't even imagine "this" life without her but without YOU around I can't imagine any of my lives, I might take births and do all the rituals but my soul would be dead long back and all it would yearn tod o is break free out of the vicious cicrle of life and death because life to it then would hold no meaning as it would be deprived of your essance...YOU and only YOU are the bearer the savior of my bereft soul...

I know you are hating me to compare you and tammy but i can't help it YOU are the centre of my universe..all i am saying is that i love tammy like hell becoz she is a part of YOU...Since the day she was born I have sene her as an extention of YOU and i love her even more crazyly because shes the pride of my love...the one living soul both of us together created...so meri bewakoof whacko I can forget to breathe but what i can't forget is to go on loving you both till an eternity and as you know My Beloved Whackooo Eternity is meant to last Forever just like You Me and our Tams.....

and i guess now was the perfect moment to create yet another eternal yaad in the form of a beautyful ever cherished hug which tammy shared with her mumma and her powieeee..... She wanted to cry without any reason because she wanted God to see how happy she was to be here in their arms and wanted to Thank him for giving them to her....She didn't know how to speak her feelings out...She understood one thing that her parents were madly in love with each other and that knowledge filled the core of heart with inexpressable warmth and she wished this madness grew to insanity and eveyr single time her mumma's bhaggu created this insane love SHE became the lucky apple of their lives........"AMEN"😉

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i know its short atleast as per my standards but bear with me and my absolutle paucity of timeee😆...and yeah remember moi waiting for your adorable comments and criticism😳😉...

some of oyu might feel i have used a way too poetic tounge here😆...but i sincerely requesht you to divulge deeper into the meanig of every sentance whatever he said he said it by his heart and trust me he meant every letter he spoke....

ps...i feel great after writing this...😃...ayt rock like hellll😳😳..me happpy..."touch wood"😉..i always feel so proud after writing anything in their context😳..as sur said above ashi yuvi and tammy have reinstilled my own belief in love faith and goodness...😳

Edited by smritisashi - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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omgggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg an updateeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee u kno wt evn meeeee ws sittin velaaaaaaaaa 😆 😆 😆 so i thot k kyaaaaaaaaa karuuuuuuuuuuu 😆 😆 den me opnd mera lappy n strtd readin ur ficccyyyyssssssssssss ty n tamanna bothhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh n u kno wat i ws feeelin sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo refreshd aftr readin ittttttttttttt maaaaaaaaaaaaaaan u simplyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy rockkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

n u knoooo wattttttttttttttttttt woh powwwyyyyyyyyyyyy walaaaaaaaaaaaa para padh k i felttttttttt shooooooooooooooo shooooooooooooo shoooooooooooo haaaaaaaaaaappppppyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy 😳 powwwieeeeeeeeeeee chocokakeeeeeeeeee mummmmaaaaaaaaaaa sonuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu 😳 😳 😳 uske baad i strtd readin tamannaaaaaaaa n strtd cryinnnnnnnnnnnnnnn 1ce againnnnnnnn readin dat flashback wala partttttttttttt 😭 i dunna who it was but sum1 said k if da writer has cried den da readiers r bound 2 cry 2 i guess it ws frost dis lyn isss sooo truuu naaaaaaa i mean evn while rytin tamanna u strtd cryinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn 😭

newyzzzzzzzzzzzz havnt read itttttttt but m gonnna read it ryt nowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww omggggggggggggggggggggggggggg maine aaj hi padhaaaaaaaa fir seeeeeeeeee n ur givin an upodateeeeeeeeeeee aaaj hiiiiiiiiiii 😆 but dont xpect me 2 givyaaaaaaaaaaa mearaaaaaaaaaaaaaa spclllllllllll cmnt 2day onlyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy 😆 😆 😆 ill giv it 2moroooooooooooooooooooo 😳 😳 😳

got ittttt got ittttttt frost has ritten no tears in da writer , no tears in da reader n nother 1 ....how can u cry if u cant cry? dis ws said by ring lardner😳 btwwwww y m i rytin all dis in ty section😆😆yahaan toh der is nuthin lyk cryinnnnn😆newaysssssssssss m readin ur ficccyyyyyyyyyyyyyy😳😳😳

