oh loony looonyyy loooooonnyyyyyy me dont kno wat 2 ryt how 2 ryt frm ver 2 strt dis part was sooooo vel ritten soooo beautifuly described a perfect description of a prfct family an idael faimly i really realllly reallly luvd itttt ma eyes hav becum soooo watery afta readin dis part i really lyk da concept of dis fic
i jst luvd da way how ashi's perspective 2wrds life has changd i mean she was alwys da same n wud neva eva change herself her +ve outluk her optimsm her daring nature her attitude her luv passion her priorities etc etc wud alwys b da same but im talkin bout a 'happy family' afta yuvi n tammy came 2 her lyf her mindset has cumpletely changd 4 da better
n i luvd dis lyn dat uve ritten nothing and no one could look ugly in her halo, she so beautified everyone's' lives. uve mentioned dis word 'ugly' n i kno it doesnt hav its literal meaning ie unattractive but here it means ill minded selfish ppl who vud do all sorts of nasty things 4 der own sake n wudnt even care if dey r causing others pain n distress n dis word 'halo' here it means her simplcity her straightforwardness her purity vich inspires others 2 be lyk her 2 adopt her qualities vich truly r infectious n dis is jst wat happened 2 yuvi who , in her company , changed frm an arrogant daddys boy , alwys being surrounded by falsehood , 2 an independent trustworthy person yesss she really beautified his lyf n not only his but ours also hasnt she?? i mean not only hav v changed but hav also lrnt a lot frm her wid her lyf seems sooo beautiful soo easy (vich unfortunately isnt) as if u can reach 4 da stars soo effortlessly n u can face ne1 widout ne fear
n oooo boyyyy da way taaams speaks is shhoooo cuteeeee i mean 1st powwwyyyyy den wwwwoooooo den sonuuu den dat chokocakeee n now phewwwww phewwww n gandaaaaa n da bst part tykooooooo i mean da way she speakssss makes me gooo maaaaaaad awwww she is da cutest babyy of of da world da way she sings dis song love station n da way she does dat birdy dance awwww n it is but obvio dat she did it much much better dan her powwwy n he was sooooo proud of herrr n wen she said gandaaaaaa she had 2 do it cuz if da bstst lady da lady of his dreams was standin ryt der in frnt of him , how cud he eva luk at ne other girl ( xept taams ) coz ven ur talkin bout ashi den even da photo of da most sensous gal vil luk gandaaaa ohh taams gud work
ohh n i really lykd da telepathy btwn da 2 ie ven yuvi was thinkn bout der breakup ven he had lost hold of da love of his lyf ven he felt dat he cudnt even live a single moment vidout her ven da 2 of dem were partin der ways ven all dees moments all dees yaadein were cumin back 2 his mind ven he started feelin guilty once again ven he was feelin soo low thinkin bout all thoes days ven he yearnd 4 her ven dey ver soo far away frm each other ven he was bout 2 break down n at da ryt moment ashi reminds him of der 2nd patchup remindin him of his promise ven dey again became a couple neva 2 b broken apart dis is da most spcl quality of ashi dat she can make ne1 laaf ne1 smile n yuvi knew dat noo its not da tym 2 cry but 2 rejoice n laaf n dis is wat he did by sayin dat lyn "whacko aaj bhi din ke 24 hours main se 20 hours mujhe tumhe marne aur tammy ko paari karne ka mann karta hai" n fir se ashi ka dat same popat wala face vich i can neva eva 4get n ven ashi says mr powwwyyyyy taaams cudnt bear it at all she must hav thot k wat?? y is my mumma callin MY powwyyy HER powwyyy n datz way she hugged HER powwwy sayin k nooo u can only b MY powwy n no1 else ka powwyyy
n den all f dem go 2 ashi's room n ven she makes all dose promises 2 her dotty "she would always be there for her as a mother, as a sister, as a best friend and if she wanted as a guide too" "Ashi promised her dotty love friendship faith trust confidence and freedom to do what she wanted to do, she promised her dotty to allow her follow her heart always and to accept her just the way she was." ohhh i luvd dees lyns i was readin dees lyns again n again n again n even yuvi's promise "my strength is always there for you". ohhh looons i infact luvd dis whole para it was soooo emotional sooo sweet n i kno dey wud alwys b true 2 der promises no matter wat da circumstances may b dey wud alwys b vid each other supporting n guidin der lil taamy vid all da strenght n xperiences dey hav gained n taaammyyy love u babyy she is shoo cute shoo innocent shoo young shoo shweet candles 2 her only meant spcl occasions lyk bdays celebrations etc n ven she blew dat candle n strted singin "happy budday tuuu tuuuuu" awww dose wordz were ringin in ma ears ooo looons i luv taammy sooo much k main tuje kaise batau u kno vile readin all dis even i had moist eyes
