Dhoom dhamaal!I Updated-part 21 Pg21

OK pl this is my first fic here at IF...hope u guyz like it!!!
All the students of Maurya high R cumin back to skool after their summer vacations.
They have all assembled in the hall 4 a lecture by jumbo....

Tia n her nagels r deighted to be back...they catch up n all the gossip bout tinseltown n the world of fashion...
Tia:Oh babes...tia ne holidays mein apni angels ko kitna miss kiya....
Pri:Humne bhi tumhe bahut miss kiya tia...
Meher: Haan...agar tum Milan nahin gayi hoti toh v cud have spent more time together...
Tia:Aww...dont worry angels...ab tia aa gayi hai...n tumhare liye special gifts bhi laayi hai!!!!Chalo room mein chalte hain..main tumhe apna saraa new stuff dikhati hoon..k???

They go towards their room....
Tia is talking as she walks....
Tia wahaan bade bade designers se mili...n pata hai unhone tia se ya kaha????
She opens the door n her eyes Open Wide in horror!!!!!!
She screams!!!!!Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeee


Ashis standing wid vrinda in the corridor....
Ashi:U know mate...Main jab london mein Mp se mili na...she was so happy...
Vrinda:I guess use uski family mil gayi...That was wat she alwayz wanted....
Ashi:Ya...true....
Just then Tia n her angels arrive screaming in unison.....
Ashi:Woah woah!!!Hold it girls...Kya hua???Tumme se kisine koi fashion rule tod diya kya???Y fir kisi ANGLE ka Halo gum gaya!!???
Tia: GIRLS GIRLS!!!HUMare saare rooms DESTROY Ho chuke hain!!!!
Vrinda:KYA!!???Tia yeh tum kya keh rahi ho????
Tia...Haan!!!Tia sahi keh rahi hai!!!!
Pri: Hum jab Humare rom mein gaye toh....toh....Oh God!!
Meher:Haan!!Its totally in shambles!!
Ashis standing wid vrinda in the corridor....
Ashi:U know mate...Main jab london mein Mp se mili na...she was so happy...
Vrinda:I guess use uski family mil gayi...That was wat she alwayz wanted....
Ashi:Ya...true....
Just then Tia n her angels arrive screaming in unison.....
Ashi:Woah woah!!!Hold it girls...Kya hua???Tumme se kisine koi fashion rule tod diya kya???Y fir kisi ANGLE ka Halo gum gaya!!???
Tia: GIRLS GIRLS!!!HUMare saare rooms DESTROY Ho chuke hain!!!!
Vrinda:KYA!!???Tia yeh tum kya keh rahi ho????
Tia...Haan!!!Tia sahi keh rahi hai!!!!
Pri: Hum jab Humare rom mein gaye toh....toh....Oh God!!
Meher:Haan!!Its totally in shambles!!

Ashi:Hey BHaggu!!!Im sure sirf paint nikal raha hoga tumhare room ka...n u guyz r blowing it out of proportion.....a la..angel style!!
Tia:U punk!!Tum tia ko believe nahin kar rahi ho???Chalo tia tumhe dikhati hai....

She takes ashi n the others to her room....

n there the others see......there is a BIG pile of mud on the floor....the room has been stripped off its decoration...
all the paint has been covered with cement...No beds in site...all the furniture has been removed....
Vrinda:Tia!!!Yeh kya??!!!Tumhare kamre ko kya ho gaya!!!???
A group of girls cum dere...
Oneof them says...Sirf tumhara kamra hi nahin tia...hum sabke rooms ki yai halat hai....
Ashi:WAT THE HELL!!!Yeh kya keh rahi ho tum!!!???
Girl:Haan theek keh rahi hoon main....
they go n inspect the other rooms too....n all r in the same condition...

Ashi:Hey BHaggu!!!!Yeh Maurya high ke High n Mighty principal sir ko kya is school ko military camp banana hai!!?????
Actually...ideas not bad....
Tia:Ewwww....Oh tias god!!!Military camp!!Tia toh pehle din hi dehydrate ho jaayegi!!!
Ashi:dehydrate hona Jumbo ke saamne...chalo lets go n meet him...
just then there is an announcement on the Pa system...
"All students r requested to assemble in the hall"
They all gather there....

