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Posted: 19 years ago
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Sorry for the small part guyz..i will try to make it long the next time..plz read and comment..
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Posted: 19 years ago
#82
👏 very nice 😃

cont soon
and can u keep the letters a lil big? they are too smallt o read 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
#83
thanx vinitha..and surely i will keep it big..
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#86

okkk guyz this is the last part i am writing b'coz no one is interested to read my fic..😭

As they were about to go..they heard sumone's footsteps....

tia-ohh..tia's god..kaun ho sakta hai..

they saw sumone's shadow near the door..they all got little scared but did not show in thier faces..

ashi shouted who is there...

there was none othere than........................................................ .soniya ray....

ashi got shocked...

ashi-mom aap yahan kya kar rahi hai..woh bhi is waqt...

s.r-woh mum.mum main to sirf tum logon ki rehaersals dekhne aay thi.

tia-oh.soniya aunty aapne to tia ko dara hi diya tha...

s.r-sorry darling..anyways kya tum logon ki practice khatam to nahi hui naa..

ashi-nahi mon..ho chuki hai....aap late ho..nw plzzz gooooooo...

s.r-ho gayi(wih sad face).

tia felt bad....

tia-nahi aunty practice to chal rahi thi...

all three of them looked at tia with surprise..

tia gave a innocently lets do it kind of look..

ranny-han soniya aunty humne to sirf ek hi para practice kiya ha...kyun uv..(signals him)

uv-ya right soniya aunty...

ashi is totally shocked...

s.r-thanx a lot darlings...

tia-our pleasure soniya aunty..

Ans all four of them practice boom once again...

soniya was very pleased to see them..

s.r-wow..fab,,it was awesum..akhir ye song likha kisne hai..

ranny-aunty hamahri princes ne..yani tia ne..

s.r-wow tia..i don't believe it u have so creative mind..

tia feels little shy..

uv-aunty hum chate hain ki aap roz hamahra practice dekhne aaye..kyun ashi...(naughtily)

ashi-ya ofcorse(in a angry tone)

s.r-okk kids i have to go..see u tom...bye..

all four of them says bye to soniya..

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Posted: 19 years ago
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okk guyz this was the last part..i am stopping my fic..b'coz no one reads it and no one likes it..
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Posted: 19 years ago
#88
whattttttttttt..............don't do that..........

what do u think are we doing here replying to yr fic......yaar we reply coz we read it and like it......so take that thought outta yr mind and .,.........continue soon........we luv yr fic.... 😳 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#89
thanx a lot vanu..but only one reply..
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Posted: 19 years ago
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jus read the last part u posted now..

u're kidding, plz dun end this fanfic, u really hv sum dedicated readers out here

plzz its a request, dun end it

continue soon!

Divz

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