Dhoom dhamaal!I Updated-part 21 Pg21 - Page 12

Surbhi!!! Sorry rockstar! Actually I didn't comment on your previous part! Sorry yaar! Just read both parts now! Hey bhaggu!!! Amazing yaar!!! I honestly feel like it's happening in front of me!!! Continue soon!!!!

Love ya!

Komz

@GUngun..Hey thanx a lot yaar!!Unfortunately im not a literature student infact im a science student but english is my fav subject n i love to write...n agar aise responses milte raahe toh ill write even more n even better!!!n dont worry...i wont let ur hope dash...after all main tum logon ke liye hi toh likhti hoon... 😃

@smriti..FINALLY!!I was waitin ki yeh ladki kab comment karegi??I though had thought u dint like it at all... 😕 But ur reply has erased all my doubts!! 😆
Thanx a ton yaar...Ek secret bataaon?/The watchman thing toh bas aise hi hai..it leads to the asli thing!!!n uske baad u can all have the pleasure of readin bout AYs fights n their romance!!! 😉

@Komal...hey no probs komzie...as long as u take the time to read n enjoy my fics i dont mind anything else!!Thanx a lot will def cont soon!! 😊
Luv
Sur

woooow awesum part !!! i m totally lovin it sur
both the parts were jus fab yaar 😃 😃
Do cont sooon !! 😳 😳

sur plz yaar continue kar Im waiting

I am so so soooo sorry ppl...My internet wasnt workin...i got cut off from all u ppl.. 😭 But now im back!!N im workin on my next chpter n will post it by tom so watch out for it!!! 😃

Hey ppl heres my next chapter...forgive me but its not as gud as the earlier ones coz i wrote it in quite a hurry...i actually din want to post it but....anyways plz read n give me ur honest comments...
Chapter 14
Uv rushes out of his room and bursts open the door next door.....
DHIN TADAK DHIN DHIN TADAK DHIN DHIN TADAK DHIN TA TA TA!!!!
Hey Bhaggu cookie!!!Main mumma ke umraao jaan remake set pe nahin aa sakti!!!Kyun??Kyunki yahaan ek crisis ho gayi hai....Jumbo ke sar ke bache kuche baal gayab ho gaye hain n mujhe unki help karni hai unhe wapas ugane mein....Get it???No cookie im NOT cumin...BYE!!!!
Hangs up the fone....Yeh mumma n cookie ki jodi...definetly made in hell hai....
Turns around...n sees uv....
Hey BHaggu!!Ab tum yahaan kya kar rahe ho???
Uv rushes to ashi n exclaims...ASHI!!I got it!!
Ashi:Got wat??
Uv:MUjhe pata chal gaya ki hum tumhe kaise bacha sakte hain!!!!!
Ashi:Kaise??
Uv:Yaad hai ashi jab tumhe watchman ne sleep walk karte dekha tha???
Ashi:Haan toh??
Uv:Toh usne tumhe Room mein lock kar diya tha...and woh lock morning mein aake khola tha..rite???
Ashi:Rite..Toh??
Uv:Oh god ashi!!Use ur brains!!!Agar tumhare room ka door locked tha morning tak toh latty tumhe bahar kaise dekh sakti hai??
Ashi slowly realises...DHIN TADAK DHIN.....
Ashi:Oh ya!!!!Hey BHaggu uv!!!For a change tumhare Brains sadne se pehle kuch use mein aaye!!!GR8!!!
They take the watchman n go to jumbo...Now jumbo n watchman...
Watchman tells jumbo full story ...
Wm:Sahib..aisa ho hi nahin sakat raha hai...ki ii ladki kamra ke bahar aa jaaye....Hum khud inke darwaaje pe tala laga ke aawe hain...Aur uu tala bhi humne subahai mein khola...
Ashi:See sir...maine aapse kahaa tha...woh main nahin thi..
Latty:But dad...
Jumbo:Enough..aap sab plz bahar jaaiye..Ab discuss karne ko kuch nahin hai....
All walk out....
Ashi turns to latty...Dekha miss rotten egg...U lose...n i win!!!
Latty:Woh toh tumhari kismat acchi thi...but music class meinmain tumhe nahin chodungi...
Ashi:Oh ya??PLzz dhamki mat do..i know u can do nothing....
Latty:Accha??Main project mein tum sab ko haraa doongi....kyunki mere saath khud sam hoga...use bas mein karna koi muskil baat nahin hai...
Ashi:WOAH WOAH!!!Sam ko wat???Lok latty...sam se door raho ok??I know hes very hot n all but tum usepe...wat do u call it??..haan dore dalna band karo...get it??
Latty:Ha..tumhe kya lagta hai....main use aise hi jaane oongi??Not a chance....hes definetly mine....
Ashi:Not while IM here....Sam se door raho latty....hes mine!!!
Latty no of course not...
Ashi:Yes yes yes!!!
Uv breaks in between...GIRLS girls..plz...stop fighting..sam kiska hai yeh hum baad mein decide kar sakte hain ok???
Latty walks off in a huff...
Ashi:How dare she...Open challenge to anvesha bannerji ray..
Uv adds:Ahuja...
Ashi:Du-uh!!I know!!!Is latty ko toh main dekh loongi...Project mein highest marks laa ke.....................n sam ke saat date pe jaake bhi...
Uvs Shocked n jealous!!!His ashi..wanting to go on a date wid SAM!!!Arrrgghhhh how he hated that muic teacher!!!!He spins ashi around n says..Woah woah...hold on a second...Tum date pe jaaogi...SAM ke saath...
Ashi:Ear mein wax build up fir se ho gaya??...go and get it cleaned...Sam ke saath toh main date pe jaaongi...
Uv:Have you lost it??Tum aisa kuch nahin karogi...get it.??
Ashi:Kya??Accha??Aur main aisa kyun nahin karungi???
Uv:Bas...nahin karogi means nahin karogi!!!
Ashi:I wish uv..i just wish...But main aisa HI karungi!!!
Sayin so she walks off leavin uv surprised and furious...


