Dhoom dhamaal!I Updated-part 21 Pg21 - Page 11

OMG !!! sur loved both the parts
ek hi baar mein sab kuch romance comedy suspence 👏
everythin wooooow
too gud man
do continue sooon 😳 😳 😳
n sorry for replyin late 😉 😳

Hey thanx a lot everyone!!!Ill definetly cont soon!!!

Surbhi meri jaan!!!! Tune meri FF mein comment kio thi ki tu mere peeche bhaagegi autogrph lene ke liye, abbey yaar tu mere peeche bhaage iss se pehle main bhaagoongi tere peeche!!! Autograph dede!!!! Kya likhthi hai tu!!!! Hey bhaggu!!!! Tera second part toh mind blowing tha yaar!!!!

pants down waala part toh made me crack up!!!! Too good!!!! Love you man!


Komz

awww komz..thanx 4 liking it yaar!!!
OK ppl...heres the next chapter!!!!
Chapter 12
So the partys over....and everyones back n its the next morning which as u know is sum national holiday...
Ashis fast asleep in bed and vrinda is trying to wake her up....
Vrinda:Ashi!!Ashi utho!!!12 baj gaye hain!!!
Ashi:Maatey!!Lemme sleep yaar....n covers her head with a pillow...
Vrinda:Ashi plz get up!!!!she tuggs at ashis blanket...
Ashi:from under the pillow...Maatey!!Tumhare morning bhajan sessions kisi aur ko sunao....plz leave me alone!!!
Vrinda opens her mouth to say sumthing...then has a wicked thought...she grins to herself n says loudly..Dekho uv..ashi toh uth nahin rahi hai...agar tum chaho toh tum try kar sakte ho....
Ashi jumps up in bed with eyes wide open!!No need!!Im awake!!U cycoman...mujhe choone ki koshish bhi mat karna nahin toh...
She looks around..theres no one in the room...except for vrinda whos laughing her head off....
Ashi:Maatey!!!U...u...abhi mazaa chakhati hoon tumhe!!!n she runs after vrinda with a pillow in her hand....
after a bit of good natured running ashi corners vrinda at the door....she throws the pillow at vrinda...vrinda ducks...and at that very moment the door opens n there stands..GLORIA!!!who gets hit in her face by the pillow!!!
Glo:Oh my gosh!!Yeh sab kya hai!!???
Ashi:Oh!!Sorry gloria...Main toh is vrinda ko maar rahi thi...tum beech mein aa gayi...
Glo:My god ashi...grow up!!Yeh time pillow fight khelne ka nahin hai...
Ashi:Oh ho gloria...ab sab tumhari tarah super speed mein buddhe..i mean mature nahin hote na...
Glo:Ok ok...ashi tumhe jaamwaal sir ne urgently apne office mein bulaya hai...
Ashi:Jum..iaa..jamwaal sir ne??Abhi??
Glo:Haan ashi!!Abhi...Urgently!!
Vrinda:But kyun??Kuch problem hai kya??
Glo:Oh ho...dekho mujhe yeh sab nahin pata..jamwaal sir ne jo message bheja tha woh maine de diya hai...ab tum jaldi se jaao..muje waise bhi bahut kaam hai...so dont waste my time..
saying this she goes off..
Ashis wondering...Jumbo ko ab mujhese kya chahiye???
Vrinda:Kahin..kahin unhe kal ki party ke baare mein toh pata nahin chal gaya!!!Ashi!!!
Ashi:Du-uh maatey!!Relax..agar party ke baare mein kuch hota toh sirf mujhe nahin hum sabko bulate...I hope mama ne jaake jumbo ke saamne apne Umrao jaan remake ka trailer nahin dikhaya..im sure jumbo faint ho gaya ho ga n isliye mujhe bulaya hai...mumma ki medicines aane ke liye..
Vrinda:Ashi....
Ashi:Ok ok maatey...relax..main jaa rahi hoon...

