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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey guyz sirf tum logo ne hi comment kiya hai,baki koi bhi comment nahi kar raha hai.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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kutie pls continue na atleast 4 those who r reading it plssss a humble req from my side 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey veo i will atleast who all are reading have commented,i am happy for them.i will surely cont.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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HEY YOUR FIC IS AWESOM ITS GR8 PLZ DO CONT 👏 👏 👏 👏 [ 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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so here goes the next part.as many people have commented i thought to cont.

SO RAHUL WAS STUNTED TO SEE TIA.AND HE THOUGHT,

she is so beautiful,like a princes in a fairy tale.i have never seen this kind of a girl.

tia-excuse me?tia is very sorry.i think u are not hurt.

he was busy seeing tia.he did not replied to her question then.

tia-tia is sorry.

rahul-hey its perfectly alright,par bye the way ye tia kaun hai...?

meher-yahi hai tia (pointing towards tia)

iska naam bhi kitna acha hai.tiaaa.

rahul-excuse me tia?kya aap mujhe principal ke office tak le jaa sakti hain,kyunki main yahan pe naya hoon.

tia-sure.par puh-leese tum tia ko tum kehkar pukar sakte ho.is hum aur aap se tia ko habit ho chuki hai aur tia ise taang ho gayi hai.(remembering b'coz ranny used to say this words)

rahul-sure.why not,to chale.

tia-yes,angles tum log canteen jao tia rahul ko jumbo ke office tak chod ke aati hai.

m n p-okk tia.

tia-lets go.

rahul was an art student and was in tia's class.he felt happy about it when jumbo told him that he was in tia's class b'coz that time tia was there with rahul.

rahul-thanx tia meri madat karne ke liye.

tia-its ok,ab tum tia ke frnd ban chuke ho na?

rahul-yes ofcorse.to chalo hamahri frndship ke liye main tumhe aaj treat deta hoon.aur plz tum mana mat karna.

tia-ok lets go.

tia and rahul go in the canteen and sit where meher and pri are sitting.

rahul-to kya loge tum sab.kyunki aaj main treat dene wala hoon.

meher-tum sach keh rahe ho

rahul-yes ofcorse.tia se pooch lo.

tia-right angles.

meher-hey but mujhe aur pri ko abhi kidhar jaana hai.

tia-kahan angle.

pri-woh tia hum tumhe aakar batange.ok

tia-but babes.

but they both run from there.

meanwhile ranny and varun come and sit to the next table were tia and rahul are sitting.ranny did not notice as he was siding backwaeds.

varun-hey ranny ye tia ke saath woh ladka kaunsa hai.

as ranny listened tia's name he looked back.

varun-kaafi smart hai hain naa?

ranny looked angrily at varun.

varun-me......r.....a matlab tumse woh smart nahi hai.

ranny was very jealous after seeing tia with rahul.he thought to himself.......

how can tia date sumone else.tia aap hamare saath aisa kaise kar sakti hain.anger started boiling inside him.but he controlled his anger,jealousy and walked off from there.

hey guyz tell me hw was this part.first time i have written little bit long.so enjoy,and i bet u if u all will comment then the next part will be rocking.it is my promise.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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this 1 is also rocking
thus is 4 u 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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first promise ull continue with tis fic coz its rocking u know y i luv 2 see ranny jealous 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey kitne kam logon ne reply kiya.very sad.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome...
please write the next part soon and clear the misunderstanding between the 2
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey kutie it is rocking bouncing outta ythe world i donot read too much tia ran fan-fics but this one is superb 👏 👏

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