Dhoom dhamaal!I Updated-part 21 Pg21 - Page 13

wooooooooow sur !!!
i jus loooved the part simply fab yaar
its soo interestin 😃 😃
ur doin an awesum job !!!
cant wait for nxt part now...... 😳😳

Hey thanx a lot snehal!!Will definetly cont soon!!!
Luv
Sur

oyeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee besuriiiiiiiiiii 😆 😆 😆 [yeah now i wld call u besurii yeah yeah 😆 ]itna toh accha likha hai toh nautanki kyun kar ri thy ki accha nahi hai

hayeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee jab bhi ahsi problem main hoty hai sabke dimaag pe tala lag jata hai sirf do dimaag chalte hai ek yuvi or ek sonuuuuuuuuu ab sonuu toh thi nahi par ashi ka heman toh thaaaaaaaaaa he wld do anything to rescure her hai na?? her only knighttttttttt 😳 😳

and aaaaaaaaaaaah jelousy in the airrrrrrrrr 😳 😳 ,amn ashi bhi na koi kasser nahi chodti yuvi ko provoke karne mainnnnn am just waiting for the moment when he would burst out like a volacno ka lavaaaaaaa and grab her and kissh her and say no u cant date nayone bt me coz u belong to me and only meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee 😳 😳 😳

awwwwwwww dreaming already abt htis so u better hurry up besuriiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii hurry hurry hurry upppppppp

latty the fatty ahsi se panga lena not on bt i hope u win coz teri win main hi meri ashi ki real win chuppi hai usse uska real pyaar jo mil jayega 😳 😳 sam is nothing bt a challenge a bet for her and knowing ashi she can win it araam se ab uske jaisa attitude aur kisse main kahaan its astright winning stroke 😉 but i want her heart to win which lies with yuvi 😳 😳

besuri jaldi continue kar warna teri band bajegi buri waliiiiii 😆 😆 loveee uuuuu

He he he...thanku smriti ji!!Besuri kinda sounds nice!! 😉 Actually tumsabke itne mind blowing and awesome fics padhke i got a lil scared ki akhin mera flat na pad jaaaye...anyway thanx a lot 4 ur appreciation!!!Illd efinetly cont soon!!n theres lots more action and hungama cumin up so betta watch out!!! 😃 😛
Luv
Sur

wooo sooo samz back afta alll😆was missin him😆 u kno y😉Uvs Shocked n jealous!!!His ashi..wanting to go on a date wid SAM!!!Arrrgghhhh how he hated that muic teacher!!!! superbbb part👏 luuuv it😳

sid says to varun:Uh oh...Ashi n sam r in BIG trouble now...uv ka yeh expression indicates MAJOR trouble!!!
Varun:Haan..i hope ashi stops flirting with sam in front of uv...bechare ko accha nahin lag raha hoga....I hope ashi stops b4 uv blows his lid!!!

aye haye!!! kya lyns hai yaaar!!!!waitin desperately 4 da nxt part!!!cont very very soooon!!!!luuuv uuuuu suuurrrrrrrr🤗🤗

oh hello sur ki bachhi! Continue JALDI warna I'll make you besuri!

Chapter 15
Hey ppl heres my next chapter!!!
In the last one we saw ashi goin off wid sam after putting all the blame on uv...
Uvs pacing to and fro in his room....thinking ki yeh ashi ka kya kiya jaaye.....
Just then sid enters....
Uv looks at him and thinks...hmmm...sid se advice lena chahiye??Well i dont think it wud do any harm...
Uv:Sid dude...tumse kuch poochna tha...
Sid:No no no....maine kuch nahin kiya!!!Woh hot babe..i mean ladki toh khud mere paas aayi thi...and...and woh mujhme nahin tumme interested hai uv...woh mujhse tumhara number hi maang rahi thi...thats all...
Uv:WAT!???Tum kya blabber kar rahe ho sid???
Sid:Uv main...tum kis baare mein baat kar rahe ho??
Uv:Bas aise hi tumhari thodi help chahiye thi...
Sid:Oh!!Mujhe laga tumne mujhe shyna ke saath dekh liya tha n ur angry with me...anyways...tum kya pooch rahe the??
Uv:Sid...suppose..ek hot chick hai..n u really like her...
Sid:Usmein suppose karne ki kya baat hai...
Uv:Sid!!Suno meri baat!!!So tumhe yeh ladki really really pasand hai.....But she likes sum other loser....But u dont want to give up so easily on her...In such a situation tum kya karte??
Sid:Hmmm...Ok...Mr.Yuvraj Dev...Welcome to Dr.Love!!Tumhare sab problems ka hal mere...yaani Dr.luv ke paas hai...Dil ka dard bhagane aur life mein masti laane aa gaya hai Dr. love!!!
Uv:Oh shut up sid...get to the point...
Sid:Dude!!Thoda warm up toh karne do!!Thabhi toh first class advice milegi!!!
Uv:Ok ok...but mere paas itna time nahin hai...so jaldi bolo...
Sid:Well...Aise problem ke no. of solutions ho sakte hain...See...tum us ladki ko apne style se charm kar sakte ho...let her know ki u r much better than that other loser she likes......show her..show her that tum aur kisi se many many times better ho...
Uv:Hmm...thats interesting...but...but main...i mean tum ho te toh kaise karte....???
Sid:Dude!!Tum toh ladies man the na??Phior tumhe nahin pata ki kya karna chahiye??Agar main hota toh i would have showed off my dancing skills to her...
Uv:KYA!!??Tumhe dance karna bhi aata hai???
Sid:Haan of course aata hai!!!ill show u...
Uv:Woah woah....sid dude...hum woh baad mein dekh lenge...haan tum kya keh rahe the...

