Dhoom dhamaal!I Updated-part 21 Pg21 - Page 9

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komzie

arrey!!Yeh kya ho gaya!!! 😕 Accha...jis din i posted the chapter na...us din beech mein net cut gaya tha..n uske baad kal aaya hai...toh i guess post nahinhua hoga...im so so so sorry komzie!! 😳 😕 Anyways this is the next chapter!!Hope u njoy it!!

Chapter 9
So Uvs going to look for ashi...he stands at the gate and contemplates....
Uv:Agar main door se andar gaya toh watchman mujhe pakad sakta hai.....i think ill go from the back n get into ashis room from the window.....
he goes to the back of maurya...theres a lot of jhaad jhankaar..as in jungle type at the back....hes standing and scrutinising a tree when all of a sudden the leaves abouve his head russle....he looks up and PLOP!!Sumthing drops down into his hands.....

actually its a someone.....he almost losses his balance trying to catch the person....he steadies himself and looks at who it is.....

ASHI!!!!!
uv xclaims...tum...tum...yeh...yeh jhaad pe..wat the hells going on????
Ashi:Oh ho dufus!!!Main escape kar rahi thi!!!Us cyco watchman ne mujhe apne hi room mein bolt kar diya tha...taaki main aur sleep walking na kar sakoon!!!!
Uv:Kya!!??
Ashi:Haan...all thanx to u n ur non xistant brains....tumhare leadership skills bahut dekh liye...tumse accha toh koi bandar bhi humein party tak pahuncha deta without me having to do all this!!!!

shes quite for sumtime...uvs carefully watching over her..observing the immense anger hung on her gorgeous face...He feels the need to be silent...he wants to just watch over her...to feel her presence....to be at peace with her.....
suddenly ashis aware of his stare..she looks up at him and says:Hello!!Mr.heman..party ke liye stamina nahin bachaana kya??aise hi mujhe pakde rahe toh mujhe tumhe uthake party mein le jaana padega!!!!Put me down!!!
Uv is suddenly snapped back into reality ...he gently puts her down....aaa...haan...haan...chalo..lets go...He gives her his hand...she looks at it..n then at him...n says:Du-uh!!Main khud chal sakti hoon..my legs r not broken!!
n she walks off....uv looks after her...smiles to himself.....n then follows her....

ashis a little ahead of uv and shes muttering to herself.....Heman kahin ka....samajhta kya hai apne aap ko...i hope iski wajah se i dont miss the party....nincompoop kahin ka....

Shes walking away n is so lost in her thoughts that shes just walking on...suddenly sumone pulls her and pins her to the wall....
and before she can react a hand clamps her mouth shut!!!!
Its uv ofcourse....
ashis gives him a "Give-me-an-xplanation-or-u-r-dead!!"look....
uv whispers:Watchman bahar aagay hai...woh us corner pe khada hai...agar usne humein dekh liya toh weve had it...
ashi rolls her eyes and shruggs her shoulders..its a HEY BHaggu!!xpression...suddenly a twig snaps near their feet....
the watchman turns n looks.....he starts to walk towards them...
Uv n ashi hold their breath....uv moves closer to ashi...and into the shadows....they r standing absolutely close to each other...the undercurrent of anxiety builds up sparks b/w them...they look into each others eyes...savouring the moment....reading thru each others minds and hearts and souls.....

the watchman hits the table accidently with his stick and ashis hand clutches uvs hand with all its might....
uv returns her grip with a reassuring squeeze......

the watchmans closing in on them.....hes only a few steps away.....
suddenly the telephone kept at the table rings and the watchmans attention gets diverted towards it....he rushes to it and picks it up...
wm:Heeloo!!!Kaisan baa!!!????HUm toh bahut acche hain ihaan pe.....
Ashi n uv breath a sigh of relief...they let go of each others hands....and ashi collapses on the floor with a heart felt HEY BHAGGU!!!!That was close!!!
Uv peeps again n sees the wtchmans back is towards them.....
He whispers to ashi...abhi chance hai...lets go!!!
He looks down at her...and gives her his hand....
She loos at it for a sec...n then at uv...n takes his hand.....
Abd ashi n uv make their escape as the watchmans talking:Haan haan...aur amma se kehna humri phikar na karien....aur raampyari abhi bhi 15lt doodh deti hai ki nahin??!!!!