Jumbo"Gud morning students!!...Muarya high ke new academic term mein aap sabko hearty welcome!!!"
Tia:Gud morning nahin sir...bad morning......Sir humare rooms ki kya halat ho gayi hai.....
Ashi:Ya...aap kya humsabse apni purani dushmani nikaal rahe hain???Sir...humare rooms ko construction site mein kyun badal diya hai!!?????
Jumbo:Relax students.....Dekhiye...Maurya has alwayz been positive towards change.....
Sid whispers to uv:Tabhi hum sab clg chodne wale the b coz he didnt want to include music....
Jumbo continues....Isliye humare board of directors ne decide kiya hai ki..........
Hum girls hostel ki building mein thode changes n improvements laayenge.....
Toh thats y the girls hostel has been closed down due to repairs n construction.....
Ashi:But sir fir hum sab rahenge kahaan??????
Jmbo:Uska intezaam bhi maine kar diya hai.....Tum sab temporarily boys hostel mein shift ho jaaogi....

all girls:KYA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!BOYZ HOSTEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ranveer:Arre!!Baap re!!!Yeh ladkiyaan humare hostel mein aa jayengi toh hum kahaan jaayenge!!!
Jumbo:students plz!!!!Meri poori baat suniye....
Dekhiye...hum intne short notice pe koi aur buiilding arrange nahin kar paaye...isliye aap sab ko ek hi building mein accomodate karna hoga.....
Boyz hostel mein total 50 rooms hain...with 3 students in each.....
In mein se 25 rooms hum girls ko de denge n 25 rooms 4 d boyz.....yaane ki around six of u in a room.....
All:SIX!!!!!!!
Jumbo: Ji haan students...plz..aap sab ko thoda adjust karna padega....Jitni jaldi ho sake hum girls hostel ko ready kar denge...Tab tak plz aap log co operate kijiye...
New rooms ki list notice board par lagi hai....plz dekh lijiye n settle ho jaaiye.....kal se aapke regular classes shuru ho jaayenge...Thank you.

Vrinda:Oh yaar....yeh ek nayi musibat!!Chalo ashi lets go n see the list...

they all go towards the notice board...but its very crowded.....
Ashi:Hey hey...dont push!!Take it easy!!Mate is rate pe toh hum kabhi board tak pahunch nahin paayenge.....Idea!!!![Dhin tadak dhin dhin tadak dhin dhin tadak dhin ta ta ta!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!]
She removes a Hair pin 4m vrindas hair.....n drops it on the ground in the middle of the group...n shouts....Hey BHaggu!!!!Leech!!Leech!!!Dekho!!!!!Guyz BHAGGOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!

Everyone panics n runs away 4m d board.....n ashis the first one to grab the opportunity!!!!
She n vrinda go to the board...tia n her angels also cum there.......
Ashi runs her finger down the list....counting the room numbers.... n checkin the names....
no.1
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no 2
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3
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4
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5
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6
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7
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8
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25...aah....room no.25....Anvesha Bannerji Ray, vrinda,Lattika, Tia Ahuja, priyanka, meher...WAT!!!!!!!TIA AHUJA!!!!!!!!
Tia:Oh ho ashi...lagta hai tumhari eyesight weak ho gayi hai....theek se dekho..Tia ka naam kahin aur hoga....
Ashi:Du-Uh timbo...mere eyes ko kuch nahin hua hai...tum zaraa apni eyes use karo n apna naam dekho...
Pri:Oh no tia...shes right!!Hum sab ek hi room mein hain!!!!!
Tia:Oh tias god!!!Tias gonna faint!!!Oxygen...oxygen!!!!
Just then ranny n uv also cum there......they check their room no.
Room no. 26...Ranveer,Yuvi,Sid,Varun,Nilesh,anil..
Uv:Cool bro...we r in d same room...
Ranny:Haan....He spots tia....arre tia..aapko kya ho gaya.....
ashi:[Going melodramatic..]Yeh notice board iske liye dardnaak paigaam laya hai!!!
Uv:Wat!!??Wat is that!!!???
Ashi:Du-uh!Kismat ne mujhe n tia ko ek hi room mein daal diya hai!!!Kismat ne nahin...actually jumbo ne...
Rany:Oh..bas itni si baat??Hum toh dar hi gaye....tia aap theek toh hain na...??
Tia:No!!Tia theek nahin hai!!Bilkul theek nahin hai!!!!Tia is punk ke saath poora saal kaise bitayegi!!???
Ashi:Hello miss beauty queen!!Mujhe bhi koi interest nahin hai tumhare saath rehne mein...isse accha toh main namibia ke kisi wild jungle mein reh loon...atleast wahaan ke tribals tumse better honge....
Tia:You you.....u punk!!!u...
Ranveer:Oh ho...aap dono ladna band kariye!!!Tia aap tension mat lijiye...waise bhi humara kamra aapke next door hi hai...see???Toh hum humesha aapke paas hi rahenge....
Uv:Ok ok....discussion khatam ho gaya ho toh chalein????
Vrinda:Ya ya..ashi lets go.....
they all proceed towards their rooms.....