Sid:I was sayin ki...see....jaise tumhara plus point tumhara charm hai..with the ladies...and your music...toh you can do sumthing wit that...impress her using these things...samjhe??You know ek baar maine bhi aisa hi liya tha....

But uvs not listenin anymore........Hes thinkin.....Maybe sids rite...main ashi ko apne charm se pata sakta hoon..Use impress karna thoda mushkil hoga but...Yuvraj Dev ke Charms kaun resist kar sakta hai???He gives a wicked smile....

Meanwhile wheres ashi???Shes busy trying to win her challenge with latty!!!
Shes sitting on a bench a little away from the staff room door and looking out for sam...the staff room door opens and sam cums out...lookin as breathtaking as eva.....
Ashi immediately turns away and brings on a sad and miserable expression on her face....
Sam starts walkin and spots ashi...
Sam:Arrey ashi...tum...
Notices her sadness
Sam:Ashi??Kya hua tumhe??Upset about sumthing??
Ashi:Pretends to be startled by sam...Ahh..sam??aap??Mujhe kya hua hai..main bilkul theek hoon....
Sam:Ashi....agar koi baat hai toh you can tell me...Teacher hone ke saath saath main tumhara friend bhi hoon...
Ashi gives a big dramamtic sigh......DHIM TADAK DHIN>>>>>>>>TA TA TA!!!!!😉kuch nahin sam...bas mamma ki abhut yaad aa rahi thi....woh apni us Umrao jaan remake mein busy hain na....she doesnt get time to meet me at all....A microlitre of a tear starts to form...Unki bahut yaad ati hai..ek wahi toh hain...jo mere saath hoti hain humesha....unke alawaa mera aur koi nahin hai....
Sam:Lekin tumhare dad??
Ashi:Dad??Dad!!Haan...woh bhi apne kaam mein busy hain...aur waise bhi...abhi tak woh mere dad thode hi hain....sirf engagement hui hai mom ki...abhi shaadi toh baaki hai.....Unhe toh main sirf timbo the dumbo ke dad ki tarah jaanti hoon.....sighs again...but that ok...ill get over it....thanx...
Sam:Is there anything i can do for you??
Ashi:Nahin its ok.....You know jab bhi mom aati thi na...hum dono humesha ice cream khaane jaate the...
sam:Toh chalo...
Ashi:Kahaan??
Sam:Ice cream khaane!!
Ashi:Ice cream??But...
sam:No buts ashi....tumhare mood ko theek karne ka yahi tarika hai...Lets go...
Ashi is ecstatic...but her mind drifts off....to the hilarious ice cream fight that uv and she had....She remembers lookin into his eyes as she pushed him to the wall...she heard herself say..."Uv..tumne promise kiya tha ki tum mujhe ice cream khilaoge...."And uv saying...chalo babes...lets go."
Hello!!! ashi??Kahaan kho gayi tum????Sams voice jolts her out of her day dream...Chalo ashi...lets go!!He says...
she smiles at him and says...main tabhi chaloongi agar aap mujhe promise karenge ki kal aap project mein meri help karenge...
Sam:Ok done...ab chalein??
Ashi n sam leave...
But lattys watching them from the corner...and a wicked smile cums across her face.....she thinks to herself..Ab tum dekho ashi....main tumhara plan kaise chaupat karti hoon....

what does latty plan to do??
Find out in my next chapter!!Hope u guyz liked this one!!!!Plzzzzz give me ur comments n feedback!!!
Luv
Sur

Rockstar!!! Meri DMG ffs padne ke baad you finally continued!!!! Tumhaari tarhaan hi it was toooooooo rocking! I love how Sid, all of a sudden, became "Dr. Love" 🤣 This is why I looooove Sid. He makes me smile onscreen and even in ur ff. It was so good. And Yuvi Ashi ko pataane ki koshish kar raha hai??? Hey bhaggu! And Ashi.... one piece hai yaar! Duh-uh! I loved what she did to get Samto go out with her. Toooo good. That's totally Ashi. Continue jaldi!

Komz

Hey!Thanx a lot komzie!!Tera DMG fic padhke i got inspiration...isliye one hour flat mein yeh chapter likh diya!!! 😆 😆 Thanx sooo much...arrey ab aage aage dekho uv kya kya karta hai!! 😉 ill def cont soon!!

sur finally u continued ...this was jus awesume
pls pls cont really sooon ...