Edited by priyachaku_18 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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eee dats nt fairrrrrrrr piyaaaaaaa 😭 😭 😭 i want your special comment today today and today coz kal fir i got to go for work and i so dnt wld get the time to read it and re read it and then re re read it and smile to myself and feel happy ki u loved it 😃 😃 😃 so i want it todayyyyyyyy...lol...am i like sounding tooo onfident and too sure ki you WOULD end up loving it? 😆 😆 ...if i am then forgive me but whether u like it or no it doesn't matter what matters is you reading it and whatever be the outcome i know u wld be absolutely honest with me 😳 😳 but plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz TODAYYYY TODAYY TODAYYYY TODAYYYY meri piay hai naa toh today hi degiiiiii
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Posted: 17 years ago
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godddddddddddddd uve cast a spellllllll on meeeeeeeeeeee😍jst cant get ovr ittttttt maaaan😍wat do ya xpect me 2 write hun???? i mena i jst dont hav wrdz 😍hav 2 google srch 4 wrdz f appreceation😍itz amaaaazinggggggg 😍soooooooo touchinnnnnnnnnnn😍n u kno wat evn BEFORE readin it i knew dat i wud end up LOVING dis part 2 da CORE😍+ve vibes strt cumin out as soooon as i c ur p[osttttttt🤗ryt nowwwwwww m totalllllly speeechlessssssssssssssss jus dunno wat 2 say 2 u
as alwyzzzzzzzzzz luuuvd evrythinnnnnnn evry single word he says☺️☺️☺️da vry 1st sentence made meeeeee smileeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee an evrlastin smileeeeeeeeeeeee😍😍😍it ws beautifuuuul😍😍😍luuuvd ittttttttt 🤗🤗🤗he has said evrythin jst prfctlyyyyyyy 😳 😳 😳 evryyyyyy single para ws awe inspiring😍
luuuvd da tammmyyyyyyyy part alsoooooooo🤗🤗🤗luuuv uuuuuuuu tammmmyyyyyyyyy luuuv uuuuu veryyy veryyyyyy muchhhhhhhhhhh🤗luuuv uuuuuuu aty 🤗🤗n i agreeeeeeeee aty rockkkkkkkkk de reallly reallly realllly dooooooooooo😍jst cant get ovr ittttttttttt😍luuuuuv uuuuuuuuu 2 loooonyyyyyyyyyyyyy🤗blessssssss u dearrrrrrrr🤗feeelssssss lyk readin it 4evrrrrrrrrrrrr n evrrrrrrrrrrr n evrrrrrrrrrrrrr tilllllllllllllllllll eternityyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy🤗🤗🤗
Edited by priyachaku_18 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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beautiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiifuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu lllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! omgggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg gggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg gggggggggggggggggggg

dis is a vry small parttttt but but but but butttttttttttt it potrays luv sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! vry lil detld discriminatn is actlllll trueeee eva lastinnnnnnn ternl luvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv

it lft buttrflies fluttrinnn inside meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! n it actlly flt like a tiny tear drppin down!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! its jus sooooooo god damn touchin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it jus gts vrythn alive!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! n all dat he sys for tammy isssss sheeshhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! m out of wrds out of wrds out of wrdssssssssssssss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!

YOU are my good night dream, my good morning sun shine...

YOU would always stay safe in my soul and there would always be a "ps : I Love You and Always Will"

as you know My Beloved Whackooo Eternity is meant to last Forever just like You Me and our Tams.....




u knooooo whttttttttttt........i actlly hve like all dis livin in me nw!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! its soooooo mesmerizin smritiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! d wy u ply wth simpl wrds 2 formul8 heavy romantic touchiin soul stimul8innnn stuffffffffffffffff!!!!!!!!!! issssssssss jussssssssssssssssssssss fantabulous!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

donate me 0.00000000000000000000000000000001% of dis "KALA" pleeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaassssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeee

Edited by funky n crazy - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Short ,small, sweet, stunningly beautiful, strong luv portrayed in words, so like Smriti Shahi (i m talking about the rest of words except firt 2 coz they don't don't get well with loony , coz loony can neeeeeeeeeveeeeeeeeeeer give short replies
But tell me 1 thing how could u do this yaar i mean from where did u get such ideas yaar Awesome
I think if remix restarts wuth new season it will be ur storey they will consider first i Srishiti Arya would have been member if Rf and even woh bhi AY ki love story par mort concentrate karti
Smriti plz ab tammy ko bhi continue kar naa yaar bohot suspense build up ho gaya hai that it had become unbearable now

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