n dey finally reach da shed der own shed vich was sooo spcl 4 dem soo close 2 der hearts vich dey wanted 2 share vid der dotty i luvd all da scenes dat hav been included dat hav been associated vid dis shed b it der dreams der heartbreaks der tears der plans n not 2 4get LEO !!!! the 4th pillar of her lyf da candle dance dat night dey had spnt 2gether n ven dey ver reminded of yamini ( ven ashi came baack frm london n saw yuvi hug her n call her sweetheart ) n aditya ( ven he gifted her a ring on her bday n told her 2 4get yuvi ) , who had sworn 2 pull dem apart nehow , all dey cud do was cry n cry cuz all those bad n painful memories were returnin back 2 der minds n dey wanted 2 throw it away frm der lives n datz why dey hugged each other showing dat no one cud pull dem apart no one n dey ver born 2 b vid each other dey ver meant 4 each other He kissed her throat, he kissed her face he kissed her eyes he drank her tears and finally he kissed her lips swollowing all her cries and pain. It was a very strange kiss both of them were crying and sobbing and holding on to each other as if if they let go they would fall apart . dis lyn loony dis lyn is made me cry dis lyn is soooo spcl sooo beautifully writtten i was literally cryin vile readin all dis
n tammy da way she reacted 2 dis situation i mean dis was soo strange 4 her seeing dem cry n hug n kiss n still crying she obviously must hav understood dat dey needed der own time n later she might hav thot k now its time k i join dem n tell dem k now even i m a part an integral part of your lives n i truly am the proof of your undying love. she wanted dem 2 4get da painful memories of da past coz she cudnt c dem in tears of sorrow aww taammy i luv uuu i jst love you , u kno loons i hav developed a spcl a diff feelin 4 taams i dunno dis ficcy seems real tammy seems real as if she exists sumver i dunno y but i really really love taamy as much as i love ashi yuvi veneva i think f dis spcl couple taams alwyas cums 2 ma mind thanku loony thnx a lot loons 4 creatin dis spcl person
n now cums da bst part of dis fic ( actly each n every word of dis whole fic is da bst but still dis part made be cry lyk nethin ) awww ven ashi says dad ka hona bohot important hota hai aww i luvd ittt n she wants yuvi 2 keep taams as his topmost priority she wants him 2 1st think f der dotty n den herself she wants her dotty 2 be always surrounded by da luv n affection f her mumma n powwyy she doesnt want her dotty 2 witness her mumma n powwy gettin separated (vich is impossible cuz dey jst cant live vidout each ohter) she doesnt want her 2 be affected by all der differences I want you to take her to school the very first day, I want you to teach her how to read and write and play the guitaar, I want you to see her when she first makes a pony tale, I want you to tie her first shoe lace, I want you to hold her and cry with her when she experiances her first failure and tell her that failures are the stepping stones to success, I want you to be at her side and beam at her with pride when she graduates, I want you to be the man who would walk her down the alter and give her away to the love of her life and I want you to still be there in my life if not as my love or my husband then as my best friend and as my daughter's father.
dees lyns loony dees lyns r magicccc i mean i cud really c yuvi dioing all dis ie i cud c yuvi tieing her shoelace teachin her how 2 read n write loony u know wat ryt now my dad's face is cumin 2 my mind i am rememberd of all dose days wen he used 2 sit besides me n v used read da chapters 2gether u kno ven i 4 da 1st tym came 2 school i dint leave my dad's legs i was holding dem soo titely n i saw him standin outside da classroom starin at me n i was crying k i dont want2 go 2 school
oops i guess im gettin carried away thinkin bout dose days !! sorry !! but dees last lines made me cry loony dey really did
wat ive cum 2 kno afta readin dis part is dat u luv ur family a loooot n da last few paras reflect ur deep profound luv 4
ur dad m i ryt ??? ya ya i kno it was ritten keepin yuvi in mind but stilll it aslo shoes how much ur dad ur family means 2 uuuuuuu
n me very veryyy veryyyyy soryy 4 dis delayed reply me soooo busy dees days k me unable 2 take out tym 4 nethin else ughhhh me hates xams n me missing uuuuuu lyk hellllllll n me luvs u a loooooooooooot n me wants 2 hug u ryt now veryyyyyyyyy tightlyyyyyyy u kno u r da 2nd bstest girl afta priya/ashi bhaggu has sent 2 earth me luvs u soooo much sooooo much k me jst cant xpress ma feelings in wrdz da way u do it soo magically
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