hope u guyz like this one!!!Do give me ur feed back n all kinds of suggestions r welcome!!
Luv
Sur

woooooooooooo surrrrrrrrrrrr long time no seeeeeeeee 😳 😳 how r u gurllllllllllll 😳 happy new yrrrrrrrrrrr 😳 😳 missed seeing u and well i hav heard sooooooooo much abt ur fics frmd ivya ki am alreadyy exciteddddddddddddddd 😳 😳

looved this part lolzzzzzz the halo comment wassss 😆 oo man ashi rockssss 😆 😳 and awww mp happy wid her familyyy awwwww 😳

wonder wat wld hav happened to even make maher go out of her witts usually shes always composed 😆

waiting for the next paart update soooon 😳

ps check out intensityyyyyyyyyyyy our new aylssssss 😳 😳 awww u wld lovee it its a dreamy heavennnnn 😳

hiii suuuuuuuuuuur!!!!! haaaaaaaappppppppppppyyyyyyyyy neeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww yrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!!!!!!!!!!!

P>S wud reply afta i've read

edited

tia and ashi in the same room..this fic's gonna be FUN!!!!!!!! just a doubt are the couples togeter??

great part continue soon!

aww u posted moreeeeeeeeeeeee 😳 😳 😳 goooooooooosh ashi rooooooooooooooooooocks kya prank khelty hai mana nd sare dumbyyys uske pranks main aa bhi jate hai 😆 😆

and hahahaaa loved ranny ka reaction wen jumbo says girls boys hostel mainr hegyyyy 😆 😆 😆

and hahahahaa ye toh hona hi thaaaaa pooor ashiii 😆 😆 this sounds soof unny at fights were always hilariousss 😆 😆 the nambia ke jungle wala comment is so typically ashiii 😆 😆

dardnaak paigaaaaaam 😆 😆 oog od its awesmeeee 😳 and waah waah rooms bhi bagal main i hopee yuvi sneakes out to meet his red head in the quite of the night 😳 😳

grtt going surrrrrrrrrr 😃 this deifnately sounds funnyyy 😃

update soooon 😃

Originally posted by: .smriti.

hiii suuuuuuuuuuur!!!!! haaaaaaaappppppppppppyyyyyyyyy neeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww yrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!!!!!!!!!!!

P>S wud reply afta i've read

edited

tia and ashi in the same room..this fic's gonna be FUN!!!!!!!! just a doubt are the couples togeter??

great part continue soon!

Hey thanx wish u d same!!! no probs!!But u have to comment wen u read haan.....
well as of now toh the couples r not together....but not to worry!!!As the story progresses ill give it a whole truck load of romance!!!!Will cont soon!!!

Originally posted by: smritisashi

aww u posted moreeeeeeeeeeeee 😳 😳 😳 goooooooooosh ashi rooooooooooooooooooocks kya prank khelty hai mana nd sare dumbyyys uske pranks main aa bhi jate hai 😆 😆

and hahahaaa loved ranny ka reaction wen jumbo says girls boys hostel mainr hegyyyy 😆 😆 😆

and hahahahaa ye toh hona hi thaaaaa pooor ashiii 😆 😆 this sounds soof unny at fights were always hilariousss 😆 😆 the nambia ke jungle wala comment is so typically ashiii 😆 😆

dardnaak paigaaaaaam 😆 😆 oog od its awesmeeee 😳 and waah waah rooms bhi bagal main i hopee yuvi sneakes out to meet his red head in the quite of the night 😳 😳

grtt going surrrrrrrrrr 😃 this deifnately sounds funnyyy 😃

update soooon 😃

Hey thanx a lot!!Actually wrote after a long time so was a lil aprehensive ....anyway thanx!!!Wish u a very happy new yr too!!!n no tension yaraa!!!Abhi toh bahut saraa dhamaal is left!!!!!
just wait n watch!!Will cont soooonnnn!!!

hey nice fanfic just loved every part of it after so much time saw a fanfic and it is rocking just totally remixx style😉
six people in a room and ashi and tia in same room must be really fun watching their fights
you are a true pro in writing fiction all scene reminded so of remix fights 😉 😆 just ausumn
ranveer saying tia that he is there and stopping fight between them was so cute and tias reaction to see room messed and when name list comes ashi and tias fight so perfect and cute 😃😆 😉
continue soon desperate to know what happens when all of them stay together and further story 😃

aww am toh loving itt 😳 😳 Like loony...even i am hoping that yuvi sneaks into ashi's room😍😍 after all he has always sneaked into ashi's room 😉 ☺️☺️ And ashi timbo fight was really funny! 😆 😆 Am loving it sureee...cont. soon gurl! 😳 😳

PS: Happy New Year🤗

HHHHHHHHEEEEEEEEEYYYYYYY BBBHHHHHHHAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGGUUU!!
Yaar iss fic ko regularly continue karna! Understand! This thing is addictive! I can't belive it yaar! It's totally rocking!!!!!! I'm reliving my Maurya days again!!! Quickly continue!!!!!!
👏

Komal

hey it was awesome start 😃
do continue soon !!