Dhoom dhamaal!I Updated-part 21 Pg21 - Page 14

hey sur its gettin wayyyyyyyyyy 2 intrstin! gr8 goin! do cntinue asap!

Uv:Sid...suppose..ek hot chick hai..n u really like her...
Sid:Usmein suppose karne ki kya baat hai...
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Sid:Hmmm...Ok...Mr.Yuvraj Dev...Welcome to Dr.Love!!Tumhare sab problems ka hal mere...yaani Dr.luv ke paas hai...Dil ka dard bhagane aur life mein masti laane aa gaya hai Dr. love!!!
Uv:Oh shut up sid...get to the point...
Sid:Dude!!Thoda warm up toh karne do!!Thabhi toh first class advice milegi!!!
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Ashi is ecstatic...but her mind drifts off....to the hilarious ice cream fight that uv and she had....She remembers lookin into his eyes as she pushed him to the wall...she heard herself say..."Uv..tumne promise kiya tha ki tum mujhe ice cream khilaoge...."And uv saying...chalo babes...lets go."
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wat a fantabulousss part dis isssssssssss😍 i mean 1st it strts off vid mr. hillarios uh i mean dr. love n den ends offf vid such a cute n romantic sceen ,flashback' i mean .... yuvi is soooo keeen on winning ovr ashiii dat now hez evn ready 2 take da advice f sid n da ashi sam sceen ver she strts thinkin bout yuvi suddnlyyyy omggggg it was jst prfccct i mean da way uve portrayd her feelings 4 her true luv is jst amazing

tho her mind is set up on a mission but stillll her hrt jst cant stop thinkin bout her psycho her fake heman her daddy's boy vidout evn realisin how much shez in luv vid him

evn in da midst f all thots confusion n stuff she jst stops ryt der thinkin bout her very very own her yuvi coooooz luv is in de air n shez gotta feel it evryver annddddddd she can run she can hide but she cant escape his luv

thnx a looot surrrrrr 4 puttin up such an awsum n brilliant part i realllly luuuv u 4dis


n i wanna do 1mor thing vich u reallly reallly reallly deserve


PHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

n dis is a reallly reallly loud whislte 😳 full f luv n admiration n praise n gud wishes

n 1 mor thinggggggg

i reallly luuvd da way uve portrayd da feelings f da most beautiful couple in da wrld

n da way dey r feelin 4 each other.......it givs me a hint f da upcumin romantic sccens datz gonna happn btwn da 2 most sizzling ppl f da wrld




n 1 mor thingggg i luuuuvd da dialogssssssssss a looooottt dey ver simplyyyyyyyy brilliant luuuvd each n evry lyn dat u roteeeeeeeee frm da bottom f ma hrt

keep up ur gud wrk n m signin out ryt now vid da same old dialog


cont asap

otherwise m gonna killllll uuuuuuuu

cuz curiosity kills da cat n m highly curious bot watz gonna happn nxt n here ur da cat sooo watch out!!!

hey sur it was ultra sufi rocking part but I wonder Sid itne samjahdari ki baatein kar raha haa 😕 😆 actaully jab baat AshiUv ki aati hai too un dono ko chood ke third no no no actually 4th person ( i forgot sonia)jiska brain work karta hai that is Sid but yaar this fic of ur is simply awesome Uv is soo jealous .the way u wrote down his feelings in his dailouges is like watching him saying all the lines with right expression a big round of applause for ur work 👏
Chao
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@Snehal:Hey thanx a lot yaar!!

@Vanshika:Hey thanx a lot!!

@Priya:Thanx!!!Baap re!!Ur reply left me totally speechless!!! 😆 Thanx a ton!!n that seeti??Wow!!Louder than mine!!! 😃 Thanx a ton!!!n after gettin ur dhamki ill def cont sooooooonnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!Watch out for my next chapters!!! 😃

@Gungun:Hey thanx a lot gungun!!!Ill def cont sooooonnnnnnn!!!!!!!! 😃

Hi Sur
Im Simran,the first fic i read in this forum is ur and i find it rocking gurl. I know u'll continue soon and wont keep new as well as old readers waiting .
luv
Simran

Hey simran!!Thanx 4 likin my work!!

