oh my goooooooood oh my goooooooooood oh my good surrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr🤣its threee thrity am in the night and am going a nutter sitting here reading your fic and updating myself with it🤣
goooooooooooood i must giving u a standing ovaiton on your writing skills surrrrrrrrr👏this is an outstanding piece of work truely truely truelyyyyyyyyyyyy outstandingggg👏👏👏 i mean i am just on the sixth part right now and i had to sotp my self form going further coz i had to rpely soooooooooooo much for these parts only but am so dying toooooooooo read aageeeeeeeeeeeeeeee😳😳😳oh my god this is sooooo so gripping and u just wana og on reading and reading😳😳am soooooo happy i am reading so many parts together😳didn't have to wait loong for the next chap😳😳😳see thats the benifit for being a totla sleepyhead😆😳
i wld tell u honestly mere eyes automatically skipped the t and r parts😆😆but the ay parts are juuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuust☺️☺️☺️oh my gooooooood why are they so cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeee??☺️☺️
and what awesme dialouges maaaaaaaan🤣🤣🤣..tumhare brain ke tukade kar ke usmain se hay nikal ke cow ko khila dungyyyyyyy🤣oh my god oh my gooooooood🤣🤣🤣insanes ka masehaaaaa🤣🤣🤣madness ki mallikaaaaaa🤣shit shit shit and i loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeee all the dhin tadak dhin notes oyu have given🤣
and awwwwwwwwwww in th eend of part fouuuuuuur☺️☺️☺️just loved loooooooooooooooved looved the way u described yuvi's feleings☺️☺️i mean yeeeeeeeeah he wld hav bene so not okay with giving HIS guitaar to someone else and he wld hav been so angleeeeeee but what wld irk him more was that admiring look in ahsi's eyes which wasn''t for him but for osmeone else...☺️...awww....and yes ENVY is the word its so the word he would so hav been envious of nay guy who becomes the object of her apploud coz he knows that her applouds don't come just aise hi they wld come straight form her heart and wld come only if she really thought he deserved it...☺️☺️
and then in the next part in cnateen where he was allllllll lost in his own world or rather in HEr world where he could see and hear only her voice only her faceee...☺️☺️...that too was shoooooooooooooo cuteeeeee...☺️☺️
and i looooooooooooooooooved this one line u wrote in one of the parts where ahsi finally agrees to be yuvi's partner in the project and shes looking at sam's eyes and thinking how cutee he is and then she looks at yuvi's eyes and a shiver runs down her spineeeeeeeeeee...☺️☺️☺️....oh my god....this is it...this is what love is......☺️...they are unaware ignorant or in an utter state of denial but these small things are so sooo soo proff enough that they are smitten by each other..☺️...i mean she getting a shiver by looking at someone's eyes hten it has to be yuvi's eyes where she always tries to find a refleciton of herself..☺️☺️
and oh my god that ahsi sonya part waaaaaaaaas🤣mohatarma meri ilteja toh suniyeeeeeeeee🤣aapse mulakaat ka luft uthane aayi hun🤣shucksssssss shucks and umraoo jaaaaaaaaaan🤣oh my god usually ahsi is the one to send her mum into a totla toss but osnya killed her this timeeeeee🤣this was so amazing sur so so amazing i just adoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee the momyy dotty jodi like hellllllllll😳😳
i must again say sur awesme awesme awesme awesmeeeeeeee😳😳😳its so well written that i could visualize every single sceneeeeeeee😳😳😳and am soooooooooooo glaaaaaaaaaad u haven't kept ay as a couple😳😳lthe fic might be a "remix" oriented but all i can see is ay ay ay and ayyyyyyy😳😳and trust me am loving every single bit of thisssssss😳😍
thaaaaaaanx for this awesome ficcy sur thaaaaaaaaaanx soo soo much and kepe continuing soooooooon soooooooon soooooooooooon now that i wld finsih the rmeaining part by tonight itsef i so wnt be bale to waitttttttttt for the next part so u better ocntinue jaldi jaldiiiiiiiii😃😳
loveee youuuuuuuuuuuu
big huggyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy