what will happen..............fic.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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after tia n ranny broke up i thought of writing a fic.

after what tia said to ranny.he broked down completely.he did not knew why tia told to him like this.he wanted an answer from tia.he went to his room....................

in the room tia was crying bitterly.her angles kept questioning what happened to her,but shw did not gave any reply to them.

suddenly there was a knock at the door.........

meher-kaun hai???

ranny-hum ranny.

tia was shocked to here his voice.she said to herself.now what he wants from tia.

tia-angles ranny ko keh do yahan se chala jaya.tia ko usse koi baat nahi karni.

ranny heard this and said......

ranny-tia humme aapse bahut zarrori baat karni hai.kuch sawal ke jawab chahiye hume.(in sad voice,even he was crying)

pri-tia kya hua hai?tum ranny se baat kyun nahi karna chati?

how is it guyz.reply to this.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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its real sweet continue soon 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ya its really cute n sweet plz cont asp 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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its nice pleazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon asap.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ITS very good but are you writing two fics at the same time???????
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thnxxxxxxxxx so much for writing it atleat imaginary we can see them like this
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ya 😭 atleast in imaginary we can give thandak to our mann😭 😭 😭 if it happened like this it would be so nice
btw you write very well.continue fast 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey thanx guyz for complementing.so here is the next part.

ranny was stiil standing outside.he was hurt and little confused also.

ranny-tia plz darwaza kholiye.itne badi saza hume mat dijiye jo humne kiya hi nahi hai.

ranny was not knowing about the letter.

tia got angry and said to herself.

tia-what???ye ranny apne ap ko samajhta kya hai.ye jhoot kyun bol raha hai tia se.pehle wo letter likhta hai aur bad main tia ko hurt karke sorry bolta hai.

pri and meher were helpless about it.they did not know what to do.

tia-meher!ranny ko bolo yahan se chala jai.tia usse baat nahi karna chati.(in an angry tone).

meher opened the door........she saw ranny crying bitterly.

meher-ranny plz tum yahan se chale jao.tia bahut hi bure mood main hai.wo kisse se bhi baat nahi karegi.plz

ranny-nahi meher hum tia se baat karke hi jayenge.

sorry guyz for such a small part.i will cont tom.comment on this guyz.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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cool yaar .cont tom at 12.00am 😆 phast phast
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey only two of them commented on my fic.i think u all are not liking my fic.should i stop writing this fic.plz reply and also comment guyz.

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