In jumbos office:
Ashi:Excuse me sir....Aapne bulaya aur main aa gayi!!Boliye..kya kaam hai??(ashis still in her pajamas btw!!!)
Jumbo:In a stern voice...Anvesha..kal raat ko tum kahaan thi??
Ashi:Kal raat ko??Kal raat ko toh main...{Suddenly rememers d party...}
aaa..kal raat ko...aa..main kahaan ho sakti hoon sir??Of course apne bed mein!!Now agar main owl hoti toh it wud have been a different matter...in fact maine kal raat ko ek awesome dream bhi dekha!!Main mar ke ek ghost ban gayi hoon and...
Jumbo:Enough anvesha...Kal raat ko tum apne bed mein thi...so rahi thi...kya tum raat ko kabhi uthi thi...bahar grounds mein gayi thi???
Ashi:Grounds mein!!!!???aaa...of course not sir!!!!Main grounds pe kyun jaaongi!!!????Woh bhi raat ko!!!No no..no way sir...
Jumbo:maine suna hai ki kal raat ko tum party mein gayi thi...out of the school...
Ashi:WHAT!!!!Conspiracy!!Scheme!!!Saazish!!!!Main kisi party mein nahin gayi thi sir...aur main kiski party mein jaa sakti hoon???No sir...main toh kal raat so rahi thi...aap...aap mere room mates se pooch sakte hain..aur by the way aapko yeh sab...yeh..jhoothi...wats that...haan..yeh jhoothi afwayein kisne batayi sir???
MAINE!!!
Ashi whirls around to see......................................................... ............................................................ LATTY!!!!!!!!!!

now i usually dont like to have negative characters in my fics...but just this once i thought it wud be fun to have a negative character so heres presenting latty!!!!!

Ashi:Hey BHaggu tum!!!!!!
Latty:Haan...maine tumhe kal raat ko dekha tha...apne room ki window se...tum grounds pe thi...infact gates se kuch hi dur..
Ashi:Room ki window??Kaunsa room n kaisa room??
Jumbo:Lattika mere saath mere quarters mein rehti hai...woh ek..ek vacation pe gayi thi....kal hi aayi hai aur aaj se school join kar rahi hai...
Ashi:This is all false sir!!Woh main nahin thi!!!Im sure latty ne theek se dekha nahin hoga....
Latty:Accha??Toh yeh batao ashi....school mein kitni ladkiyon ke red hair hain???
A fone rings...Jumbo:Dekho...main abhi bahut busy hoon...isliye tum abhi jaao..main tumhe baad mein bulata hoon...


meanwhile everyones in the canteen...
Vrinda:Pata nahin ashi ko itni der kyun lag rahi hai...
just then ashi enters...everyone stares at her...
Ashi:Hey Bhaggu!!!Main museum ka art piece lagti hoon kya tum lagan ko???Wat r u looking like that!!!
Tia:Oh tias god!!!Tia is gonna faint!!!Ashi!!!Tum jumbo se milne apne ajamas mein gayi thi!!!
Ashi:Oh man!!!Cut the crap timbo!!Tumhe pajamas ki padi hai???Ive goteven worse news!!!
All:Kya!!!???
Ashi:Kal raat ko jab hum laut rahe the.....n she tells them the whole story....
Ranveer:Lattika!!!HUm toh kabhi soch bhi nahin sakte the ki woh wapas yahaan aayengi...
Tia:Haan...us creep ko toh sirf destroy karna aata hai!!
Vrinda:Lekin ab hum kya karenge???Ashi ko is musibat se kaise nikalenge???
Sid:Hum kaise prove kar sakte hain ki ashi innocent hai???
Uv:jumbo humare kehne se nahin maanega......v need sum solid proof...but kya???
Varun:Agar aur kuch nahin hua toh i think v shud all own up to jumbo..
Ranveer:Haan...after all rules hum sabne milkar tode hain...toh punishment bhi hum sab ke milni chahiye....
all:Rite!!!
Ashi:Du-uh thakur!!Itne senti mat bano...Koi na koi raasta zaroor hoga...and waise bhi main itni selfish nahin hoon ki tum sab ko apne saath trouble mein pull kar loon.....
Ranny:Nahin ashi..hum toh....
Uv:GUyz...is waqt humein yeh soch na chahiye ki hum kya karenge..agar hum prove nahin kar paaye ki ashi innocent hai toh use toh punishment milegi hi aath mein v all may fall into trouble....think ppl...think....

Everyones deep in thought....wat will they do now?????
Find out in my next chapter!!Hope u liked this one!!!

heeeeeeey surrrrrrrr🤗🤗 u r a sweeeeetheart🤗 it was jst fuuuuun readin all da 3 chaps at a tym 😛 😛 😛 luuuuv uuu babyyyy🤗🤗🤗

ok lets strt vid da 1st 1 i mean chap 10 soooo it was full f tr 😳 😳 😳 ...it was really veryyy sweet 2 read da whole thing ...i lykd all da dialogs but da bst thing was da last para wer ashi n vrinda wer dancin 2gether 😉 😉