Once outside the gate ashis soo relieved she starts laughing
Ashi:Hey BHaggu!!!Yeh watchman na!!!!pata nahin kaunse planet se aaya hai!!!wrong time pe wrong entry maarna ise kehte hain!!!
Uv:Ya rite....
then they fall silent...they walk along the deserted road....letting go of their hands....
uvs lost in his own thoughts...trying to find a meaning to the feelings which erupt everytime hes with ashi.....
ashi on the other hand is chiding herself.....How cud she have let down her guard....how cud she...how cud she not resist to uvs charm......
Why did this always happen to her....y with every look of his did she feel her heart getting bigger than her body????Why did she get a cold shiver down her spine everytime he brushed against her...or touched her....

finally they reached the place.....
they get in and everyone surrounds them...with xclamations if Ashi!!uv!!Kahaan reh gaye the tun dono!! n Kya hua!???Sab theek toh hai...
Ashi:Relax ppl..everythings just fine.....lets enjoy the party!!

Thats it!!Hope u guyz liked it!!Do give me ur feedback!!
Luv
Sur

OMG
sur this was jus gr8 !!! too gud man 😃
loved the timing,romance ..... evrythin was fab reee
simply superb 😳 😳 😃

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abhi pls cont sooon PLEASEEEE !!!!!!


ps : sur i love ur sigge 😉

wooow me the 1st one to reply !!! 😃

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The watchman was Bihaari???? LOLOLOLZZZZ... Rampyaari abhi bhi 15 liter doodh deti hai ki nahi!!!! Hey bhaggu! That was classic!!!! Hats off yaar. Amazing! You're too good!!! Continue soon!!!

Love you

Komz

Originally posted by: cool_snehal

OMG
sur this was jus gr8 !!! too gud man 😃
loved the timing,romance ..... evrythin was fab reee
simply superb 😳 😳 😃

👏

abhi pls cont sooon PLEASEEEE !!!!!!


ps : sur i love ur sigge 😉

Hey thanx a lot snehal!!!Im glad u liked it!!n ya i will definetly cint soon as i have holz goin on so it is quite possible!!n thanx 4 likin my siggy..it was a amature attempt at making one..im glad u liked it!!😛

Originally posted by: AshiYuvi4life

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The watchman was Bihaari???? LOLOLOLZZZZ... Rampyaari abhi bhi 15 liter doodh deti hai ki nahi!!!! Hey bhaggu! That was classic!!!! Hats off yaar. Amazing! You're too good!!! Continue soon!!!

Love you

Komz

Hey thanx a lot komzie!!!Usually watchmans r either nepaliesor biharis na..i mean usually they show them to b these...so i thought y not add to the fun!!😆

Ill definelty cont soon!!!Thanx 4 liking it!!!

awesome work surbhi I was w8ing for this part for long time and I hope ki next part ke liya itna wait nahi karna padega btw tu kahan se aise funny thoughts lati hai mujhe bhi bata main bhi apne writing skills achche(better) kar lungi aur tera total ashi style (that jhaad se kudna wala) makes me read your fic again an again 👏 .Main already iss part ko 5 times read kar chuki hoon to meri madness ko rokna ke liya post next part soon

Ha ha ha!!!Thanx soo much gungun!!!n mere tips teri writing ko better banayenge??No chance!!Tu khud itna accha likhti hai ki u dont need any tips at all!!!N jo kuch seekha hai remix se hi seekha hai..i just remeber the gud old days of remix n write my fics...im so glad u like it!!!N not to worry..agla chapter bas do teen din mein post ho jaayega n its got more excitment cuming so watch out!!!
Luv
Sur

heyyyyyyyyyyyyyy surrrrrrrrrrrrrr!!! sorry for disaapering! wasn't well! n as m bak now, just read ur last part!! its amazingggggggggggggg yaar!!! u described ashi-yuvi realtionship so well! depicted their emotions so nicely yaar!!! just loved it!! plz do continue soon re! w8ing for the next part like nething!