Dhoom dhamaal!I Updated-part 21 Pg21 - Page 15

Hey thanx a lot snehal priya n nitz!!Im glad u liked it...Will def cont soon!!! 😃

SUR!!!! Rockstar! That was awsome! I loved the A-Y part!!!! 🤣 And Ashi-Sumeet!!! Awwww... 😳 Awsome rocking part!!! Continue jaldi!!!! 👏


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Chapter 17
OK so last chapter mein we saw ki ashi had an outing with sumeet...
In tias room...Tia was sittin in front of her dressing table and was busy with her makeup...suddenly the door bursts opens and in barges a really annoyed anvesha!!!
Ashi:TIMBOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!
Tia:Oh tias god!!Punk..tum kab seekhogi ki andar aane se pehle knock kiya jaata hai...
Ashi walks upto tia:Main door ko nahin...tumhe knock karne aayi hoon!!!I need to knock sum sense in ur stupid empty head!!!!
Tia:Tum kya keh rahi ho tia ki kuch samajh nahin aa raha...PLzz hum humans ki language mein baat karo...
Ashi:Humans ki nahin...main dharmendar ki language mein baat karne aayi hoon...sayin so she shoves her fist upto tias nose....tia backs away in alarm....
Ashi:Pehle yeh batao...tumhe kabse meri fikar hone lagi??I know ki humare mom and dad ki shaadi hone wali hai and all that...but...but i didnt think tumhare stupid feathery head mein yeh baat itni seriously baith jaayegi that u have to act like my sister!!!
Just then Vrinda cums there and sees ashi and tia....ashi
with a menacing look on her face and tia with a clear BACHAOO sign on her face!!!
Vrinda rushes over just as ashis hands close in on tias neck and shes bout to strangle her...
Vrinda:Ashi!!!!!Ruko!!!!!!!Kya kar rahi ho!!!!????
Ashi:Maate...chodo mujhe...Main is timblet ko nahin chodoongi!!!
Vrinda:Oh ho ashi!!!Stop it!!Yeh toh Batao ki hua kya hai!!!???
Ashi:Is ....is timbo the dumbo ki wajah se...iski wajah se...
Tia:Chodo u punk...tia ki wajah se kya!!???
Ashi:Tumhari wajah se mujhe Sam ko chodke tumhare dear pa-paa!! ke saath day spend karna pada!!!!!!!
Tia:Toh??Tia usmein Kya kar sakti hai!!!???Ismein tia ka koi fault nahin tha....
Ashi:Oh ya??!!Mimicking her...tia ka koi fault nahin tha...My foot!!!Tumhine apne daddy dearest ke brain mein yeh idea dala tha na ki main LONELY feel kar rahi hoon??Or main Mama ko miss kar rahi hoon???
Tia:Oh woh...woh toh...
Ashi:Woh toh Main fas gayi na!!All bcoz of u...wait on...main tumhe nahin chodoongi...
Vrinda:Ruko ashi!!!Meri baat suno...
Ashi:Mujhe tumhari koi baat nahin sunni...Maate hut jaao...
Vrinda:Ashi yeh sab tia ko maine bataya tha!!
Ashis stunned...TUMNE Maatey!!!!!
Vrinda:Haan maine....
Ashi:Kya!!??But y???Kya main tumhe kisi bhi angle se DUKHI lagti hoon???See see...Shoves herself into vrindas face...
Wait a minute...Oh no....Hey Bhaggu!!dont tell me tumhe bhi sam pasand hai!!!No!!!Dekho matey woh tumhare type ka nahin hai n...
Vrinda:Relax ashi!!Pehle meri baat toh sun lo...Mujhe latty ne bataya tha...That usne tumhe sam se baat karte hue suna.....n out pops the wholeeeeee story!!!Ashis absolutely furious!!She rushes out of the room....
On her way to lattys room she passes the staff room..N from these she sees latty cumin out...with SAM!!!!
Lattys talkin to sam:Thanx sooo much sam...Aapne meri kitni madat kar di...warna all alone main project ka pata nahin kya karti....
Sam:Hey thats not a problm...
Latty:So that means ki main baar baar aapke paas aa sakti hoo??Pause...madat ke liye..u noe...
Sam:Umm..ya...ya...sure...y not...
Latty:Ok....Bye!!

She starts to walk away n sam shuts the door...Ashi immediately stops latty...

Ashi:Ruko latty...Agar tumhari Flirt exercise khatam ho gayi ho toh can v talk???
Latty:Plz ashi...mere paas tumhari stupid baaton ke liye time nahin hai....
Ashi:Oh ya??Wel sorry par ull have to listen!!!Tumhe maatey ko apni mahaan ficticious story bataabe ki kya zarurat thi!!!?????
Latty:Kyun??I was so concerned for u ashi...Mocking...Maine tumhe sam se baat karte hue suna tha...toh socha...mayb i shud help u...Isliye maine vrinda se kahaa ki tum shayad home sick ho...usne tia ki help li n Mr.Ahuja ko yahaan bula liya!!Brilliant idea na??Anyways i got 2 go...Bye...c u later....
And she haughtily walks off...Leavin behind an absolutely infuriated ashi....
Ashi:Ms.JUnior jumbo...Ill c u...n ill c u very soon....

Thats it ppl...im sooooooooooo sorry 4 continuing after soooooooooo long n with such a short chapter...but im def gonna cont soon...n this time its for real.. 😕 Hope u like this one...

Hey sur thank God u continued and this pat is really good.Ashi's first date with sam is total disaster and the reason was Latty but the real reason was Yuvi's prayers. Yuvi never wanted her to be with Sam deeply from his heartand Kehte hain na " jab bhi kissi cheez ko Dil se paane ki koshish ki hai to sari kayanaat ne tumhe usse milane ki saazish ki hai". I hope like uski ashi ke Sam ke saath time spend na karne ki khwahish poori hui hai waise he Ashi ke uske saath hone ki mansha poori ho
I hope that next part will be more of Ashi Yuvi and u will post it soon
Chao
Gun 😊

heyyyyyy ths is karishma.... nice fic......read all the chapters today n found it really interestin..........
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Hey thanx a lot gun gun n karishma!!The next chapters cumin up realllyy soon!!!! 😃 😃

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SUR! Update this! Dude! tum aise beech mein kaise chod sakti ho? In fact, tum toh khu ghayab ho. Agar tumhaara disappearing act khatam hogaya ho toh plz isse continue bhi kardo! meri patience ko khatam hue hohot time hogaya hai. 😛

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