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Posted: 19 years ago
#31
its very nice pleazzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do continue soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#32
muahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!! 👏 love seeing r jealous 😆 v😆
cont fast.its awesome
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Posted: 19 years ago
#33
this one is also rocking pls continue
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Posted: 19 years ago
#34
hey guyz thanx for ur replies,i will write the next part soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#35

okkkkkkkk guyz so here is my next part.

ranny walks angrily out of the canteen seeing tia with rahul.ashi n uv saw him and they also tried to call them,but in vain.

uv-ye ranny ko kya huwa?

ashi-mujhe kaise pata,main koi antar yami hun kya,u know that sadhu maharajas?tum mujhse kyun pooch rahe ho?

uv-hey wacho just relax ok?

just then ashi sees tia sitting with a guy laughing and chit chatting with him.

ashi-hey uv.woh dekho tia.........

uv-hey tia ke saath ladka kaun hai.pehli baar dekha hai usse.

ashi-ohoh?ab mujhe samaj main aa raha hai.ranny tia ko us ladke ke saath deker jealous feel kar raha tha.chalo tia se milte hain.

ashi n uv go where tia n rahul are sitting.

ashi-hey!hi timbo.

tia-hi!ashi.

uv-hey tia kaisi ho tum.

tia-tia is fine.tia ko kya huwa hai.

uv-haan tia aaj remix ki meeting hain shed main 8 baje,so be there okk.

tia-ya sure,tia remix ko kaise bhul sakti hai.tia will be there.ya bye the way ye rahul hai tia ka dost,aaj he maurya main aaya hai.hamari claas main hai.

ashi n uv-hi rahul.

uv-hey tia tum rahul ko lekar remix ki meeting ke liye kyun nahi leke aati.

ashi-hey right timbo.pehli baar is psyco nai sahi baat ki hai.ok then bye,we are getting late.

rahul-hey tia ye remix kya hai.

tia explains everything to rahul.

tia-to tum tia ke saath aoge naa.

rahul-ofcorse,why not.

in the meanwhile ranny was lying on his bed in his room,he was wondering that tia and rahul was dancing together,very close dance n ranny is standing alone besides n watching them with jealousy.

he came back from his senses when ashi n uv came to his room.

ranny-bana aap kya huwa kuch problem hai.

uv-nahi kuch bhi to nahi.

ashi-haan thakur hum to sirf ye batane aaye hain ki aaj remix ki meeting he bilkul 8 baje,so be there ok.

uv-aur haan hamare saath ek ladka bhi hai.

ranny-ladka,kaunsa ladka?

ashi-woh tia ka dost hai.

as he heard tia's name he was thinking that it he must be the same guy which is with tia now when he saw him in the canteen.

uv-i think woh tia me interested hai.(he was waiting to see ranny reaction.)

ashi-ya aur humne to use canteen men dekha.they were looking so cute,hai na uv.

uv-right ashi aisa lakta tha ki woh bahut barso se ek dusre ko jaante ho,u know close talk.

ranny was really feeling very very very jealous.he did not know what to do.

so what will ranny do.....................................

this was my next part and plz comment on this.

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Posted: 19 years ago
#36
its very nice hope to c such scenes in remix also and do continue soonasap.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#37
its very nice 👏
please continue soon 😃
you know what...something like this should happen in remix...it will be fun 😆 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#38
hey guyz only 3 replies,its so bad.i am really feeling very sad.guyz plz reply yaar.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#39
pleazzzzzzzzzzzz continue fast we r reading it.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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pleazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue fast asap with longer parts.

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