n da nxt chap 🤣dis is all i can do afta readin it🤣it truly was a comedy ka tadka saute deepfry ... wateva u call it 😆 😆 now here i wud say dat sid was reallly reallly reallllly fuuunnyyy🤣everythin dat he said n sang n did 🤣🤣🤣omggg he reallly lukd lyk a drunkard 😆 😆 da part ven he is bout 2 remove his clothes 😆 😆 n ven ha says sada suhagan raho beti 2 yuviiiiiii🤣🤣ohhhh surrrrr 😳 😳 i luuuvd ittttt i reallly reallly reallly luuuuvd ittt

n da 3rd 1 it was suuuperbbb 😛 😛 😛 i reallly lykd da way ashi woke up vid her eyes wyd open as sooon as she hrd yuvi's name 😳 😳 sooooo it was lattty who was spyin on dem last nyt 😡 ughhh latty how wud u feel if i latkaaofied uu i hope dey r able 2 solve der prob m sure veryy sure k ashi vil surely cum up vid a plan 😳 😳 😳 aftaall she is anvesha bannerji ray🤗

cont sooooon surrrr cont veryyy veryyy sooon🤗🤗🤗love you babyy 😳 😛

Hey Priya!!!Thatnx a lot!!That was a very encouraging reply!!!!Thanx a ton!!!Abhi toh bahut sara AY fun baaki hai!!!Ill definetly cont ASAP!!Thanx again!!!

thank god u continuedddddddd.... yei yeiiiii... gr8 part... poor ashi.. vrinda fooled her so easily... yuvi ashi ke room mein n ashi sleep karti rahe..impossible! 😆 😆 n gloria must hav got a heart attack opening the door... a pillow ryt on her face. 😆 arggggghhhhh... dat latty na spoils evrything. 😡 😡 i hope ashi gets out of trouble soon... arreee yuvi kuch socho na... 😕
sur loved this part n love u...

***continue soon***

Hey thanx a lot yaar!!!Ur encouragement is wat keeps me goin!!!

n hello!!!Dont any of the others read this??? 😕 Any way...for those who do heres d bext chapter!!! 😛 😉

Chapter 13
So everyones thinking ki aisa kya karen ki ashi bach jaaye....Ashi Ranny n vrinda are sitting in one of the classes n latty walks in with a haughty look...Hey everyone..she says....
Uv walks in just then...
Latty turns around ...hi uv...kaise ho....
Ashis infuriated!!!Partly coz shes d one who pushed her into trouble and partly bcoz she was talkin to uv!!!😉
She goes upto latty...Listen miss sneak..Tumne apne dad ko mere baare mein batake theek nahin kiya....
Latty:Look anvesha...main wahi karungi jo mujhe karna hai...agar tum innocent ho then prove it!!
Ranny cums up 4m behind..Haan..hum sab prove kar denge ki ashi innocent hai...
Latty:Dekhenge.....

Just then sam enters..Gud morning everyone!!Hes lookin even more hot with khakhi cargos and a lime gree cotton shirt.......Lattys totally blown over!!Like how the other girls had been in the first class!!!!

They all take their seats...............
Sam runs an eye thru the class....n spots laaty..Ah new student...Aap plz apna introduction dengi??
Latty stands up:HI main lattika jamwal hoon...principal Mr.Jamwal ki beti...Mujhe music bahut pasand hai and im loking forward to lots of classes with You!!
The "You" was said with so much of emphasis and in such a direct way that most of the girls were furious!!!Ashi was already plotting revenge!!! 😆
Sam:aahh..Good...good...thats gr8!!Toh lest start our class...Main aap logon ko remind kar doon ki aapke project ka preparation time next week se shuru hoga...aap regularly music classes aayenge..lekin half of the class main aapko prepare karne ke liye doonga...since yeh aapka first project hai...
Latty:Sam..mera partner kaun hoga??
Sam:Arre haan....tumhara partner.....aaa.....lets see...filhaal toh tum akeli ho....lekin...main dekhta hoon...agar koi free hai toh main tumhe uske saath pair kar doonga..k??
Latty:I dont think ki koi bacha hai...toh i guess mujhe akele hi karna padega....Kya aap mujhe kuch EXTRA guidance de sakte hain sam??After classes n all u know...
Tia thinks to herself...Oh tias god!!Yeh latty kitne obvious way se Sam ke saath flirt kar rahi hai..How tacky!!!! 😕
Sam:Agar tum akele karna chahti ho toh fine..any way lets get on with the class....




