relationships - a fan fic,part 46,pg82 - Page 14

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Posted: 19 years ago
oh pls common post the nxt part really soon pls waitng desperately
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Posted: 19 years ago
its awesome n suffiii as always 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
fantastic...fantabulous..all words will fall short
plz plz continue fast
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Posted: 19 years ago
plzzz continue it is really good
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Posted: 19 years ago
ok guys since its new year and sunnys birthday ,so two parts together !!

but the sad news is that i will not be able to post a single line till 17th jan !! kyunki us waqt computer ke pas aana mana hain 😆 😆 😆

hope u like it and offcourse

happy new year !!!!!!! 😛 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
Uv is sitting and next to him is vrinda; Khushi comes and sits next to him on the other side.
Khushi: uv!!..........kuch bhi kehne se pehle mujhe yeh jaana hain hi tum aakhir kyaa chahate ho ??
Uv : (lifts his head ) main to sirf ashi ko chahata hoo !!and I don't need anyone else
Khushi :u love her ??
Vrinda :Khushi !!tumhe yeh poochna tha ??........tumhe dikta nahi ??bilkul majnu jaisa haal bana rakha hain !! (pats uv)
Khushi : uv !! u need to answer
Uv :yes !! par .......
Khushi :par war kuch nahi !! u love her ........then go and tell her !!
Uv:its not that easy !! do u get that ??
Khushi :why ?? apne feeling ko kehne ke liye kyaa asaan nahi ??
Uv :kyunki ...........because ...........ashi nahi samjhegi !!infact uske dil main emotions naam ki kuch bhi nahi !!
Khushi : oh ! u feel that she is emotionless ??
Uv:yes !!
Khushi : (with a sarcastic smile)u know what ??tum log usse jaante hi nahi !! woh bahaar se jitni strong hain ......dil se ...utni hi sensitive aur caring hain !!varna .......usne joh mere liye kiya .......woh toh koi nahi kar paata ........woh bhi ...........ek ............ek .........orphan ke liye !!!
Uv and vrinda : what ?(with a shock to hear that )

Khushi :yes !! main ek orphan hoo ..............ek aisi life jiski kisi ko zaroorat nahi tha !! not even my parents ........actually mother supreme tells that I was abandoned in a garbage dump !! ...............(trying to ctrl herself)........phir ...kisine mujhe us orphanage main pohuncha diya !!......then when we were two years old ........tab annie aur Neal aaye the wahaa .......unke parents ke saath kisi function ke liye ........thats when annie aur Neal ki zidd ki wajah se .....mujhe apne saath le gaye . u know what ?? never did I feel the need for anything in my life .....coz I was treated as one of them by everyone till ......till school !! tabhi .......school main mujhse sab door jaate the ........coz they were told by their parents ki I was a bad omen .......ek garbage !!but annie ne kabhi mujhe nahi choda , uske zidd ki wajah se sonia maasi ne mujhe legally adopt kiya ......neal ko to is baare main kuch nahi pata tha ....coz he was a boy naa .........always cricket yaa football !! phir bhi people didn't stop taunting me ...........kabhi kabhi toh aisa lagta tha ki mujhe yahaa pe hona hi nahi tha !! I felt like killing myself .........coz such hard words toh koi bhi nahi sun sakta !! but .........but ........hamesha annie ne mujhe sambhala hain !! she has given me everything ........name, a dignified life , right to dream , right to live in this world ,a home ,a family .......everything and u say that she is emotionless ??

