relationships - a fan fic,part 46,pg82 - Page 12

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Posted: 19 years ago
it was really very very very good
continue soon can't wait anymore please fast
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Posted: 19 years ago
how can u write so well?????????????????????????????
a lllllllllllooooooooooovvvvvveeeeeeeellllllllllyyyyyyyyyy
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Posted: 19 years ago
continue plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz👏
Edited by remix_rox - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
FANTASTIC!! AWESOME!! AMAZING!!
plzz continue soooooooon naaaaaaa
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Posted: 19 years ago
Nishi iam waiting.........plz continue sooooooooooon
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Posted: 19 years ago
wow.................this is amazin. I jus read the whole thing.......way to go!!!!!!!! continue it asap 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
Later during evening:
Ashi in her room is trying to sleep, but just cannot .she is angry with uv for behaving like an "idiotic stupid "!! vrinda is trying to calm her down, but is failing miserably
Vrinda: ashi!! please go and speak to uv!!
Ashi: kyun??why should I go and speak to that monkey!!
Vrinda: taaki sari misunderstandings mit jaaye!!

Ashi : look mate maine usse nahi kaha kuch bhi understand karne ke liye !! galati uski hain ki usne sochne ki galati ki !! u know what ?? jab bhi woh kuch sochta hain , kuch na kuch galat hi sochta hain ! he should be give the title of most misunderstanding person !! sab kuch galat hi sochta hain !!use kyaa pata ki Neal mere liye kitna important hain ?? aur harsh bhi !!kisise ek minute baat karna bhi mana hain !! yeh maurya se to humara st.marks hi accha tha ! kam se kam waha aise log toh nahi hain !!

Vrinda : ashi ......
Ashi:please mate ab tum us fake heman ki tarafdaari mat karo !! use jo sochna hain woh soche !!mujhe koi farak nahi padta ...
Vrinda : farak nahi padta ??
Ashi :tumhe kam sunaayi deta hain kyaa ?? haan I don't care !! do u get that ??? I don't !! and now leave me alone !!
Vrinda :ashi ....
Ashi:hey bhaggu !! tum mujhe akela nahi chodogi ?? fine .....main hi yahaa se chali jaati hoo .......and yes don't u dare to follow me !! alrite !! and plzzzz us heman se door rehna varna tumhe hi misunderstandophobia ho jaayegi !! (and leaves )
Vrinda :hey bhagwaan !! yaa uske bhaggu !! please kuch kijiye !! (just then khushi enters )
Khushi :kahaa hain ??
Vrinda :kahi chali gayi !! gusse main thi !! in a bad mood !! and agar ab uv uske saamne aaya na toh ...toh woh gaya !! he is dead !! use koi nahi bacha sakta !! uska murder hone se koi nahi bacha sakta !!
Khushi : (goes and holds vrinda )vrinda ?? tum theek toh ho ?? are u fine ?? tumhari tabeeyat toh theek hain ?? what are u going on blabbering ??
Vrinda : u know what ?? is ashi aur uv ne meri life ko ek tension circle bana diya hain !! jab yeh log fight karte the .....tabhi mujhe tension hoti thi !! and jab ek doosre se pyaar karte hain ....even then ..........
Khushi :kyaa ............tumhe kaise pata ki woh usse pyaar karti hain ??
Vrinda :kyunki usne khud kaha tha !!
Khushi :accha !! (thinking of something ) .......(after some time ) chale vrinda !! tumhe samajh main aa gaya na ki kya karna hain ??
Vrinda :haa ........par how will I ask meher to .......
Khushi :alrite !! I will ask her for the favour !! (and both leave )

Meanwhile on the other side :
Yuvi's walking like a zombie on the corridor .
Naina : hello !! ...........uv !! (running behind ,finally reaches him ,pats him ) hi !! ...tumhe sunaayi nahi deta ??
Uv : what ?? what the hell do u mean by that ??
Naina :I was calling your name so loudly from behind and u couldn't hear ??
Uv :why should I ?? and why the hell are u behind me ??
Naina : (taken aback ) hello !! ........main koi tumhare peeche veeche nahi padi hoo !! and waise bhi main kyun tumhare peeche padongi ??
Uv: then ?? tumhe us wacko ne bheja hain naa ??
Naina :wacko ?? yeh kaun hain ??
Uv :aap logon ki annie !!
Naina : hello ! u call her wacko again .......main tumhari daant tod doongi !! we cant tolerate anyone calling her by such names !! uska naam hain naa "anvesha " or else "annie " and what u guys call her ........emm........."ashi " use inhi naam se bulaya karo !! get that mr ??
Uv : tum log ko kyaa problem hain ?? sabhi mere peeche kyun pade hain ??
Naina :problem hume nahi !! tum donon ko hain !!
Uv : kyaa ??
Naina : haa .......u both annie and u yuvi !!
Uv :what do u mean ??
Naina : mean .....average kuch nahi hain !! I just wanted to tell u that atleast tum apne brains use karo !! use to aadat hain gussa karne ka .......but atleast u should have behaved sensibly !!
Uv : oh !! thanks for your advice ......but no thanks !! mujhe iski zaroorat nahi !!
(just the Neal enters )
Neal : (holds uv's shoulder )u need it !! do u get that ??
Uv : oh !! ab tum bhi !! but listen guys ........I DON'T NEED TO LISTEN TO YOUR LECTURES !!
Neal : u have to !! u don't have a choice !!
Uv : cut the crap !! what do u mean by that ?? (really angry at Neal )
Neal : I know it uv ki tum annie se kyun naraaz ho ? just because she told that she loves me the most ?? but use your brains !!
Uv : oh !! now u wanna make me feel bad by repeating what she told ??
Neal : no !! why the hell should I hurt u ?? agar tumhe hurt karonga toh annie mujhe kabhi maaf nahi karegi !!
Uv : kyaa ??
Neal : haa !! did u even think for a sec before jumping into conclusion abt me and annie ?? I know each and every word what u ppl spoke !! get that ??
Uv : oh !! so now usne aake tumse meri shikayat ki ??
Neal : usne kuch nahi kaha .........and I know she wont even say a word !! but I know everything coz even I was there when u ppl fought !! u ppl just didn't notice ! ............now uv .....i need to speak to u !!
Uv : why ?? ab kyaa kehna hain ??
Neal : right now no questions from your side!! And naina u better leave us alone !!
Naina: par .......
Neal : do what I say .........and yes make sure that annie ko pata na chale ki main aur uv baat kar rahe hain !! she shouldn't ever come to know abt this !!
Naina: alrite!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
nishi you are just great its toooooooooooooooo cool 😉 😉 😉 .
Keep it up & eagerly waiting for next part. 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
Damn cool...its getting to a really exciting point now. Plz continue soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
😉 super duper cool puhleese continue

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