Heres my next chapter ppl!!Hope u njoy it!!! 😃 😃


Chapter 16
Ok ppl the next chapter!!!!So as u might remember ashi and sam had gone to have ice cream and latty was planning sumthing
so latty proceedes to carry out her plan...she hunts out vrinda and has a long talk with her....vrinda looks upset and runs into the room...she talks to tia who sympathises with her and reaches for her phone...she talks to sumone on the fone....hangs up and tells vrinda sumthing.....who smiles immediately and hugs tia..
You must be thinking yeh kya ho raha hai???Where are the dialouges???Well ill tell u...
meanwhile ashis on her way to meet sam...for his promised help with the project....shes feelin very happy with herself...shes humming a tune...the love station tune subconciously...she goes into the staff room and meets sam...
Ashi:Hi sam!!Gud morning!!
Sam:Gud morning ashi!!!How are you today??
Ashi:Im fine...waise aap bahut acche lag rahe hain aaj....
Sam looks at himself....Hes wearing a light summer green shirt with his trademark blue jeans and sandals......Really??well...thanx!!Toh chalein??
ashis about to answer him when suddenly the door opens........
Hello everyone...hello anvesha...kaisi ho tum??

ashis shocked!!AAP???!!!!

Ok ok..ill break the suspense....If u havent guessed it itss........................................................ ............................................................


SUMEET AHUJA!!!!!

He smiles at ashi n sam n enters.....
Sumeet:I hope maine aap logon ko disturb nahin kiya....(to sam)......btw im sumeet...sumeet ahuja....Tia aur anvesha ka dad...
Sam:Oh mr.Ahuja!!Nice to meet you!!
Sumeet:Tia mujhe bataa rahi thi ki kal ashi kafi upset thi....aur apni mom ko bahut miss kar rahi thi.....
Ashis about to open her mouth and try to control the situation when sam says..,,Ji haan Mr.Ahuja...ashi kal kaafi upset thi....Jab maine use ice cream khilayi tab uska mood thoda theek hua...he says smiling at ashi...
Poor ashi can do nothing but smile back!!!!
Sumeet:Well.that was very nice of you....maine socha hai ki main aaj ka din ashi ke saath spend karoonga...as a father main use acchi tarah jaan bhi loonga aur...uska mood bhi theek ho jaayega...agar aapki permission ho toh sameer..
Sam:Thats a gr88 idea Mr.Ahuja....ashi ek bahut acchi ladki hai..and ill b glad if i can help in any way...aapke saath time spend karne se im sure ashi will feel better...rite ashi???
Ashi:But..but...mera project...aapne....aapne toh...
Sam:Tum apne project pe kaafi work kar rahi ho ashi...aur aaj toh saturday hai...tum aaj apne dad ke saath chali jaao...hum project baad mein bhi discuss kar sakte hain...ok??
Ashi:But but...
Sumeet:No buts ashi...ab toh tumhare music teacher ne khud tumhe permission de di hai rite??Now cum on....
Ashi:lekin mujhe..mujhe aur bhi toh kaam hain....aur ...aur...Uv!!!Haan...uv mera partner hai project mein...usne mujhe aaj bulaya tha...
Sumeet:Kahaan hai woh...chalo usse baat kar lete hain...
sumeet goes out of the room with ashi frantically following....
Ashi:Rukiye toh...plz....rukjaiye....listen to me first.....
But sumeet kahaan kisi ki sunta hai??He just head outta the door and is barging down the corridor...when he runs into...none other than......