After classes in Uvs room....
Sid:Dekho dude..tumhare dad ki foto..is magazine mein...
Uv:Roz toh main apne dad ko dekhta hoon..is mein wats new??
Sid:Haan...true....But dekho foto ke neeche wats the caption...(readin from the mag..)Mr.Yashwant Dev humari un kuch gine chune Politicians mein se hain jo neta hoone ke saath saath kafi stylish bhi hain....
Uv:Thats true dude...Warna humare kuch politicians toh....man!!!!unka toh bolne ka tareeka bhi itna funny hota hai!!!!Like Laloo prasad yadav....(Imitating him...)Hum hoon bihar ka pardhaan mantri...humri biwi hai rabri devi...hum apni bhains se bahut pyaar karta hoon....
Sid...rolling wid laughter....Ha ha ha!!!Dude!!Tum toh bilkul humare watchman jaise sound kar rahe ho!!!!Woh bhi toh aise hi bolta hai!!!!
Uv:Ya dude...woh bhi toh......
Suddenly sumthing strikes Uv!!!!Slowly n steadily a plan forms in his mind...he goes back rewind mode into last night...n thinks..he hears the wtchman talkin on the fone in bihari....he fits all the pieces together n forms a plan...
WATCHMAN!!!!Thats it sid dude!!!!Watchman!!!Ive got it man!!!!He shakes up sid roughly....Thanx a ton bro!!!!He screams into the hapless sids face..Thanx bro he says n runs off outside the door.....leaving sid wondernig...Uv dude..ise kya ho gaya???

What has Uv thought of????Im sure u guys n guess it!!!For those who cant find out in my next chapter!!!!!!

ultimately Ashi ka sleep walk wala Act ashi ke hi kaam aaya but I wonder yeh baat ashi ke brain mein kyun nahi aaye 😕 but either its Ashi or Uv 1 and the same thing 😳 ( though she is smarter than him) 😆 .But girl u know what I like u alot u dont keep us waiting for long and post so nicely constructed parts .r u a literature student coz ur writing skills are excellent 👏 . keep going girl and i feel next part mein ashi uv apni feeelings exprees karna shuru kar denga and I know ur not going to shatter my hopes
Chao
Gun 😊

u know what i typed out such a huge reply to this one but the minute i posted it i got disconnected argggggggggg.....so this is my second attempt i hope it gets posted this timeeeeee...

okie surrrr i wld be honest with you i have been consitingly reading the updates but i just keep on dleaying the reply and then forget it..😆..trust me ipl and hollydays have made me nikamma..😆

i loooooooooooooooooooved the way vrinda wakes ashi up🤣☺️..oh my god its so perfect and apt i mean ager ahsi neend ki pills leke bhi soyi hogy na toh bhi yuvi ka naam sunte hi would wake up ek second mainnnnnn..☺️☺️...hey bhagguuuuuuuuuuuu kitne cute hai ye donoooooooo i mean its obvious dil hi dil main behud pyaar hai but zubaan pe aane hi nahi dete..☺️

and lattyyyyyyyyyy would always be so fattyyyyy..🤢..miss snitcher what else cna we expect form her she obviously cant leave her triats can she..🤢but beta ahsi se panga lena means yamraj ko invitaiton bhejna..😆..dekhna yeh hai ki devil ko kaunsi baat zada buri lagy uspe snitch kiya ya uske yuvi pe line mara...☺️☺️

and hahaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa that sid escapade wa so killingly hillarious🤣🤣🤣no one can beat htis tro of ays wen it comes to comedy🤣🤣🤣and must say sur u have hitted right on the spot in terms of every single character u have penned them down superbly👏

and oh my god i knewwwwwwwwwwww it i so knew it that only yuvi would be the oneeeeeeeee to think about the watchman i mean ashi had actually talked ot the watchman that night man and he cna be a witness and yuvi ke dimaag main zaroor koi big plan form ho raha hai apny whacko ko save karne ke liyeeeeeeeee..☺️☺️....this is the best part about them chahe kitneeeeeeeee bhi koso door ho yeh ek doosre se chahe her qaqt ek doosre ko marne ka mann karta ho chahe ek doosre ki shakal bhi nahi deknhy chate ye log chahe soo hazar aur logon ko date kare ye but jab bhanak pade ki dono main se koi bhi takleef main hai they would rush to be there by each other's side as their strongest armoour who would do anything and everything to protect the other...☺️☺️...just love them man

and oh my god finally the project is about to start yeaaaaaaaaaaaah☺️☺️☺️had been waiting for this for an eternityyyyyyyyyyyyyy☺️☺️ cant wait to seeeeeeeeeeeee ay working and fighting togetherrrrrrrrr☺️☺️

and i happyly missed the tr chap sur..😆..i guess none of us here are interested in that sur and those who might be arn't here so why do u waste your efforts on them re.insted concetrate only and only on ay..☺️☺️