Uv was speechless . he couldn't believe what he had heard !! ashi was an actual angel to people .he had seen her fight for MP but he always thought that it was because MP was her roommate , but he later remembered the way she took care of leo ,while she could have easily have shooed him away !!
Khushi : (comes near to uv )uv u know what ?? I know her better than u ! she never expresses her feelings to others , chahe woh maasi ki taraf ho ,yaa tumhari taraf !! only people whom she expresses her love is towards me and Neal !!woh apne andar ki sensitive aur caring insaan ko chupa ke rakti hain !! uska pyaar jataane ka tareeka bilkul alag hain !!
Uv : hmmmm...........
Khushi : u know what ?? agar tumhe use paana hain then u need to take the lead !! she is never going to tell u her feelings first ....after all u have hurt her ??
Uv :but ........ab bahut der ho gayi hain !!
Khushi : why ?? der kaha hui hain ?
Vrinda :yes Khushi !! it too late now !!
Khushi :why ??
Uv :coz it's almost 8:45 and mitra sir rounds ke liye aa rahe honge !! so its late !! (both uv and vrinda start laughing)
Khushi: (now angry and shocked ) tum log !! I will kill u both !! ek to madad karo aur ........
Uv :it was just a joke Khushi !! and btw thanks ..........that u came to help me out ........and never ever feel lonely here ........coz hum donon hain naa ??
Khushi : thanks uv ! and btw sirf thanks se kaam nahi chalega !! tumhe mera saath dena hoga ........ek plan hain !!
Uv:plan ???........anyways uske baare main kal baat karte hain !! abhi chalte hain !
While leaving
Khushi : (to uv and vrinda ) is baare main agar tum log ne galti se bhi annie ko kuch bhi kahaa then u both will be dead !!
Uv and vrinda : yes maam !!!!!! (All three leave)

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As soon as uv enters his room ,he sees Neal,varun,sid ,Ranveer and harsh waiting for him .
Ranveer :banaa ?? kahaa the aap ?? hum log toh aapko doondkar paagal ho gaye the !!
Uv:Ranveer dude !!dont worry !! I am fine !!
Sid :dude !!tum theek ho naa ??(comes and tries to test his forehead asthough he is testing his temperature )
Uv: (pushing his hand away)sid brother !! I am fine !!
Ranveer :where were u ??
Uv:aise hi akele tha ! u know sometimes I need to be alone ??
Ranveer :are u sure ??that u are fine ??(with a worried look)
Uv:yes dude !! and tum tension mat lo !! main bilkul theek ho !!
Varun :(remembers somethings ) Ranveer ,sid ,harsh ! I think u people must leave !!varna mitra sir ne pakad liya .........
Sid :yes dude !!
Ranveer :fine !! chale ?? and uv apna khayal rakhna ! (all three leave )
Uv : (comes to Neal ) Neal !! I am sorry for my behavior early this day !! I was a bit upset !!
Neal :its fine uv !! (thinks that Khushi had done what she had told him to )
Varun :guys !! please thoda sa toh rehem karo !! don't make soo much noise !! mujhe panda hain !!
Uv and neal glance at each other and with a wicked smile on his face ,uv goes to Varun and closes his book .
Uv :u know what ?? agar MP hoti to mr.padakoo Varun ko toh books ke baare main sochne ka time hi nahi milta !!
Varun :uv !!please .....
Uv:kyaa Varun ?? u have become soo boring and dull ! itna bhi mat pada karo !! thoda sa toh khud par reham karo !!
Varun : (finally gives up ) ok fine !! ab kyaa karu ?? vaise bhi main bore ho raha hoo !!
Uv: kuch mat karo !! ............em..........yeh lo mere kuch cd's !!inhe suno !!


On the other side ,Khushi and Naina are discussing something in their room .
Naina :yeh yuvraj bhi naa !! kitna sadelu kisam ka character hain !!
Khushi : naina !!tum aisa kyun keh rahi ho ??
Naina :kyunki whenever I see him naa ..........uska chehera ek .........ek.........poori ki tarah ..........no.............bada sa tamatar ki tarah hota hain !!red with anger !! u know what ??i have given him a new name "angry young man "!!!!!
Khushi :kyaaaaa?????...........angry young man ??? (and both start laughing )
Naina :btw .........neal ne usse baat ki ??
Khushi :tumhe kyaa lagta hain ??
Naina :pata nahi !!
Khushi :Neal ne nahi ,maine usse baat ki thi !!!
Naina :tumne ?? but ...............mujhe ek baat samajh main nahi aayi !!
Khushi :kyaa ??
Naina :aakhir tum log usse kyaa baat karna chahate ho ?? hum toh use jaaante bhi nahi !!
Khushi : yeh lo !! poori ramayan khatam huyi aur madam ab pooch rahi hain ki,aakir ram aur sita ka rishta kyaa hain !! .........tum itni badi bewakoof kaise ho sakti ho ?? kyaa bhagwaan ne tumhare sar ke ander bhoosa bharke bheja hain ??
Naina :kyaa ?? but maine toh koi ramayan nahi padi and i don't know what u are talking about !!
Khushi : yehi hoga !! Yehi hoga agar saara din is stupid comics' padti rahogi toh! Subah tumne Jo bhi kiya .......tumhare samajh main kuch nahi aaya???
Naina :maine toh wohi kiya ........jo tumne kaha tha !! wohi kaha jo tumne kaha !!
Khushi :naina !! tu jaake so jaa !! mere paas itni bhi patience nahi hain ki main ab tumhe sab kuch samjha saku !! kal subah sab bataaongi !!
Naina :par abhi kyun nahi ??
Khushi :kyunki .pehle mujhe yeh samajhna hain ,ki tumhe kaise samjhaao ? samjhi !!
Naina :haan !!goodnight !!

