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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey kutie your fic is wondeerful amazin cont soon 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#12
wow kutie...cont asap...dyin 2 know wat happenes next 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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here is my next part guyz........................

meher-ranny plz tum jao yahan se.

ranny-meher kya aap plz hume kuch waqt ke liye akale chod dengi plz?

meher-ranny.

ranny-meher plz.hamara tia se aaj baat karna bahut hi zaroori hai.

meher-ok!pri lets go.

ranny-thank u meher.

ranny closes the door,and goes and sits besides tia.

he just keeps looking at her and tia dont bothers to look at him even for once.

ranny-tia???

tia-ranny tia ko tumse koi baat nahi karni.behter yahi hoga ki tum yahan se chale jao.

ranny-hum apne sawalon ka jawab liye beger nahi jayenge.

tia-ok?agar tum yahan se nahi jate ho to tia hi yahan se chali jaati hai.kyunki tia ko tumahri puzzles ke answer dene ka koi shok nahi hai.

and she starts moving from there,but ranny cathes her hand and doesnt let her go.

tia-ranny tia ko chodo.

ranny-chod denge tia par hamare saare jawab milne par.

ranny really catches tia very tightly.

ranny-kyun kyun kia aapne hamare saath aisa tia?kyun?hum aapse kitna pyar karte hai.apne jaan se bhi jyadi hum aapse pyar karte hain,khudse zyada hum aappar vishwas karte the hum.kyun aapne hamara bharosa toda tia kyun?

tia is shocked to hear this,as he is not knowing anything about the letter,as she has only commited mistake,as he has not done anything,she gets really angry and then.......................

sorry guyz u all have to wait.i will post soon,dont worry.and plzzzzzzzzzzz comment guyz.

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Posted: 19 years ago
#14
haan yaar its nice...plzz cont soon 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#15
hey this is my last part guyz,b'coz u reall are not commenting on my fic.so if u guyz will comment i will surely cont.
tia is really shocked.

tia-what??what do u understand of urself.galti tumne ki aur pachtay tia,woh break up tumne pehle kiya aur woh bhi pachtay tia.u know what ranny,tia was blind ki tia ne tumse pyaar kiya.

ranny is left shocked.tia just frees her hand and go out of her room furiously leaving ranny confused.

on his way to his room,he kept thinking what was his fault,he did not break up with tia,then why she told to him this way.

he reached his room,there varun was waiting for him.

varun-ranny tum kahan the.kabse tumahra wait kar raha hoon.

ranny was not listening what varun was saying.

v-hello?(he said by shooking him).

ranny-haan?kya huwa banna.

v-tumhe kya huva ranny.

r-humahra tia se break up ho gaya hai.

v-what?kab.kaise aur kyun.

r-hume is baare main koi baat nahi karni hai banna.(and he goes to sleep)

next morning...................

tia is walking in the corridor with her angles.and she gets bonces with a guy.

he is tall.has light green eyes.fair and handsome and his name is 'rahul'.

tia-sorry!

raul is stunned to see tia.and then..............

hey guyz if u will not comment i will not cont this fic.so if u all want that i should cont this fic,so plzz comment.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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omg it's awsummmmmmmmmmmmmmmm a twist plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont n yes whoever will read ur fic will surely comment plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont
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Posted: 19 years ago
#17
very nice Kutie.. 😳

plz dont stop..

n continue soon

really curious to knw wht happens next 😊

Divya
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Posted: 19 years ago
#18
really nice and pld dnt stop tis rahul guy hmmm intersting 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
#19
really nice and pld dnt stop tis rahul guy hmmm intersting 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
#20
its really good.and intersting twist 😆 😆 😆
continue fast kutie we are reading it 😛

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