Sumeet:YUVRAJ!!!!!!Accha hua tum yahin par mil gaye....main tumhare pass hi aa raha tha...
Uvs a bit confused....Mere pass??Kuch kaam tha kya??
Ok lets just explain the placing.....Sumeets facing uv wid his back to ashi....n ashis voilently tryin to signal to uv to say he wants her to stay back for the project....n uvs totally confused b/w ashi n sumeet!!!
Sumeet:Haan....main aaj ka din ashi ke saath spend karna chahta hoon....But ashi keh rahi this ki tumhe aur use project pe work karna hai...Toh maine socha ki main tumse aake khud pooch loon ki kya tum ashi ko ek din ke liye jane de sakte ho???
Ashi:Swinging her hands wildly in the air indicating a no!!!!!!!!!!
Uv:(As confused as eva!!!)ahhh...uncle......sure!!!
Ashi bangs her hand onto her head!!!
Uv:Aap toh...aap ashi ke dad hain...of course aap use le jaa sakte hain...mujhe kya problem ho sakti hai???
Sumeet:Thats gr8!!!Toh chalein ashi???
Ashi:!!!?????aaaaaaaa..........haan...haan........chaliye... ....aap...app car main baithiye main aati hoon....
Sumeet:Ok...He leaves...
Ashi turns around to uv:CYCOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!Tumhari eyes kya sirf show ki hain ya kaam bhi karti hain????!!mian itni der se tumhe no bolne ke liye keh rahi thi...n u??Wat did u do??(Imitating uv)Aap toh ashi ke dad hain...mujhe kya problem ho sakti hai???Ahhhhhh!!!!!!!Maybe u r soo retarded k tumhari eyes ka fault nahin hai rite??U will pay for this yuvraj dev!!!

She leaves in a huff...
Uv thinks to himself:Well...Ashi tum apne aap ko bahut samrt samajhti ho na??Poor you...ab tum hi batao main tumhe us sam ke saath akele kaise rehne deta???(Wicked grin)

Meanwhile ashi and sumeet are sitting in a coffee shop...sumeet is havin coffee and ashi is sitting and sulking...
Sumeet:Ashi...Kya baat hai...tum upset lag rahi ho....
Ashi:Kuch nahin...Im fine....
Sumeet:Dekho ashi...main jaanta hoon ki...tumhare liye yeh easy nahin hai...But i hope you understand...For a long time main abhut akela raha hoon...meri wife..tia ki mom Tara ke jaane ke baad...meri life mein ek vaccum sa ho gaya tha...Lekin tumahre aur tumhari mom ke aane se...i feel like living life all over again...main apni happines tumhare saath baatna chahta hoon...I want to know you better taki main tumhe ek father ka pyaar de sakoon....
Ashi is sooooooooooo touched!!Tears burn at the back of her eyes....she smiles at sumeet....
Ashi:Thanx a lot uncle...This really means a lot to me...
Sumeet:Gr88!!Ab batao tum kya karna chahti ho??
Ashi:Hmm..let me think....Kyun na hum paas ke gaming station pe jaake thode games khelen??
Sumeet:Games!!!U mean Video games!!!ashi main...main nahin khel sakta...i mean....
Ashi:Oh cum on uncle..chaliye...she drags him along!!

Thats all i have for this chapter ppl...but hope u liked it!!!!!!! 😃

Love it sidooooooooooooooooo😳😳😳 Hahaha i loveeed what yuvii did🤣🤣🤣 he is just impossiblee!😆 just to keep ashi away from sam...she sent her with sumeet🤣🤣🤣 awwwwwwwww man i love itttttt...and will comment on this part and all others later😳 abhi i m going to sleep so tht i can wake up early!😆😆😳 but love this ficccccccccccccc and continue soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn!!😳

🤣ohhh booooooyyyy dis ws funnnnyyyyy🤣🤣dat ashi yuvi sumeet sceen ws awsuuuuum🤣🤣n da last section ver sumeet says k he wants 2 luuv her as a father 😳 😳 awww it ws shooo shweeet 😳 nice partttt suuurrrrrrrr 😳 😳 had a nice time readin itttt 😳 😳

wooow sur tht was sooo gd 😳
summent ashi scene was jus fab
carry on ... 😃
plz cont soon