Teri Yaadein..Mini Update Pg 6... - Page 6

I know you are hating me to compare you and tammy but i can't help it YOU are the centre of my universe..all i am saying is that i love tammy like hell becoz she is a part of YOU...Since the day she was born I have sene her as an extention of YOU and i love her even more crazyly because shes the pride of my love...the one living soul both of us together created...so meri bewakoof whacko I can forget to breathe but what i can't forget is to go on loving you both till an eternity and as you know My Beloved Whackooo Eternity is meant to last Forever just like You Me and our Tams.....

I just luv this para 😛 very well written 👏 u rock smiriti plz continue soon waiting for next part 👏 👏

wat do u expect from us to write smritooo??? coz if u want dat we shud pour out our thot after reading ur fic then i'll deffo re-write ur fic... coz ur fic replaces evry thot of mine.. this happens to me atleast... if not wid all... datz y i comment after a day or 2 of reading...
u portray each aspects so vividly, so clearly... as if m watching the future of our beloved couple... how can sum1 love the other to this extent??? such honesty.. such intensity n such deep passion i hav never seen.. n m sure i'll never b able to see coz the 2 person in this fic plus their cute cuddly angel r simply incomparable, unique amongst all...
n the way u picturize their feelings... i hav got no words for dat yaar... simply no words... just wanna say 2 words for wateva u hav written.. u rockkkkkkkkkkkkkk. u leave a tingling sensation in my stomach n always make me feel proud of idolizing such persons n of being a frnd of urz.. alwayz keep smiling n yeahhhhh.... make us also feel happy by taking out sum time from ur schedule n writing the next ty part n of tammy...

as u know i ca't write longg reviewss but honestlyy mannnn u rockk!! i think ive told u this b4 u rock at all the genres uve written it date! mann its great!
and don't wrry atleast fr me its not an para i'll say its have an essay!! love u smreee love u loaDS

u write so beautifully.........i jus luv this fic...........u cnnnnnn potray their luv so beautifulllyy..........
nw plzzzzzz continue ths soon.............
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AMEN!! Amen that tammy's mamma's bhaggu always create this insane love and we all insane people get to encounter this insane love of Ashi-Yuvi and their tammy!😳😳 Amen!!

Loons mannnnn this was amazing part... loved the way yuvi replied specially emphasizing on YOU everytime!😳😳 Loved the way yuvi showed ashi that his love for ashi was eternal... and he can never stop loving her even if he dies... loved the way u potrayed their loveee... you are simply the best when it comes in potraying feelings😳😳

The second last para was my fav in yuvi's dialougeees... specially the way he said and my bewakoof wackoo!!😳😳 I can see that slight smile on ashi's face with tears in her eyes...and i soo lovee this expression of hers😳😳 and obviously she is bewakoof...how can she ever think that yuvi...he physco will ever leave her!😳😳 bewakoof wackoo...hmphhhhhh!😳 Loved this line a lottt... its sooo chweet and cute and i soo lovee it!😳 it adds perfect touch to AY's dialouges after those senti one!☺️ It soo gives perfect essancee and i love ittttttt😳😳

And the hug was likeeee the bestttttttttt!! And tammy is indeed cuteeee☺️☺️ I lovee tammy soo much yaar loonss... why is she soooooooo cuteeeeeeee?☺️😳 that hug was as if like promisingg...a family promise... that they will always be there with each other in their moments of sorrow or joy!😳😳 Geeeeeeeeee i love it soo muchhh loons...and seriously AMEN! amen that we always encounter amazing insane love story of AY!😳😳

...And YOU my pagaal loony...i love YOU tons🤗🤗🤗 and YOU are one imp. part of my lifeeeee... and agar ab aapko fursat mile toh please jaldi cont. karrr because am dying for the next partttttttttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! So my pagaal idiotic loony...continueeeeeee soonnnn!! WE all would be waiting...☺️