Next scene...ashi n vrinda in canteen...ashis tellin vrinda bout the challenge wid latty....
Vrinda:KYA!!Tum pagal toh nahin ho gayi ho ashi??SAM ke saath date pe jaaogi??U must be crazy!!!Woh humare teacher hain ashi!!
Ashi:Accha??Tab woh humare teacher nahin hote jab tum class mein lecture sunne ke bajae unpe drool karti ho!!!Its final vrinda...main sam ke saath date pe jaaongi means jaaongi...n im gonna show that loser latty ki main kya hoon...
Vrinda:Ashi...main nahin jaanti ki tum kya karne ki soch rahi ho but what ever it is im out of it!!!
She walks out...
Ashi:Arree...mateyy!!!!Ruko!!!!.........Karna toh main bahut kuch chahti hoon...........just wait and watch..DHIN TADAK DHIN>>>>TA TA TA!!!!!!



Next day Is the day when everyones to start their projects....
Ashi and uv are sitting in a corner of the class...thats coz theve been pushed there by the others coz their fights make it impossible for the others to concentrate!!!!!

So ashi n uv are just sitting and starin at each other...
Uv:Wat??
ashi:Kya wat?You wat?
Uv:Look ashi is tarah mujhe stare karne se accha hai ki tum apna dimag is project mein lagao...
Ashi:Look uv instead of tellin me why dont you try doing it??Oops sorry...main toh bhool hi gayi thi..tumhare brains toh decades pehle EXTINCT ho gaye the!!!
Uv:Look ashi you...sumhow contraols his temper...ashi...main tumahre saath khagda nahin karna chahta...main apne is project pe dhyaan dena chahta hoon...and since you are my partner you should help me...and...ashi??ashi are you listening??...
ashi meanwhile is looking at latty whos tryin her hardest to get close to sam with a pretence doubt...she brushes against his hand while pointing to a thing in the book hes holding and ashis on her feet!!!!She rushes over to sam leavin an absolutely angry and furious Uv behind....
and just as lattys bout to say sumthing to sam ashi bursts in between..
Ashi:SAM!!
Lattys startled and she backs away...
ashi:SAM!!Dekhiye na...yeh...yeh..yeh YUVI!!She says pointing to the unsuspecting poor lil uv...Yeh Uv ...meri ek bhi baat nahin maan raha hai!!
Sam:Anvesha..tum...
Ashi:Wat!!Maine kuch nahin kiya..yeh uv hi sab trouble create kar raha hai...
Sam turns to uv:Uv...
Uv:Woah woah!!Wait a sec...maine kuch nahin kiya sam...so dont look at me...
Sam:Ok ok..no more arguments...anvesha..
Ashi:Ashi sam...call me ashi..
Sam:Ok..ashi...tumhe jo bhi doubts and queries hai mujhse poocho ok??
Just then the bell rings...
Ashi:Caheiye sam...staff room mein discuss kar lete hain...
Sam:umm..ok...Class main aapko kal miloonga..keep workin hard on the project...chalo anve...sorry....ashi.
Ashi leaves with sam but not without givin latty her trademark look of triumph....

uv meanwhile is fuming away in his seat...
sid says to varun:Uh oh...Ashi n sam r in BIG trouble now...uv ka yeh expression indicates MAJOR trouble!!!
Varun:Haan..i hope ashi stops flirting with sam in front of uv...bechare ko accha nahin lag raha hoga....I hope ashi stops b4 uv blows his lid!!!

Aage kya hoga...will b revealed in the next chapter!!!!Hope u liked this one!!! 😕 😕
Luv
Sur

Luv u Sur .Kya fantastic part tha 👏 . us latty 🤢 ko loose karna hi tha aakhir panga bhi Anvesha Banerrgy Ray Ahuja se liya hai 😉 and the best thing about this part Uv feelings. jealousy is making him realise his love for Ashi. But u know what even if sam world ka the most perfect man hai Uv is the only one who is perfect for Ashi (and viceversa). Btw thanks for posting the part as soon as ur internet started working . ur such a sweetheart .
Chao
Gun 😊

Hey thanx gungun!!Im so relieved u liked it!!!! 😛And wat u said is sooo true...ki chahe mr.universe bhi ashi ke saamne aa jaaye...Ay r made only for each other..and thats wat i intend to show in my fic!!Thanx again n ill cont soon!!
Luv
Sur

Sur I love you! Hey bhaggu!!! You weren't about to post this???!!! IDIOT! This part was totally sufi man!!! What was that line... Mumma ad Cookie ki jodi is made in hell... 🤣 My mumma freaked out cuz i was cracking up! TOO GOOD! I love this part man. I honestly could see it all happening in front of my eyes!!! AMAZING!!!!! Totally rocking!!!!! Continue soon!!! OR ELSE!!!!! 😉 😛 😆

Komz

Hey thanx so much komz!!Im so glad u liked it!!!Ill definetly cont soon....and the next chapters r gonna b even better!!!
Luv
Sur