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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey guyz i will surely write by tonight,so u all have to wait.and the next part is going to rocking.just wait and read guyz.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#42
U TOLD u will continue tonite so pleazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz hurry up and continue fast asap with longerparts.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#43
ya make it little longer .plz
Edited by amritafan - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#44

HERE IS MY NEXT PART GUYZ.........................

IT was 8pm.they had thier remix meeting in the shed.all had come except tia n rahul.ashi n uv was very much eagerly waiting for tia to come with rahul and then to see ranny reaction,and ranny was as usual annoyed with tia's lateness.

ranny-ye tia bhi na.kitni der ho gayi hai ab tak aayi kyun nahi.

uv-hey dude chill aati hi hogi,hum sab jaante hain ki tia ko kitna time lagta hai.

ashi-ya right.lo aagi timbo.

tia was coming with rahul very smilingly and happily.

ranny was shocked to see rahul here and he was more shocked when he saw tia with him.

tia-sorry guyz tia ko late ho gaya.actually tia aur rahul shopping karne ko gaye the.

it was another shock to ranny.he was looking down he was not able to face them coz he felt sad and also bit jealous.

ranny did not handle this anymore and he stormed at tia...........

ranny-excuse me miss tia.ahuja,shayad aap bhul rahi hai ki hum yahan remix ke bare mein discuss karne aate hai,nahi koi shopping tips ke bare main.

rahul did not controlled what ranny told to tia b'coz sumwhere or the other he had feelings for tia.

rahul-hey mister,hoe dare u to talk to tia like this.tumhe tamiz nahi hai ki ek ladki se kaise baat ki jaati hai.

ranny was astonished to see rahul defending ranny.ashi n uv was sumwhere happy how the story is going,b'coz they felt that ranny is feeling jealous.

ranny-aapko bich main bolne ki koi jaroorat nahi hai.aap isme nahi pade to behtar rahega.

tia-ranny!how can u talk with rahul this way.he is new here.and u have to apologize to him.

ranny did not have any words to say.he thought to himself.

how tia can talk with me this way,

why is she defending rahul,

what is there between him and tia,

she cant do with me like this.

she cant live me likethis.

tia walked from the shed angrily and ranny ran behind her for the answers that he wnat from her.

okkkkkkkkkk guyz this was my part,hw did u all like it.plzz reply. n comment.

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Posted: 19 years ago
#45
hey guyz c'mon reply yaar.tum logon ke liye hi to mein likhte hoon yaar.dil se jawaab do sab log.plzzzz.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#46
hey guyz c'mon reply yaar.tum logon ke liye hi to mein likhte hoon yaar.dil se jawaab do sab log.plzzzz.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#47
IT WAS SO NICE..RANVEER WAS KEWL N SO WAS TIA..PLZ CONT FAST! 😊 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#48
hey guyz i am feeling so bad that u all are not giving any response to my fic.i think i should stop writing anymore.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#49
hey how dare you discontinue your fic..??????????????????
ITS JUST THE MOST COOLEST FIC...PLZ PLZ CONT FAST!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#50
hey guyz i am ready with the next part but unless u all dont comment on the previous part i will not write the next part.plz comment guyz.

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