Meanwhile in ashi's room ,
Vrinda :ashi !! tum kaha chali gayi thi ?? tum toh shed main bhi nahi thi !!maine waha bhi jaake doonta tha !!
Ashi:pehle yeh bataao ki tum itni der kaha thi ??
Vrinda :main toh Khushi ke saath tumhe doond rahi thi !!
Ashi:oh !!
Vrinda :but tum kaha thi ??
Shyla : (with her stupid accent ) ashi mere saath thi !! woh actually ......hum dono corridor main mile and then later humne decide kiya ,ki hum bahar jaayenge .....i needed to buy some paint u know !!
Vrinda :oh !! I was so worried !!
Shyla :woh oh !! u need not vrinda !! kyunki shyla seth was there with ashi !!
Ashi : haa maate !! now fine ?? ab mujhe neend aa rahi hain !!
Vrinda :ok !! mujhe apna homework karna hain !goodnight !
Shyla :vrinda ......mujhe bhi karna hain !!shall I join you ??
Vrinda :offcourse !!(ashi goes to her bed and sleeps )

Well left something ?? oh yes !!!!!!! humare angels ka room !!
Tia : (talking to someone )don't worry aunty !! tia na sab kuch sambhal legi !!.......haan .......aap itni tension mat lejiye !!tia hainna ..............offcourse aunty ,aakhir tia ahuja hona koi aisi waisi baat nahi !! ok !bye !!
Meher :tia tumne keh to diya ki tum sambhal logi ........but kaise ??
Pri :haa .tia !! woh bhi us ashi ko !!
Tia :angels !!tum log itna tension mat lo ,varna tumhara skin kharab ho sakta hain !!vaise bhi tia ne soch liya ki tia ko kyaa karna hain !tia kal hi uv se baat karegi !!
Meher :are u sure tia ??
Pri :but tia !! tum ashi se baat kyun nahi karti ??
Tia :oh puhleez angel !! tia ko apna day ruin karna nahi hain .............us crackpot se baat karke !!and tia shayad yuvi ko samjha sakti hain ........but ashi ke liye ..........uff !! anyways angels ........goodnite !!

Meanwhile even Ranveer is thinking of talking to yuvi the next day !! and goes to sleep after watching sid roar .......oops .........snort like a lion !
Ranveer ,tia ,sid,Neal ,Khushi ,vrinda ................6 minds ,thinking of the same thing ..........but have different plans !! but bechare uv ko kyaa pata ki kal uske life ka sabse ..........confused day hoga !!!he is sleeping like a kid .........offcourse dreaming of his sweetheart !!but little does he know .......or his sweetheart knows what the next day is having for them ..............a much more confused one for yuvi..............a............aaaaaa.........to know it read the next part !! jo thodi .......sorry bahut der ke baad milega!
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Posted: 19 years ago
toooo gooood ....waiting for u eagerly.... 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
me too will miss u & your fan fic 😭 😭 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
nishi, pleaseeee cant u try a lil harder to continue? the day u've mentioned to continue is really toooooooooooooooo late. not fare, hum pe thoda to reham karo 😭

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